RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.851] [Fujino]

[Aniky Light]

Fujino has been really generous to Kirito, giving him Suguha and even personally guaranteeing that no other man will lay a finger on this lovely girl. I'm not a fan of Suguha personally. But I do think she is a girl who deserves to be with Kirito.

I wish Fujino's reward wasn't temporary, it would be ridiculous to take Suguha away from Kirito just like that out of nowhere

 

[The Jailer]

Omg 175 pages since my last comment on may 20 LMAO iam sure last 2 updates were great and nobody is complaining about it

So i played the 2 updates in a row and for me they were great i am glad fujino went with what he wanted to do and not fold to the pressure of criticism. The only dark point for me is that the rewriting of memory (even if inoda doesn't seem to understand what is going on) is kinda like hypnotism and i am not a big fan of that... but meh it is what it is, now it's done so just gotta move on. But the last update had a LOT of CG it was so good and Asuna has totally fallen now so i can't wait to see what he is cooking for the endgame.

But ngl when that poped up i laughed so HARD lmaoooo

i still didn't read the comments on here since last update but i KNEW the "cult" was gonna be so angry lol

I still don't like the fact that we can't review the CG of the company work pc... i will add a comment about that on patreon

And now a technical for question for 13Gatsu777. In the last memory room he did a one slot who contains 4 memory slots with a lot of CG, is this a way to bypass the limit of CG that you warned us about ?

 

[senonia]

when next update ?

 

[kinglionheart]

Also, something I really haven't seen anyone mentioning, but are there any theories regarding the 'gift' that Administrator gave Kirito? And anyone knows if whatever it is happens also if you're in the pure/loyal/boring route??

A few people have mentioned it but it was mostly buried under all the memory manipulation and new Yui. I have not tried to see if Administrator also gives her gift if Kirito is loyal but I think it is a story event so it would not matter. I think this is related to letting Kirito particularly the truth in the real world. A new way of peeping on the loving couple. She does use the closed eyes picture when giving the powers. So maybe Kirito's eyes will be "opened" in the future. My best guess.

Another small detail I don't many realized or cared. In this update Administrator calls Kirito a Little Rascal, also Divine Chosen One but that is not relevant right now. Last update, she called him a Little Bastard. I thought the word was not right since she was being playful with him. Now Fujino changed it. I guess Fujino got some feedback?

That's an interesting question. Perhaps the previous time those eyes appeared, was it also the Administrator's influence?

I think that these dreams or thoughts were added to Kirito's head by the Administrator for some purpose (brainwashing again). When Kirito saw the harem in a dream, or when Kirito decided that Suguha would belong to him, Kirito's mindset changed. I doubt it's some kind of physical gift (a small penis enlargement? ).

Perhaps at the beginning of the next update, before waking up from the dream world, Kirito will have a new dream with one of the girls or some kind of scene that will help him decide on his attitude towards Suguha. In short, these eyes are the Administrator's influence to change Kirito's character and mindset. And the gift is a new dream, I think.

I hope Kirito wanting to experiment with other women is not Administrator influenced. Let Kirito be a chad with other women without Divine Intervention!

I never thought Administrator wanted to brainwash Kirito. She never seem interested in these things. She doesn't even care much about her own followers. Kirito is her entertainment so she prefers to be a audience then a director.

You might not know, but many players of this game have never watched the SAO series, and there are quite a few people on forums asking about the SAO plot. If the success of this game is solely attributed to the number of SAO fans, it would be unfair.
The game using Kirito as the main point of view is just a narrative technique and doesn't mean you have to embody Kirito's mindset. It's like being a man playing Tomb Raider - do you have gender identity issues when playing as Lara Croft? When I play this game, I embody Inoda, even though I don't have much in common with him. But in a way, being able to embody a despicable man to conquer a true goddess satisfies some of my darker desires.

