RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.852c] [Fujino]

[mos555]

I mean, what he wanted is 'obvious', he wanted a legit way to deal with Yui (Who singlehandedly should have ended Inoda's NTR plot by emerging) that didn't feel as casually retarded as just "Inoda fucked Asuna during the ritual so suddenly she forgets all her memories with Kirito and thinks of Inoda as her papa instead"...the issue is that he chose "Let's add Yui to Inoda's harem" as the 'solution', and then to make that 'believable' he cooked up the idiocy of this memory-rewriting stuff, while Asuna was clearly the main 'victim' this whole thing was clearly made mainly plot-wise to make YUI get fully corrupted and rewritten to prevent her from ending Fujino's NTR plot instantly XP

But Fujino could easily have made Inoda's actions change only Yui's memory. Why did he do the same to Asuna? Later, it would be possible to make a scene in which Asuna realizes that Yui calls Inoda the father and asks her to pretend and not give herself away in front of Kirito. I think Fujino just got tired of it and decided to put an end to Asuna's corruption. But he chose the wrong option, frankly.

 

[Sarolt]

The story got so overcomplicated that I am not sure what even is the desired goal. I am not that found of the main story to begin with, I believe the main story reached its peak with the treehouse arc.

At the same time, this update felt tiresome and short. I mean, we got some more Asuna scenes with a story arc that should have ended already. To be honest, I do not care about Yui as a character or her purpose in the story. It is too late to invest in her.

Asuna scenes were rather boring and bland. We saw them so many times that I am more inclined to skip them. And the whole backstory of Asuna and Kirito, just to squiz some more use of Asuna and Inoda scenes while dishing out walls of text explaining something that should not be even of importance for the game setting.

The tease for Sinon, Sugu and Alice is just lazy. I mean, why are we getting cliffhangers without proper setup. We are just getting informed that something is happening and it might be important. I was expecting some more follow up than just some dialogues and vague plan.

As for the other characters, Kyoko and Liz, were simply forgotten and with no impact on anything. Why were even added to begin with.

 

[mos555]

Which guy is the player ? The one doing the cucking or the one getting cucked

With the memory rewrite they both got cucked now.

Now it turns out that Asuna has been cheating on Inoda with Kirito all this time.

 

[Nex]

But Fujino could easily have made Inoda's actions change only Yui's memory. Why did he do the same to Asuna? Later, it would be possible to make a scene in which Asuna realizes that Yui calls Inoda the father and asks her to pretend and not give herself away in front of Kirito. I think Fujino just got tired of it and decided to put an end to Asuna's corruption. But he chose the wrong option, frankly.

I am more worried that it will happen with the other girls which would be a real cop out. Should've just continued from where the first part ended rather than the relationship reset if this is where we end up.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

But Fujino could easily have made Inoda's actions change only Yui's memory. Why did he do the same to Asuna? Later, it would be possible to make a scene in which Asuna realizes that Yui calls Inoda the father and asks her to pretend and not give herself away in front of Kirito. I think Fujino just got tired of it and decided to put an end to Asuna's corruption. But he chose the wrong option, frankly.

Because Fujino couldn't help himself and add some more complete and total insta-corruption, reminder, that IS the type of writer he actually is deep inside

 

[karlA29]

Hello everyone! I haven't played it yet (I'll play it in about 2 weeks, when someone releases a translation in my language and the emotions from the new HSR 3.4 update subside), but what I read on the last 2 pages... It's complete nonsense! Do you remember how some people said about six months ago - a cool game, there is no hypnosis that is common for such genres? And how a couple of months ago I was indignant that the "maternal instinct" item kills all the intrigue, since it makes the heroine do any crap? Consciousness/memory rewriting! Take it, sign for it! My God, what is the point of NTR in this game then?! Let's rewrite the consciousness of all the heroines and we're done! As a result, we get a banal ending to the Christmas add-on from Fujino - a stupid MC, and all the girls sit on the dicks of other men... What, by the way, always amuses me in the NTR genre - there are no other women in this world? All the "nasty" men needed only the MC's girlfriends? ))) Those when they steal the main girlfriend - understandable. But half of the students in the school are girls, but the world converged on Liz, Sinon, Suguha (yes, I know that she does not study at this school yet)? And, specifically for me, the apotheosis of NTR is that the "bad" guy must leave the kidnapped girl in the end. That is, she exchanged the wonderful relationship of a person who loves her for exclusively sex, and she was used purely as a free whore and thrown back (it is possible pregnant or already with a child). Do what you want, you are no longer needed. Therefore, for me, this game is initially strange, here Inoda literally tries to create a couple with Asuna the whole game, and given how the local Kirito treats Asuna, then for her it is even better, probably))) (I mean the context of this particular game).
Well the gifs seem to look pretty good. But that's always been the case with Fujino!

