My English is not so good, but I hope you will understand what I wrote here.
This is my first post, so forgive me.
How to get back the NTR feeling.
Version:
First, in order to have good HTR scenes, it is necessary not to forget that Asuna has Kirito, and not only the member of Inoda. That is to say, she should compare thoughts, but not overdo it. It is necessary to return the emphasis on the fact that Asuna is still Kirito’s girlfriend, and if she is changing him, then this happens for reasons that are quite adequate from her point of view. For example, it is her duty, but then Inoda must suffer again for one reason or another. But it should not be her arousal, as in NTR a girl must resist the desire to cheat on her boyfriend.
And secondly, we need to add the character of Aswan. She has repeatedly refused or slapped Inode. If it does as in the first part or at the beginning of the second part, we will see its character. As in the stories of some hentai manga, where girls even at the end admit that they are whores, have a character or another, in which they live restlessly next to their boyfriend, try to escape from the problem and resist their desire to spread their legs. And if there are concessions, there must be a reason. But in the middle of sex, they become very debauched.
Third, it is a text version. It should not be too short, as in the real blow job scene, otherwise there will be some inferiority. It seemed like it was, but not noticeable. The text should then show why this is happening and what Asuna feels, as well as how she wants to resist. So it was before, when Inode tried to bring her to the truth, and she refused and even at the end broke, tried to say no, and mentioned Kirito, trying to rehabilitate herself.
In real life:
Thinking for this we need to return the dialogues about how Asuna still loves Kirito, and not only thinks of Inode’s penis. But compares them.
Next, it would be nice to add content about the video chat with Asuna and Kirito and their erotic contact, whether masturbating or just showing naked bodies, which will add romantic intimacy to them because they finally ended up together, even if Inode is sitting next to them. And then destroy it by adding Inode, who asks Asuna to help him, which will lead us back to the NTR. Kirito himself could have gone away for a while. This was in a blow job scene in reality, but it was weak in the text and duration. By the way, yes, in this case it is necessary to do so that Asuna does not go about his desires, but performs a maternal instinct or something similar, but with sufficient text. There must be a reason, in the real blow-job scene Inode’s reason was weak, so that Asuna agreed.
Also do not forget about the popular now in other stories content when a girl sends naughty photos to her boyfriend, while cheating on him. At work, Kirito could have taken a couple of pictures, Asuna as usual can masturbate Inode.
Then an evening movie, where Inoda could put the breast of Asuna while she talks with Kirito on the phone, again with a confession of love.
В FOG:
You can put in the FOG moments that were already there, it’s how Kirito had a hallucination and he saw Asuna cheating on him, but not too often. We need a corresponding reaction from both Kirito and Asuna.
Sex Kirito with Asuna in real life or in FOG , and then for Asuna to change him with Inoda, reaching the climax, as she is not satisfied. The scene on a similar anal was not bad, in particular the text version. That is, Asuna was euphoric, so unconsciously changed Kirito, so wanted to get a massage in the right place. This is how it should be in other scenes. But more sophisticated, especially the text version, as it gives a full history of NTR.