Well SAO being the sole reason for the game's success is not right. But saying it did not influence the game's success is also not right. SAO was not chosen randomly. SAO is one of the well-known Anime franchises. Some people don't know it but more people do. It is a lot easier to draw in people if you make something people at least heard of especially for an unknown developer like Fujino back then. Even the poll for Fujino's next game is full of well known series, except for Xenoblade Chronicles which I don't think should have been part of the poll. I would be interested in knowing if Fujino would try to make his own series instead of leading on existing franchise popularity now he has reputation.

I get some people get invested in NTR, NTS, netori , or any stories in general by projecting themselves as the character they are playing. But I guess I am lucky, I just think of myself as an outside observer so I don't get emotionally invested in the characters. But I do still care about plot and sex scenes.

when next update ?

If nothing changes, end of the month as usual.

 

[darkbatVX]

I wish Fujino's reward wasn't temporary, it would be ridiculous to take Suguha away from Kirito just like that out of nowhere

Fujino is currently collecting questions for the second time, so you could try going to him directly for confirmation.
Personally, though, I don't think it's necessary. In the 22nd floor scene, Inoda was just talking big; Suguha only feels disgust towards him. Asuna wouldn't influence Suguha either.
Sinon might have a better chance than Asuna, considering she's not too concerned about giving sweets to a fat pig in order to achieve her goals.

 

[The Jailer]

Well SAO being the sole reason for the game's success is not right. But saying it did not influence the game's success is also not right. SAO was not chosen randomly. SAO is one of the well-known Anime franchises. Some people don't know it but more people do. It is a lot easier to draw in people if you make something people at least heard of especially for an unknown developer like Fujino back then. Even the poll for Fujino's next game is full of well known series, except for Xenoblade Chronicles which I don't think should have been part of the poll. I would be interested in knowing if Fujino would try to make his own series instead of leading on existing franchise popularity now he has reputation.

I get some people get invested in NTR, NTS, netori , or any stories in general by projecting themselves as the character they are playing. But I guess I am lucky, I just think of myself as an outside observer so I don't get emotionally invested in the characters. But I do still care about plot and sex scenes.

i can share my vision of a guy who never watched SAO and don't plan on it. For me Kirito is just "Dumb NTR MC number 545485646 who gets his girl stolen" like we have seen in a number of NTR works. So i don't have any "sympathy" for him and i am just here to see the story and i expect him to lose everything

 

[darkbatVX]

This time, the memory adjustment is not the traditional brainwashing, but more like the concept of idea implantation seen in the movie "Inception." Based on the content added by Fujino in version 0.851, it's clear that Asuna only sees Inoda as a former boyfriend she's entangled with again, not someone she completely submits to. Asuna tends to say extreme things during sex, and this time is no exception. There is a whole chapter still to come, at least a quarter of the content remaining. Currently, Asuna's affection values for Inoda is at 650, while her affection for Kirito is at 800. Her path of corruption will continue.

Fujino has been saying that he wants to take Asuna's NTR story to a new stage, breaking through the mundane plot, which is why he designed this memory modification plot only after Asuna agreed to become Inoda's "sefure" (sex buddy). According to Fujino, at this point, in terms of traditional NTR stories, it's basically reaching the endgame. He didn't use direct hypnosis like he did with Alice from the start. The difference between the two is like night and day.

Furthermore, in the current chapter, the third chapter, titled "Netorare of the Yesteryear." What does it mean? It means that Inoda is taking everything good from Kirito's past, including his confidante (Liz at the beginning of the chapter), his daughter (birthing ceremony), and Asuna's initial and most beautiful memories (memory modification). At least Fujino's logic is consistent, not as disgraceful as some claim.

Moreover, from the comments on platforms like Ci-en and Patreon, as well as here, there are still many people appreciating the plot developments. On the other hand, those feeling angry are the most loyal fans of the SAO series. Fujino's work has stirred up a range of emotions, and in terms of an NTR game, it is undoubtedly successful.

In conclusion, I believe that as a game author, Fujino's CG is top-notch (in the KK field), and his stories are at least above average in quality.