 

[Uaena]

Personally, I like everything about this update, except for the fact that it's really short.

 

[AnzaiNTR]

After playing again, this update was short and epic, Inoda ended Asuna and Kirito's relationship, this memory thing really bothered me, but I have to applaud Fujino-sensei, without a doubt one of the best NTR I've ever played. Yui calling Inoda daddy even though he was invisible was amazing. Fujino really used NTR in this update, what a fucking amazing game. I hope there's nothing left for Kirito

 

[kinglionheart]

I mean, what he wanted is 'obvious', he wanted a legit way to deal with Yui (Who singlehandedly should have ended Inoda's NTR plot by emerging) that didn't feel as casually retarded as just "Inoda fucked Asuna during the ritual so suddenly she forgets all her memories with Kirito and thinks of Inoda as her papa instead"...the issue is that he chose "Let's add Yui to Inoda's harem" as the 'solution', and then to make that 'believable' he cooked up the idiocy of this memory-rewriting stuff, while Asuna was clearly the main 'victim' this whole thing was clearly made mainly plot-wise to make YUI get fully corrupted and rewritten to prevent her from ending Fujino's NTR plot instantly XP

Seriously if Yui was going to be such a issue then Fujino could have not included her at all. She was barely mentioned until middle of Part 2. If he needed her for further Asuna's corruption then having the ritual fail might have been the better choice. Now with Yui possibly becoming another hoe for Inoda it just feels like pandering to those who want more oyakodon scenes. With Kyouko nothing feels wrong but with Yui it just feels wrong.

The memory rewrite I can see people say it is a cop out or a cheap way and I agree. But I think Fujino was really trying to keep Asuna and Kirito's relationship as strong as possible. He had to invent a lot of BS to break them up. Repressed PTSD from Sugou, Kirito not saying Asuna in ALO, the quarantine, and of course Administrator. I am sure I missed a few. Even with all that Asuna is still planning on ending her relationship with Inoda to be with Kirito after the quarantine. This shows to me Fujino still trying to keep Asuna and Kirito's love strong. But this is a NTR story so Asuna needs to fall! It is disappointing Fujino could not think of a more organic way for Asuna to choose Inoda over Kirito so instead a more "magic" insta corruption solution was used. I do appreciate Fujino didn't do the really easy thing and make Asuna fall to Inoda simply due to his massive cucking powers like most other quick NTR stories. He really tried to make Asuna fall only after a lot of extreme circumstances.

I get more people including Fujino is getting tired of Kirito and Asuna relationship. At this point everyone knows how the story will end so the NTR magic is gone. They are either staying to the end since they are invested from the beginning or just want to see more hot sex scenes and tuned out the story. But it seems Fujino learned and hopefully his next game won't get as big and convoluted as this one got.

 

[ASDZXCQWER1321]

Seriously if Yui was going to be such a issue then Fujino could have not included her at all. She was barely mentioned until middle of Part 2. If he needed her for further Asuna's corruption then having the ritual fail might have been the better choice. Now with Yui possibly becoming another hoe for Inoda it just feels like pandering to those who want more oyakodon scenes. With Kyouko nothing feels wrong but with Yui it just feels wrong.

