RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

[kinglionheart]

Thats why I'm not into the main plot

That is sad to hear if you were invested in the game.

 

[albakr0ss]

Yeah that's basically the process I would see happening if it could be implemented, it just adds some depth. I don't like the cuckolding value increasing so I would probably split that between two options if someone wanted to increase that value though, same with the anxiety part of the process value increasing. There were some choices earlier in the game where Kirito chooses between peeping/ not peeping, and questioning himself whether or not he believes Asuna would like or wouldn't like/ be like this (public sex) etc. Those options should increase the values of Anxiety or Cuckolding depending on what you choose.

Personally I would only increase the Anxiety values and keep the Cuckolding values as low as possible. An oblivious cuck is more erotic appealing to me than a cuck who suspects something & gets off on watching. When I see the tag "NTR" (for Netorare) my sole focus on the kink is that the Significant Other is STOLEN (as per what NTR is defined for) rather than just basic & boring cuckolding kinks. It's hotter when the Significant Other is coerced through slow gradual corruption (and/ or blackmail) to eventually enjoy cheating and being stolen from his/ her lover. For me, that aspect makes the possibility of "Revenge" a lot more likely. How can a willing cuck make the revenge arc work kink-wise if he enjoys being cucked? Makes no sense to me.

edit: It'd also make sense for the Anxiety & Cuckolding values to increase by Kirito calling Asuna to confirm where she's at and suspecting that something is going on when he hears noises (increasing cuckolding value), and when the location Asuna says she's at doesn't line up to where she actually is the Anxiety value increases because she just lied to him.

I think I like the idea that Kirito gets off on watching first (voyeur, since he peeped on so many other couples fucking in part 1) then gradually gets to the idea that "what if Asuna", which is another kink but complete taboo that Kirito can either reject or accept. Then eventually, Inoda catches Kirito peeping (either on him or some other) and starts giving him small glimpses of what he's doing with his partner (Asuna).

I just think there needs to be a vehicle for Kirito to have some reason to believe/consider the bad thing happening to him. If you were to play this from the Kirito POV for the treehouse scene I think you’d literally be clueless if not for the door scene basically. So being able to go and confirm her location is okay. Maybe in game, admin gives him a “buff/debuff” in that he knows exactly how Asuna feels at the moment. But it’s up to his imagination to fill in the blank why she’s horny while with Inoda. Paranoia/cuckold mix and creates the “idea” of what’s going on which is the exact scene we saw previously.

 

[oozaru2023]

I think that the next stormy night we will have a threesome, be it Asuna, Inoda and Liz or Asuna, Inoda and Kyoko

As Fujino said, there will be two endings:
one where cuckito is a voyeur or likes to see how inoda destroys ASUNA

the other where the cuck never finds out and the most likely thing is that if ASUNA ends up pregnant with INODA she is she will have sex with cuckito to make him believe that the child is his xd

I would like an additional ending where he finds out about the deception, but because of FGO things he ends up in a wheelchair similar to Alicitazion, aware that INODA uses Asuna Liz and Kyoko as bicycles every day, but he can't do anything, until that years later Suguha returns with her son from playing with cuckito so much in his bed while he was connected to FOG XD

 

[4-kun]

I think that the next stormy night we will have a threesome, be it Asuna, Inoda and Liz or Asuna, Inoda and Kyoko

As Fujino said, there will be two endings:
one where cuckito is a voyeur or likes to see how inoda destroys ASUNA

the other where the cuck never finds out and the most likely thing is that if ASUNA ends up pregnant with INODA she is she will have sex with cuckito to make him believe that the child is his xd

I would like an additional ending where he finds out about the deception, but because of FGO things he ends up in a wheelchair similar to Alicitazion, aware that INODA uses Asuna Liz and Kyoko as bicycles every day, but he can't do anything, until that years later Suguha returns with her son from playing with cuckito so much in his bed while he was connected to FOG XD

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Nah, I don't believe Inoda will allow Asuna to have sex with Kirito. He will probably just sent her on meaningless dates to drive Kirito crazy, question himself why they don't have sex anymore. Also why should Asuna have sex with him if she has Inoda?

 

[kinglionheart]

Nah, I don't believe Inoda will allow Asuna to have sex with Kirito. He will probably just sent her on meaningless dates to drive Kirito crazy, question himself why they don't have sex anymore. Also why should Asuna have sex with him if she has Inoda?

I doubt Inoda would allow Asuna to have sex with Kirito as well. The only way I can imagine if it was the final attempt to break her away from Kirito. Like "go compare my dick with Kirito's and understand which one can make you cum". After that Inoda would only allow pity handjob for Kirito at most.

 

[LordFrz]

Well, friends with benefits have sex and spend time together from time to time, but it's not what a romantic relationship is about. I really don't want to explain what a romantic relationship is, but in short, commitment, respect, communication, and all this stuff. I think you know what I mean ^^

Just a side note: Inoda had more intercourse on the rainy night than the "couple" in both parts of the game

Yea but I don't need to see the couple have sex to show they are together. In fact thats a lazy way to do it.

 

[oozaru2023]

I don't know if people have read many stories or mangas with NTR themes, generally in these stories where the idiot never finds out that his wife is cheating on him, when she gets pregnant she usually makes it pass as if the child is the cuckold's, either having sex with the official partner as if saying that there she got pregnant when in reality she already was or just the idiot assuming it's his.I don't know how fujno develops it in that ending, maybe inoda will find out and pass him off as cuckito's son and he will continue enjoying Asuna. or maybe he will take another path who knows

 

[LordFrz]

I don't know if people have read many stories or mangas with NTR themes, generally in these stories where the idiot never finds out that his wife is cheating on him, when she gets pregnant she usually makes it pass as if the child is the cuckold's, either by having sex with him or just the idiot assuming it's his.I don't know how fujno develops it in that ending, maybe inoda will find out and pass him off as cuckito's son and he will continue enjoying Asuna. or maybe he will take another path who knows

If the MC never finds out it's just cheating. There can't be a feeling of loss for the MC if he never finds out.