Adding on to that, reminiscing about the memories in the bedroom only reflects Asuna's memories from the SAO period, and doesn't necessarily represent her mindset on July 15, 2026.

 

[kinglionheart]

But ngl when that poped up i laughed so HARD lmaoooo

i still didn't read the comments on here since last update but i KNEW the "cult" was gonna be so angry lol

That really did get people heated between those who wants Inoda to have all the women and those who don't. On a similar thought I laugh hard when I saw this line.

I know it was a mistake by Fujino and it has been fixed in the update but when I saw this, I thought it was Kirito having a freudian slip and calling out for Suguha.

i can share my vision of a guy who never watched SAO and don't plan on it. For me Kirito is just "Dumb NTR MC number 545485646 who gets his girl stolen" like we have seen in a number of NTR works. So i don't have any "sympathy" for him and i am just here to see the story and i expect him to lose everything

That is a good mindset when playing parody games, especially porn games about existing franchises. You don't want to associate the parody with the canon or you won't have a good time.

 

[Aniky Light]

i can share my vision of a guy who never watched SAO and don't plan on it. For me Kirito is just "Dumb NTR MC number 545485646 who gets his girl stolen" like we have seen in a number of NTR works. So i don't have any "sympathy" for him and i am just here to see the story and i expect him to lose everything

Look it wasn't necessary, it just seems like hate and that's it

 

[darkbatVX]

Omg 175 pages since my last comment on may 20 LMAO iam sure last 2 updates were great and nobody is complaining about it

So i played the 2 updates in a row and for me they were great i am glad fujino went with what he wanted to do and not fold to the pressure of criticism. The only dark point for me is that the rewriting of memory (even if inoda doesn't seem to understand what is going on) is kinda like hypnotism and i am not a big fan of that... but meh it is what it is, now it's done so just gotta move on. But the last update had a LOT of CG it was so good and Asuna has totally fallen now so i can't wait to see what he is cooking for the endgame.

But ngl when that poped up i laughed so HARD lmaoooo
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i still didn't read the comments on here since last update but i KNEW the "cult" was gonna be so angry lol

I still don't like the fact that we can't review the CG of the company work pc... i will add a comment about that on patreon

And now a technical for question for 13Gatsu777. In the last memory room he did a one slot who contains 4 memory slots with a lot of CG, is this a way to bypass the limit of CG that you warned us about ?

If you finish version 0.851 and see Asuna's final thoughts on Kirito and Inoda, as well as her description of her sexual experiences, you'll know she's far from reaching a completely depraved state.

Spoiler: 0.851

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[EdenGenesis]

Omg 175 pages since my last comment on may 20 LMAO iam sure last 2 updates were great and nobody is complaining about it

So i played the 2 updates in a row and for me they were great i am glad fujino went with what he wanted to do and not fold to the pressure of criticism. The only dark point for me is that the rewriting of memory (even if inoda doesn't seem to understand what is going on) is kinda like hypnotism and i am not a big fan of that... but meh it is what it is, now it's done so just gotta move on. But the last update had a LOT of CG it was so good and Asuna has totally fallen now so i can't wait to see what he is cooking for the endgame.

Honestly, without his "magic dick," Inoda would have nothing to offer someone like Asuna. Their entire relationship is just sex, and he treats women like nothing more than cumdumpsters.

The only thing that gives me some satisfaction is that over the long haul (and no, I’m not talking about that kind of length ), the girls will eventually realize how hideous Inoda truly is—inside and out. If Asuna were ever freed from whatever's binding her to Kirito, I’m convinced she’d start feeling the void he left behind.

What would really crack me up is seeing the cheater get cheated on. Imagine Kirito walking away from Asuna and ending up with Suguha the moment he finds out what she’s done. That would be a well-deserved twist.

I love NTR games with real confrontations—where the girlfriend or wife scrambles to justify herself, trying not to lose the man she still claims to love. They want to have it both ways, but they’re always the first to lose it when the guy turns to someone else.