The memory rewrite I can see people say it is a cop out or a cheap way and I agree. But I think Fujino was really trying to keep Asuna and Kirito's relationship as strong as possible. He had to invent a lot of BS to break them up. Repressed PTSD from Sugou, Kirito not saying Asuna in ALO, the quarantine, and of course Administrator. I am sure I missed a few. Even with all that Asuna is still planning on ending her relationship with Inoda to be with Kirito after the quarantine. This shows to me Fujino still trying to keep Asuna and Kirito's love strong. But this is a NTR story so Asuna needs to fall! It is disappointing Fujino could not think of a more organic way for Asuna to choose Inoda over Kirito so instead a more "magic" insta corruption solution was used. I do appreciate Fujino didn't do the really easy thing and make Asuna fall to Inoda simply due to his massive cucking powers like most other quick NTR stories. He really tried to make Asuna fall only after a lot of extreme circumstances.

I get more people including Fujino is getting tired of Kirito and Asuna relationship. At this point everyone knows how the story will end so the NTR magic is gone. They are either staying to the end since they are invested from the beginning or just want to see more hot sex scenes and tuned out the story. But it seems Fujino learned and hopefully his next game won't get as big and convoluted as this one got.

as for me, this also spoils the final CGs, since initially they were between a fallen woman and a bull, but now it’s literally a husband and wife who, for some reason, will hide from a tame cuckold.
Also my dissatisfaction, WHY FUJINO doesn't make normal blowjob animations

 

[Lazym3]

This is exactly why I don't have too much expectations in every update, to simply put. I don't like hypnosis or mind-controlled plot much as they're just lazy and writing in general, such thing to me is basically just a vanilla as it doesn't really give me the same guilty pleasure as being slowly corrupted and being unable to go back after doing all that shit making the heroine guilty.

But being mind-controlled doesn't give me that, regardless I still love the CG animations as there's rarely a creator who has this level of quality.

Overall the update wasn't bad or good to me, it made me go post nut clarity so I ain't complaining.

 

[Deleted member 8704544]

Don't worry, there won't be Naruto yet.
Because if you read what Fujino writes, he's just typing in ideas and what users want. I wouldn't even be surprised if there's another vote. And most likely there will be a third one - the final one, but that's after the end of the game.
I don't think there will be Naruto, it's more likely to be either Doll or Rent-Hour.

believe it or not, but it's either gonna be naruto (set in boruto era) or high school dxd/my dress-up darling

 

[Aniky Light]

hope there's nothing left for Kirito

Making this statement is like saying that you don't want to be left with anything, since you're playing in his shoes. Anyway, enough with this hate, your hope makes me understand that you want Kirito to lose his life too, Instead of hoping for all this, thank him, without him there would have been no NTR, rather thank all the characters xD

 

[karlA29]

The memory rewrite I can see people say it is a cop out or a cheap way and I agree. But I think Fujino was really trying to keep Asuna and Kirito's relationship as strong as possible. He had to invent a lot of BS to break them up. Repressed PTSD from Sugou, Kirito not saying Asuna in ALO, the quarantine, and of course Administrator. I am sure I missed a few. Even with all that Asuna is still planning on ending her relationship with Inoda to be with Kirito after the quarantine. This shows to me Fujino still trying to keep Asuna and Kirito's love strong. But this is a NTR story so Asuna needs to fall! It is disappointing Fujino could not think of a more organic way for Asuna to choose Inoda over Kirito so instead a more "magic" insta corruption solution was used. I do appreciate Fujino didn't do the really easy thing and make Asuna fall to Inoda simply due to his massive cucking powers like most other quick NTR stories. He really tried to make Asuna fall only after a lot of extreme circumstances.

