RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.832] [Fujino]

[900bs]

there are people who come and ask for the complete CG without even playing

There are, and I am not sorry to give such a safe, such people are simple and usually do not write anything about the game

 

[900bs]

DUDE I LOVE THE TEXTS, i played a lot of vns, BUT THIS, THIS is a joke of development, when you really read the texts, it's random situation after random situations and the characters change personality every now and then. Just give me hot situation with context. NTR is all about context and situation, NOT A WALL of text. Because at the end of it it's the ugly guy corrupting the lovely females not the ugly guy reading an essay about life at XVI century in england. Focus on what matters and build the story around it. This is just milking hours of content for no reason.

Of those who changed their personality, I only remember Suguha, as for the walls of text, they are the ones who make the context for all the situations. Without them, it would have been boring sex. And even without that, it would have looked like this - Liz came to visit Kirito in the hospital, Liz gives Kirito a blowjob (scene) - Liz left, and Kirito went to bed, that's it.

 

[slim-kr]

That's why the first part of the game was amazing, a bit of a mix, context, battle event, fog event, irl event, story in-between but not too much, only what we need and that's what makes it hotter in a SoL/fantasy context. When the characters actually play their role. (and there's an actual gradation of the corruption, natural).

When was the last irl scene ? There's already 3 times more game time than the first part... stuck in a fog loop without any creativity

 

[900bs]

That's why the first part of the game was amazing, a bit of a mix, context, battle event, fog event, irl event, story in-between but not too much, only what we need and that's what makes it hotter in a SoL/fantasy context. When the characters actually play their role. (and there's an actual gradation of the corruption, natural).

When was the last irl scene ? There's already 3 times more game time than the first part... stuck in a fog loop without any creativity

Well, it's explained, at the end of the first part, Inoda raped her. And at the beginning of the second, she didn't even let him near her in the fog. Therefore, now all the corruption is there, we have not yet reached the state where Asuna is a complete whore and is ready for anything anywhere

 

[slim-kr]

There's a difference between a wall of text and mixing both story and scene to make it 70-30 not 90-10 or 30-70. That's what differentiate most great games with boring ones or rushed ones. In the first part, she played Inoda's game and got corrupted step by step. Then second part happened and it's now VERY VERY messy and all around the places. And the Suguha storyline was forgotten, and now she's somehow back with her initial 'I love my brother' like nothing happened and she didn't take a 7 inch many times

 

[900bs]

There's a difference between a wall of text and mixing both story and scene to make it 70-30 not 90-10 or 30-70. That's what differentiate most great games with boring ones or rushed ones.

How do you play visual novels when it can take hours before the first scene?

 

[slim-kr]

How do you play visual novels when it can take hours before the first scene?

I criticize the quality of the writing and the story in this precise game so that's the first and most important reason.

 

[pirohiro]

I criticize the quality of the writing and the story in this precise game so that's the first and most important reason.

There is an easy solution. Stop following updates. Come back in a year. The pacing feels good when you don't have to wait.

 

[RightHandPoppin]

Can someone please summarize current AsunaxFatass development?
Part 2 is them mostly doing it ingame, and he doing her while she was playing the game is maximum they got in part 2?
Any quick summary on whole story?

 

[900bs]

I criticize the quality of the writing and the story in this precise game so that's the first and most important reason.

We are all human... And for Fujino, this is the first such large work with such a big plot. He never positioned himself as an outstanding writer. If you want to play a game with a well-written plot, then this is "Mirage's Defection"

 

[slim-kr]

We are all human... And for Fujino, this is the first such large work with such a big plot. He never positioned himself as an outstanding writer. If you want to play a game with a well-written plot, then this is "Mirage's Defection"

I don't, I want great situations and creativity just like first part was. And make it a bit less messy too. The map is way too big now for example. Why the fuck ? a whole city for 3 or 4 characters, and another big one in fog. Real world is not a problem anymore because you just work and sleep there. Everything happens in game and all around the places, almost randomized with every updates. And sometimes characters will be lost in the process too.

Hope he will go back to something more down to earth next game.

 

[900bs]

I don't, I want great situations and creativity just like first part was. And make it a bit less messy too. The map is way too big now for example. Why the fuck ? a whole city for 3 or 4 characters, and another big one in fog. Real world is not a problem anymore because you just work and sleep there. Everything happens in game and all around the places, almost randomized with every updates. And sometimes characters will be lost in the process too.

Hope he will go back to something more down to earth next game.

I don't understand what the problem is with the map? We used all the locations in irl, as well as in fog. You want something less dirty, but at the same time like in the first part, but Asuna will no longer be like in part 1. And she will only become dirtier, as will the situations. Yes, and irl that not only you are waiting for will be in the next updates

 

[slim-kr]

The messy part is the author not knowing where the fuck he wants to go with it's characters and story and pushes month after month into the exact same fog loop, there's like 10 hours of text and you can summarize it so rapidly it's insane how he's not inspired. He's probably pressured by the fast-pace of the releases poor guy. Hope the fans will give him more time because for now it became horrible to follow.
For the maps, using a place once don't justify it being on the map forever. And some places are not and will not ever be used.

 

[900bs]

The messy part is the author not knowing where the fuck he wants to go with it's characters and story and pushes month after month into the exact same fog loop, there's like 10 hours of text and you can summarize it so rapidly it's insane how he's not inspired. He's probably pressured by the fast-pace of the releases poor guy. Hope the fans will give him more time because for now it became horrible to follow.
For the maps, using a place once don't justify it being on the map forever. And some places are not and will not ever be used.

Well, it is unlikely that it will change in the direction you want in the near future. Therefore, in order not to torture yourself, as they wrote above, come back after several updates. But you do not even notice that you yourself are one of the fans who demand that the game go their way.

 

[slim-kr]

I'm not "one of the fans that ask", I don't ask him anything, monthly update is his path and it will be bad as long as he doesn't take his time and try to really think about the next update.

 

[900bs]

I'm not "one of the fans that ask", I don't ask him anything, monthly update is his path and it will be bad as long as he doesn't take his time and try to really think about the next update.

Then what is all this for and why are you here?...

 

[slim-kr]

Then what is all this for and why are you here?...

This is my opinion on the state of the game and you obviously don't like it, don't want to see it. I say it here because I don't want to pressure him even more on his page. The downgrade of the game is real and sad to watch.

 

[900bs]

This is my opinion on the state of the game and you obviously don't like it, don't want to see it. I say it here because I don't want to pressure him even more on his page. The downgrade of the game is real and sad to watch.

I just want to say that you had high expectations that are now not met. But as it won’t happen in the first part, it would be strange that after everything that happened there, she would again begin to behave with Inoda the same way as in the first part

 

[slim-kr]

What ? I never said that ? I've never even mentionned her behaviour towards Inoda ? That's not even the main problem ? I already mentionned the problems before and don't want to post 10 more messages until you try to understand every single one of them so please let's put an end to this.

 

[Deleted member 8283136]

For me it's simple, if you are a supporter of the developer, you can make your complaints directly on his Patreon/Ci-en page. anything different is just frustrations of something you wanted and it's not happening. that's how I see it, this project is developed by one person and I think it must be quite exhaustive, maybe if I were a supporter I would complain about certain things, which are a lot to fix in this game, but that's not the case, so I just I take advantage of what is given to me without spending anything. Anyway, make your complaints when you pay for the content.