It would be great to see Asuna get jealous watching Kirito grow closer to Suguha, and then lash out at Inoda once she realizes how deeply he used her. Maybe she’d even find out she was being manipulated by some shady operator the whole time.

I enjoy NTR stories with multiple outcomes, where even if the cheating is unavoidable, the MC’s choices actually matter. If he messes up and loses her because of his actions, fine—it feels earned. But when he gets cucked just because the dev forces it with no buildup or emotional weight, it feels cheap and undeserved.

Unless, of course, we’re talking about characters I do want to see get humiliated—like Hajime from Arifureta or the MC from Eminence in Shadow. Those arrogant guys? Yeah, I’d love to see them get cucked. But even then, Eminence in Shadow would be tricky. That guy is so obsessed with himself and his "cool image" that he’d probably just fall in love with his own reflection. The only interesting parts of that show are the side characters anyway.

They could’ve done something meaningful—like One Punch Man, where the MC is invincible, but still has real problems he can’t punch his way through.

 

[ASDZXCQWER1321]

In my opinion, this game should have ended when the quarantine ended, Assunta finally confesses to Kirito that she is a bitch, Kirito has two choices, forgive and stay (Asuna will continue to fuck anyway with Inoda) or send her to hell and leave for America with Suguha, obviously she can't leave, there's still the plot of Sinon and Suguha against the council

Now there is this harem, I know that the original harem included Liz , Kyouko and Asuna and I don’t think it was Fujino who decided to include other girls because he said that Suguha would not be touched and in my opinion they asked him maybe paying him to do so but if they keep asking for content on content, then I wonder why this game never ends

the game could have ended after the karantians, after the house, on the tree, or after the rainy night, on any similar day, but because the Administrator/seed/secondary characters, but literally can not leave the game, since he only finishes Asuna's arc, and what about the other characters, and as he himself said many times, Asuna Inoda, a side story (something like that).

 

[Aniky Light]

I feel guilty. Will try to meet his needs as long as Kirito isn't hurt.

What does Asuna mean by this?

 

[EdenGenesis]

You might not know, but many players of this game have never watched the SAO series, and there are quite a few people on forums asking about the SAO plot. If the success of this game is solely attributed to the number of SAO fans, it would be unfair.


The game using Kirito as the main point of view is just a narrative technique and doesn't mean you have to embody Kirito's mindset. It's like being a man playing Tomb Raider - do you have gender identity issues when playing as Lara Croft? When I play this game, I embody Inoda, even though I don't have much in common with him. But in a way, being able to embody a despicable man to conquer a true goddess satisfies some of my darker desires.

I get your point, and yes, not everyone playing NTR Online is necessarily an SAO fan—but let’s be honest, using iconic characters like Asuna and Kirito does attract a specific crowd, and that recognition factor plays a big role in its popularity. Without the SAO context, I doubt the game would’ve gained the same attention.

As for the whole "narrative perspective" argument—sure, it’s valid on paper. But in this case, the player is directly put in Kirito’s shoes, emotionally and contextually. We’re not just watching Asuna fall—we’re seeing the slow downfall of a relationship that, in the canon universe, is supposed to be rock-solid. It hits differently when you're forced to play as the guy being betrayed, especially when the game doesn’t give you meaningful choices to react or push back.


Now, I respect that some players prefer to identify with Inoda and explore those "darker desires" like you mentioned. But personally, I can't enjoy being in the mind of a character I find completely repulsive. Inoda is the kind of guy who gets what he wants through manipulation, jealousy, and underhanded tactics. That’s not empowering to me—it just feels pathetic.

What I enjoy in NTR is the conflict, the emotional weight, the possibility of fighting back or failing because of your own flaws. That’s why I prefer titles like Henteria Chronicle or My Girlfriend is a Collar-Worker—where your choices, your actions, matter. In NTR Online, you’re just dragged along while the MC gets humiliated, and the only payoff is watching a self-insert villain win without effort.