 

[oozaru2023]

If the MC never finds out it's just cheating. There can't be a feeling of loss for the MC if he never finds out.

That's what an ending is about where the cuck never finds out, she keeps cheating on him even if she has a family with the cuck.there is never loss from his point of view

 

[themazias]

im playing the 0.32 build and im stuck here, someone has a save that they can give me for this part?

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

Nah, I don't believe Inoda will allow Asuna to have sex with Kirito. He will probably just sent her on meaningless dates to drive Kirito crazy, question himself why they don't have sex anymore. Also why should Asuna have sex with him if she has Inoda?

At most in the never-finds-out-ending she may still do it just to keep up appearances, after all part of Kirito never finding out will have to be eventually making him believe Inoda's children are his I would imagine, as per his extreme lack of luck, especially after Sugu's seemingly complete character reversal in the last update meaning the universal rule of Kirito not getting anything 'good' is holding XP

If the MC never finds out it's just cheating. There can't be a feeling of loss for the MC if he never finds out.

You think most NTR writers care about those details XD? In modern-day, as long as a girl vaguely related or interested in the MC, even if it's completely one-sided or the MC never finds out, gets fucked by another dude, it's immediately tagged/promoted/named as NTR, hell, practically every piece of SAO NTR that uses non-Asuna girls is specifically framed like that because of the series' unique nature in that regard Most writers/readers just don't care, they still take it as NTR as far as they're concerned.

 

[4-kun]

At most in the never-finds-out-ending she may still do it just to keep up appearances, after all part of Kirito never finding out will have to be eventually making him believe Inoda's children are his I would imagine, as per his extreme lack of luck, especially after Sugu's seemingly complete character reversal in the last update meaning the universal rule of Kirito not getting anything 'good' is holding XP

Thats no problem, admin will make him forget about the pregnancy every day

 

[Saisoul25]

How do i fix map with black screens?

 

[Anotherone20]

Hey, where does part 2 end? is it after the cabin sex scenes?

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

Thats no problem, admin will make him forget about the pregnancy every day

Talking about Administrator in the endings made me think how ultra-hilarious it would be if she somehow also ended up fucked by Inoda just to extra-hammer Kirito's horrible luck, LOL

Hey, where does part 2 end? is it after the cabin sex scenes?

That's where the current version of the game ends, yeah, Part 2 is nowhere near finished yet :O

 

[Saisoul25]

Idk why the text and the images went blury like this

 

[ozzo]

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Idk why the text and the images went blury like this

to simulate not seeing/hearing well. Is used in alot of sceenes. Can be removed in the recap room

 

[Jeycii_]

I think that the next stormy night we will have a threesome, be it Asuna, Inoda and Liz or Asuna, Inoda and Kyoko

As Fujino said, there will be two endings:
one where cuckito is a voyeur or likes to see how inoda destroys ASUNA

the other where the cuck never finds out and the most likely thing is that if ASUNA ends up pregnant with INODA she is she will have sex with cuckito to make him believe that the child is his xd

I would like an additional ending where he finds out about the deception, but because of FGO things he ends up in a wheelchair similar to Alicitazion, aware that INODA uses Asuna Liz and Kyoko as bicycles every day, but he can't do anything, until that years later Suguha returns with her son from playing with cuckito so much in his bed while he was connected to FOG XD

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was this custommade by you? do you have more... fine samples of your work?

 

[Hentai_Desu-ka?]

You think most NTR writers care about those details XD? In modern-day, as long as a girl vaguely related or interested in the MC, even if it's completely one-sided or the MC never finds out, gets fucked by another dude, it's immediately tagged/promoted/named as NTR, hell, practically every piece of SAO NTR that uses non-Asuna girls is specifically framed like that because of the series' unique nature in that regard Most writers/readers just don't care, they still take it as NTR as far as they're concerned.

Not to start another debate about "What NTR is", but, the general most direct understood meaning of Netorare is that a Significant Other is "Stolen". The theme has very VERY little to do with the focus being on the common, basic & boring AF aesthetic such as willing cuckoldry/ "sharing"/ "swinging"/ "swapping" (or just flat-out cheating is exposed & out in the open from the second it happens -- this is boring as fuck to me) of partners. There is always a cuck, I full on acknowledge that, but the direct fetish for the NTR kink is that the SO is "Stolen" from their lover through slow & gradual corruption either through blackmail or cheating.

That's why most Doujins & games you probably have seen tagged as NTR have an unwitting cuck. The cuck finding out about the infidelity is usually left for the final moments of the doujin/ game as a dramatic ending factor. (Keyword there is "Usually").

By the way, the one being "Stolen" from their "Lover" can also just be "Love Interests" as in they're just friends but get along well and that clearly one of or both actually like each other but they don't take the risk out of fear etc. So the person being "Stolen" doesn't necessarily have to be in a relationship with the person being cucked.'

Hope that clears up some form of misunderstanding.

edit: Also, I don't know why or where you got the idea from where you think NTR's focus for the kink is a "Feeling of Loss", when that has nothing to do with NTR at all. It's just a SO being "Stolen" from a cuck, whether the cuck finds out about it or not is almost irrelevant. I say almost irrelevant because it depends on what the writer wants to portray the cucked MC as.

 

[yudea256]

Im bugged here, when isoda enter the room, i dont have more text and i can move in invisibility WTF