Well, I don't know... for me, the only extreme situation for Asuna is the moment she saw Kirito in the brothel. Everything else is from the category – Asuna, let's play rock-paper-scissors. If I lose, I'll buy you coffee, if you lose, I can fuck you once a week in all holes! Asuna – Come on! Yeah! Very strong love!
Another thing is that Fujino tried to prolong Asuna and Kirito's breakup as long as possible. But because of the bullshit Asuna always agreed to (I know what Inoda wants from me, I don't want to do it myself, but fuck him, this time I'll let him do everything... and so on over and over again), all her tossing between Inoda and Kirito looks ridiculous. In my opinion, if the heroine really loves the hero, then the lot of sex that happens between her and the "bad" guy may be, for example, because of blackmail. And in the end, the heroine breaks down ("A Promise Best Left Unkept" game is the standard of NTR for me). In principle, I have nothing against hypnosis, but in order for it to be interesting, you need to twist the plot well, otherwise it will stupidly slide into a stupid series of meaningless porn videos.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

Seriously if Yui was going to be such a issue then Fujino could have not included her at all. She was barely mentioned until middle of Part 2. If he needed her for further Asuna's corruption then having the ritual fail might have been the better choice. Now with Yui possibly becoming another hoe for Inoda it just feels like pandering to those who want more oyakodon scenes. With Kyouko nothing feels wrong but with Yui it just feels wrong.

The memory rewrite I can see people say it is a cop out or a cheap way and I agree. But I think Fujino was really trying to keep Asuna and Kirito's relationship as strong as possible. He had to invent a lot of BS to break them up. Repressed PTSD from Sugou, Kirito not saying Asuna in ALO, the quarantine, and of course Administrator. I am sure I missed a few. Even with all that Asuna is still planning on ending her relationship with Inoda to be with Kirito after the quarantine. This shows to me Fujino still trying to keep Asuna and Kirito's love strong. But this is a NTR story so Asuna needs to fall! It is disappointing Fujino could not think of a more organic way for Asuna to choose Inoda over Kirito so instead a more "magic" insta corruption solution was used. I do appreciate Fujino didn't do the really easy thing and make Asuna fall to Inoda simply due to his massive cucking powers like most other quick NTR stories. He really tried to make Asuna fall only after a lot of extreme circumstances.

I get more people including Fujino is getting tired of Kirito and Asuna relationship. At this point everyone knows how the story will end so the NTR magic is gone. They are either staying to the end since they are invested from the beginning or just want to see more hot sex scenes and tuned out the story. But it seems Fujino learned and hopefully his next game won't get as big and convoluted as this one got.

Like I said ages ago, the more complex Fujino has been trying to make the plot and the more he tried to 'explain' things that went ignored in part 1, the dumber the plot gets and the more it annoys people, so yeah, this was inevitable in a way since Yui was brought up at all XP

 

[Deleted member 8704544]

After playing again, this update was short and epic, Inoda ended Asuna and Kirito's relationship, this memory thing really bothered me, but I have to applaud Fujino-sensei, without a doubt one of the best NTR I've ever played. Yui calling Inoda daddy even though he was invisible was amazing. Fujino really used NTR in this update, what a fucking amazing game. I hope there's nothing left for Kirito

well, hopefully he'd end up with the best girl in this game by his side. i see that as a win

 

[Lazym3]

Making this statement is like saying that you don't want to be left with anything, since you're playing in his shoes. Anyway, enough with this hate, your hope makes me understand that you want Kirito to lose his life too, Instead of hoping for all this, thank him, without him there would have been no NTR, rather thank all the characters xD

Yeah...I hope that won't happen, I hope that there's no actual suicide or killing that will happen cause it going to ruin the mood, if it were ever to happen (which I don't it will) it's going to be heavy as fuck.

 

[Lazym3]

believe it or not, but it's either gonna be naruto (set in boruto era) or high school dxd/my dress-up darling

Here's hoping it's either FSN or Re:Zero but I'd doubt it lol.

 

[Deleted member 8704544]

Here's hoping it's either FSN or Re:Zero but I'd doubt it lol.

it all depends on fujino sensei, but if we're talking about votes, naruto is leading so far. and i've also wanted re:zero to win, but hardly anyone voted for it t-t

 

[Lazym3]

i hope it's

it all depends on fujino sensei, but if we're talking about votes, naruto is leading so far. and i've also wanted re:zero to win, but hardly anyone voted for it t-t

True that, but by some miracle Re:Zero gets chosen I would literally celebrate (disappointing plot incoming aside) the CG's that Fujino makes are enough as they are THAT good.