So yeah, I totally get that everyone has their own kinks—but for me, the lack of agency and the glorification of a character like Inoda just kills the experience.

That said, I have to admit—I really liked the animations. They’re genuinely well done and pretty hot. Honestly, maybe a straight-up visual novel format would’ve worked better for this kind of game, especially since the choices don’t really seem to have any real impact. At least then, players would know what to expect going in.

 

[Aniky Light]

Honestly, without his "magic dick," Inoda would have nothing to offer someone like Asuna. Their entire relationship is just sex, and he treats women like nothing more than cumdumpsters.

The only thing that gives me some satisfaction is that over the long haul (and no, I’m not talking about that kind of length ), the girls will eventually realize how hideous Inoda truly is—inside and out. If Asuna were ever freed from whatever's binding her to Kirito, I’m convinced she’d start feeling the void he left behind.

What would really crack me up is seeing the cheater get cheated on. Imagine Kirito walking away from Asuna and ending up with Suguha the moment he finds out what she’s done. That would be a well-deserved twist.

I love NTR games with real confrontations—where the girlfriend or wife scrambles to justify herself, trying not to lose the man she still claims to love. They want to have it both ways, but they’re always the first to lose it when the guy turns to someone else.

It would be great to see Asuna get jealous watching Kirito grow closer to Suguha, and then lash out at Inoda once she realizes how deeply he used her. Maybe she’d even find out she was being manipulated by some shady operator the whole time.

I enjoy NTR stories with multiple outcomes, where even if the cheating is unavoidable, the MC’s choices actually matter. If he messes up and loses her because of his actions, fine—it feels earned. But when he gets cucked just because the dev forces it with no buildup or emotional weight, it feels cheap and undeserved.

Unless, of course, we’re talking about characters I do want to see get humiliated—like Hajime from Arifureta or the MC from Eminence in Shadow. Those arrogant guys? Yeah, I’d love to see them get cucked. But even then, Eminence in Shadow would be tricky. That guy is so obsessed with himself and his "cool image" that he’d probably just fall in love with his own reflection. The only interesting parts of that show are the side characters anyway.

They could’ve done something meaningful—like One Punch Man, where the MC is invincible, but still has real problems he can’t punch his way through.

If Kirito had a cocky attitude and bragged about having a girlfriend, in this case I wouldn't mind if he was cheated on.

 

[EdenGenesis]

If Kirito had a cocky attitude and bragged about having a girlfriend, in this case I wouldn't mind if he was cheated on.

Indeed. But that’s not who Kirito is at all.
Funny enough, his name almost sounds like Kiritorisu... which kind of sounds like Clitoris. Coincidence? Probably. Still amusing though.

 

[mos555]

I hope Kirito wanting to experiment with other women is not Administrator influenced. Let Kirito be a chad with other women without Divine Intervention!

I never thought Administrator wanted to brainwash Kirito. She never seem interested in these things. She doesn't even care much about her own followers. Kirito is her entertainment so she prefers to be a audience then a director.

Well, I don't think the Administrator is such a useless character, considering that she is, in fact, the main antagonist of this story (not the plot of Asuna and Inoda, but the global plot). To this can be added her words and actions - she considers Kirito the Chosen One, wants to meet with him, erases his memory of things that he does not need to remember, gives gifts (of course, it is not yet clear what kind of gifts), gives advice. Kirito doesn't understand these tips, but maybe that's the Administrator's goal - to keep Kirito in the dark for now, but to show more "anxiety."

Brainwashing is too rude, I'd say she's guiding Kirito in the right direction. Considering that the theories that Quinella is in Kirito's head and that she wants to be reborn in one of the bodies of girls who are familiar with Kirito may turn out to be true, I don't think the Administrator is just falling apart.

Brother, of course I can't know exactly the role of Quinella in all this, but a character who just trolls Kirito (the player) after every game day is kind of shallow, flat.

