RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

[4-kun]

That's why I said she would need to still have her yandere arc and be interested in Kirito first so that it would still feel like she was stolen. The point was that she didn't need to have a blackmail or corruption arc in order for that to happen. She also doesn't need to be in a relationship for it to be NTR. That's what BSS NTR is. Even if Kirito never had romantic feelings for his sister it would still work well if he missed the attention his sister gave him.

I think you may be missing an important point here. Your plot is totally fine as it is, but it’s more suitable for an fmc. