RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

[Aniky Light]

The thing is, most people here are pretty reasonable with their criticism—nothing wrong with that. If you like the game, great, go ahead and praise the dev. If someone doesn’t, they have every right to criticize it. In the end, it’s Fujino’s decision and responsibility as the developer, and just like all of us, he has to live with the consequences of his choices.

criticism is useful, as long as it is constructive

 

[mos555]

The thing is, most people here are pretty reasonable with their criticism—nothing wrong with that. If you like the game, great, go ahead and praise the dev. If someone doesn’t, they have every right to criticize it. In the end, it’s Fujino’s decision and responsibility as the developer, and just like all of us, he has to live with the consequences of his choices.

Hmm, I tried to explain to this man that Fujino, in fact, used the most cliched possible pattern of behavior of the NTR heroine for Asuna, and in response he began to tell me about the conservatism of Muslims and that white men fuck more often. So I think he's just a troll, there's no point in telling him anything.

 

[oozaru2023]

Personally I would like Fujino to receive suggestions on CG scenes and not on the plot or argument since the majority tends to want to instill their own tastes that can not be the same as the rest, the fact that he added 2 more scenes was what was expected since when Inoda and Asuna start fucking they don't stop until the next day. perhaps Fujino already spoiled what was coming without telling us what it was, for example the bathroom scene, it is normal that perhaps we do not see Liz or Suguha much since this is the hotel arc, perhaps they appear more in Fog but not in the real world. I hope he adds sex in the shower XD

 

[mos555]

Personally I would like Fujino to receive suggestions on CG scenes and not on the plot or argument since the majority tends to want to instill their own tastes that can not be the same as the rest, the fact that he added 2 more scenes was what was expected since when Inoda and Asuna start fucking they don't stop until the next day. perhaps Fujino already spoiled what was coming without telling us what it was, for example the bathroom scene, it is normal that perhaps we do not see Liz or Suguha much since this is the hotel arc, perhaps they appear more in Fog but not in the real world. I hope he adds sex in the shower XD
View attachment 4744967

Inoda and Asuna? Not Pignoda and Slutsuna? Brother, how are you? Are you okay?

 

[Animefan_09]

Personally I would like Fujino to receive suggestions on CG scenes and not on the plot or argument since the majority tends to want to instill their own tastes that can not be the same as the rest, the fact that he added 2 more scenes was what was expected since when Inoda and Asuna start fucking they don't stop until the next day. perhaps Fujino already spoiled what was coming without telling us what it was, for example the bathroom scene, it is normal that perhaps we do not see Liz or Suguha much since this is the hotel arc, perhaps they appear more in Fog but not in the real world. I hope he adds sex in the shower XD
View attachment 4744967

Yeah, i try not to comment too much because of it, to not fall intot he trap and start "suggesting".

As for stuff that has been spoiled, well this was from the perks but i think we will see some Oyakodon scenes later on, and threesomes. There is 1 more possible plot point revealed in them but i won't mention it for spoilers.

 

[Aniky Light]

Personally I would like Fujino to receive suggestions on CG scenes and not on the plot or argument since the majority tends to want to instill their own tastes that can not be the same as the rest, the fact that he added 2 more scenes was what was expected since when Inoda and Asuna start fucking they don't stop until the next day. perhaps Fujino already spoiled what was coming without telling us what it was, for example the bathroom scene, it is normal that perhaps we do not see Liz or Suguha much since this is the hotel arc, perhaps they appear more in Fog but not in the real world. I hope he adds sex in the shower XD
View attachment 4744967

fog will go offline, then the rest will happen in irl

 

[dakamuto]

It's worth remembering that Asuna and Inoda drank wine before sex, and this could become another excuse for Asuna. She won't admit that it was her slutty nature that allowed the fat guy to fuck her. Rather, she'll assume that Inoda slipped an aphrodisiac into her wine. For me, this scene feels unsaid because of the gap with the yoga scene with the butt plug.