I don't think it's Asuna's fault, it's the "Coolidge effect" to blame.

The Coolidge effect is unique to animals. In humans, it can manifest itself only with a weak prefrontal cortex. Poor functioning of the prefrontal cortex of the brain can manifest itself in the inconsistency and inadequacy of reactions to external stimuli, unnecessary movements, inappropriate actions and body movements. I don't remember Kirito talking strangely or his body making inappropriate movements.

Moreover, it's still a game - there may be more mystical reasons for Kirito's libido to change depending on his partner. Maybe Kirito suppressed his alpha instincts so much to be faithful to Asuna that it began to affect him physically.

The Coolidge effect in this game is most likely Inoda's, since

1. All he thinks about is how to fuck or impregnate someone.
2. He's a fucking pig.

 

[Aniky Light]

If some like to play Inoda, then you must not like Netorare but Netori

 

[mos555]

I get your point, and yes, not everyone playing NTR Online is necessarily an SAO fan—but let’s be honest, using iconic characters like Asuna and Kirito does attract a specific crowd, and that recognition factor plays a big role in its popularity. Without the SAO context, I doubt the game would’ve gained the same attention.

As for the whole "narrative perspective" argument—sure, it’s valid on paper. But in this case, the player is directly put in Kirito’s shoes, emotionally and contextually. We’re not just watching Asuna fall—we’re seeing the slow downfall of a relationship that, in the canon universe, is supposed to be rock-solid. It hits differently when you're forced to play as the guy being betrayed, especially when the game doesn’t give you meaningful choices to react or push back.


Now, I respect that some players prefer to identify with Inoda and explore those "darker desires" like you mentioned. But personally, I can't enjoy being in the mind of a character I find completely repulsive. Inoda is the kind of guy who gets what he wants through manipulation, jealousy, and underhanded tactics. That’s not empowering to me—it just feels pathetic.

What I enjoy in NTR is the conflict, the emotional weight, the possibility of fighting back or failing because of your own flaws. That’s why I prefer titles like Henteria Chronicle or My Girlfriend is a Collar-Worker—where your choices, your actions, matter. In NTR Online, you’re just dragged along while the MC gets humiliated, and the only payoff is watching a self-insert villain win without effort.

So yeah, I totally get that everyone has their own kinks—but for me, the lack of agency and the glorification of a character like Inoda just kills the experience.

That said, I have to admit—I really liked the animations. They’re genuinely well done and pretty hot. Honestly, maybe a straight-up visual novel format would’ve worked better for this kind of game, especially since the choices don’t really seem to have any real impact. At least then, players would know what to expect going in.

I also think this game would have looked better if Fujino had made a kinetic novel on Unity or RenPy. He might even have done it much faster. Of course, I don't know if Fujino knows how to work with Unity, but RenPy is pretty easy to learn, much easier than RPGM.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

A few people have mentioned it but it was mostly buried under all the memory manipulation and new Yui. I have not tried to see if Administrator also gives her gift if Kirito is loyal but I think it is a story event so it would not matter. I think this is related to letting Kirito particularly the truth in the real world. A new way of peeping on the loving couple. She does use the closed eyes picture when giving the powers. So maybe Kirito's eyes will be "opened" in the future. My best guess.

Another small detail I don't many realized or cared. In this update Administrator calls Kirito a Little Rascal, also Divine Chosen One but that is not relevant right now. Last update, she called him a Little Bastard. I thought the word was not right since she was being playful with him. Now Fujino changed it. I guess Fujino got some feedback?

I mean, the thing is that the "eyes" thing on the screen so far has ONLY appeared when you do-see Kirito-is-cheating scenes and choices, not for anywhere else, so I didn't think it was anything but something specifically related to Kirito taking notice of the other girls (Given there was even a scene of his dick suddenly tripling in size after thinking of the others when fucking Asuna with the same eye-effect, it felt like a natural connection to make XP), hence why I was asking if it was the same if you were on the 'loyal' Kirito route.