AlterInfernalAllius
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- Aug 4, 2017
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THat's basically it, yeah, Fujino has had to create more and more excuses, and as such plot-holes, to keep the plot from collapsing upon itself, especially since more characters were added to the mix. Liz was added to have another girl be 'NTR-ed', but he wanted to make a compelling plot for her and in doing so had to fill her with lots of inconsistencies and idiocy so it wasn't just him writing her being fucked by Inoda and fallen in a week as he's used to do, which...we know he's not the best at XP Basically, the more complex Fujino tries to make a plot, the more he causes plot-hole with the characters XD Suguha lucked out in that her 'excuse' for not directly exposing Inoda and Asuna ended up aligning with her being the only girl who still genuinely cares about Kirito, but in Rika/Liz's case is just her being stupid as fuck wanting to 'seduce' Kirito while also making sure Asuna is "stolen" so she "doesn't feel bad" when she inevitably 'steals her boyfriend', what a nice friend lmao.It's strange that Liz, for all her desire to take Kirito away, doesn't do anything about it at all. Liz doesn't care about Kirito's mental state at all, so she's already been able to make a video at the massage parlor several times and show it to Kirito. I think even cheating in the game was enough for Kirito to question his trust in Asuna. But at the same time, Liz continues to help Inoda's stupid plans throughout the game and is content with small moments with Kirito. It's like Fujino created a character who has a desire but no motivation - her wants Kirirto and goes with the flow, wants revenge on Inoda, but does nothing for it. A strange character. Obviously, if it wasn't for the idea of the harem, Liz wouldn't be needed at all in this game. Due to the harem originally planned, Fujino is forced to come up with some actions for Liz, but it turns out badly. Only more plot holes and questions appear.