 

[Aniky Light]

a good ntr game must also have a good plot, if someone downloads the game just to jerk off and doesn't care about the story, then it's fine to go and watch the scenes on the internet, there are so many videos about Asuna ntr, what are you playing for if you're not interested, W button masher
Example: Asuna giving Inoda a blowjob.
to someone who isn't interested in the story: wow, she's sucking it, I don't know what happened and I don't care I just want to see this scene, oh what a drag with these conversations, we'd better press the W button *holds down the W button and after a while the game crashes*
AAAAAA shitty game as long as it crashes *then goes to the F95zone site* and asks: can someone give me the complete save? can someone give me all the complete CGs?
For those who care about the plot over the content: wow she's sucking it, ok, but I want to know why she's doing it, how did Inoda convince her, maybe I missed something *tries to search for the skipped conversation but finds nothing* here, another plot hole

 

[Purp91]

a good ntr game must also have a good plot, if someone downloads the game just to jerk off and doesn't care about the story, then it's fine to go and watch the scenes on the internet, there are so many videos about Asuna ntr, what are you playing for if you're not interested, W button masher
Example: Asuna giving Inoda a blowjob.
to someone who isn't interested in the story: wow, she's sucking it, I don't know what happened and I don't care I just want to see this scene, oh what a drag with these conversations, we'd better press the W button *holds down the W button and after a while the game crashes*
AAAAAA shitty game as long as it crashes *then goes to the F95zone site* and asks: can someone give me the complete save? can someone give me all the complete CGs?
For those who care about the plot over the content: wow she's sucking it, ok, but I want to know why she's doing it, how did Inoda convince her, maybe I missed something *tries to search for the skipped conversation but finds nothing* here, another plot hole

Or the third option where you like both options and you realize that youre getting this content for free and you know that the creator is just one dude who gets grabbed from all directions on what to do. The story isn't the best but I'm not expecting 5 star levels of writing. You can sort of tell by now that fujino is wanting to be done with this game and is rushing to complete it the best that he can so he can either start something fresh or take a break from creating. I was a big fan of part one and loved the ideas of part 2 which was the main reason I stuck around. Criticisms are fine but I feel like fujino gets way to much flak sometimes

 

[RightHandPoppin]

After careful consideration, and since many people want me to add 1 or 2 scenes before AF in event of 7/12, I will spend some time to make that.

What does AF stands for? Anal Fuck?

If yes, that is by far my biggest complaint about last update. Yes, Inoda is mostly emotionally manipulating her, but Fujino is rushing it way too much, and making his whole buildup in these 2 games in vain.

The way inoda used those incense at the start of PART 2 is, at least for me, a correct way of making her submit. He is not good enough to corrupt her emotionally, and she is not weak enough to completely fall for it. So when I saw him giving her coffee in those snippets before the event, I was sure he was doing some underhanded stuff again, which would be expected of him. He even gave her the wine beforehand.

Also making her do the biggest NO NO so far, by just being pathetic and pleading her to have sex with him and she just saying "Sure lol" is again, diminishing the whole buildup he was working on for so long.

The scenes themselves were also rushed. Start of PART 2 scenes, and most of the in-game, pre January 2025 ones are so well done, that the only way he can drop ball a bit like this is if he is rushing end way too fast. December 2024 update was so good, but every single one after that was a bit of a letdown, to say it nicely.

I really hope he takes his time with next one, revisit last update a bit, give a bit more depth to the whole strategy Inoda was preparing, a bit more variety in scenes, as well as numbers of scenes. Make him trick her not only emotionally, but with aphrodisiacs as well, and use conflict of her 2 sides, "Asuna during sex" and "Everyday Asuna", to wear her down into submission.

Everything he did till now is really good, now he just needs to be patient and stick the landing.

Fujino-sensei please, just don't rush it.

 

[Aniky Light]

this is how Fujino's game is structured, those holes are the missed scenes and conversations

 

[Animefan_09]

this is how Fujino's game is structured, those holes are the missed scenes and conversations
View attachment 4745261

Better than some tv series and movies i have seen recently.

 

[EmaEiishi]

This string of arguments is hilarious. I came for a ntr game, played an ntr game and enjoyed a ntr game. Bonus points since i also hate Kirito and the years of garbo isekai anime he brought with him.

 

[Aniky Light]

Better than some tv series and movies i have seen recently.

sure, because in TV series and movies there isn't a certain fat guy who rapes a girl xD

 

[Aniky Light]

This string of arguments is hilarious. I came for a ntr game, played an ntr game and enjoyed a ntr game. Bonus points since i also hate Kirito and the years of garbo isekai anime he brought with him.

I can only imagine how much fun you had xD

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

Work kept me away but I just caught up with the latest report! Is funny that Fujino felt the need to clarify the differences between his game and the canon and he just made the vaguest of specifications about it, leaving out tons of other things way more relevant that are different between both universes, wonder if there were lots of people spamming him with questions about that in Ci-En XD? Also, wouldn't be a new week's progress report without some random stating how they're here because they hate Kirito, LMAO...but blaming him for the Isekai garbage era? That's beyond retarded, like, SAO is NOT an Isekai at all even if we stretch the definition and say that maybe the Alicization arc was something like it, lol, and despite how much the haters may be revolved by it SAO was one of the greatest anime successes of the past decade, with the novels even winning the LN of the Decade Award, comparing it to the forgettable seasonal garbage that nobody remembers past a couple of months is as hilarious as it's stupid XP

Hell, the mere fact SAO stays on the mind of its haters SO much nowadays that they keep actively hating it after over a decade is a testament of its popularity in itself, if it was as shitty and bad/forgetable as they want others to believe, they would have stopped hating it and moved on ages ago

 

[Aniky Light]

Work kept me away but I just caught up with the latest report! Is funny that Fujino felt the need to clarify the differences between his game and the canon and he just made the vaguest of specifications about it, leaving out tons of other things way more relevant that are different between both universes, wonder if there were lots of people spamming him with questions about that in Ci-En XD? Also, wouldn't be a new week's progress report without some random stating how they're here because they hate Kirito, LMAO...but blaming him for the Isekai garbage era? That's beyond retarded, like, SAO is NOT an Isekai at all even if we stretch the definition and say that maybe the Alicization arc was something like it, lol, and despite how much the haters may be revolved by it SAO was one of the greatest anime successes of the past decade, with the novels even winning the LN of the Decade Award, comparing it to the forgettable seasonal garbage that nobody remembers past a couple of months is as hilarious as it's stupid XP

Hell, the mere fact SAO stays on the mind of its haters SO much nowadays that they keep actively hating it after over a decade is a testament of its popularity in itself, if it was as shitty and bad/forgetable as they want others to believe, they would have stopped hating it and moved on ages ago

Unfortunately they are unable to remove this vice of hatred

 

[Animefan_09]

sure, because in TV series and movies there isn't a certain fat guy who rapes a girl xD

I mean the plotholes.......but some have that too probably xD

 

[darkbatVX]

I wanna talk about my understanding of the current work and why I think Fujino's script is reasonable, even though it's not perfect.

Asuna is a wealthy heiress who has received elite education since she was young and has been under immense pressure from her mother. Therefore, she chose to play SAO and became trapped in it. In the game, Kirito fought alongside her, giving her the motivation to survive in the world of Aincrad. In this unique environment, she slowly fell in love with him. But back in reality, Kirito's halo faded, and the pressure from her mother returned. Kirito didn't handle this issue well. In the original story, Kirito once again saved Asuna in ALO, and through her interactions with Yuuki Konno, Asuna became even stronger.

Unfortunately, in Fujino's world, none of this happened. Instead, Asuna met Inoda. Before Asuna's true personality was fully formed, she tended to escape from pressure. However, her time with Inoda gave Asuna a sense of being needed and the freedom that indulgence brought. On the other hand, Fujino's Kirito chose the wrong way to solve the problem—going abroad for studies and working hard to gain Asuna's mother's approval. This actually was a brave way to face pressure and hardship. If it wasn't for Inoda, all of this would have worked out. But unfortunately, the relaxed atmosphere of being with Inoda gradually led Asuna in the opposite direction of Kirito. It's a bit like smoking weed, definitely not a good behavior, but it brings happiness.

Additionally, some things happened between Asuna and Sugō that damaged her mentally. This also led her to not make rational choices in some extreme situations. On the rainy night, if she had firmly refused Inoda, she could have just left. It was raining outside, not knives falling. But what did she do? She went to the bathroom to masturbate. Even after being raped, she didn't report it to the police. So it's not surprising that she forgave Inoda later on. You can't judge a woman by what she says, but by what she does. Fujino's Asuna just enjoys the feeling of being pulled into the abyss by Inoda.

 

[ASDZXCQWER1321]

Inoda won't give her a break, Asuna won't even have time to go to the bathroom xD

well by the way this is surprising but inoda doesn't have infinite stamina because in real life hotel sex he says he needs to stop because tomorrow he might not be able to fuck asuna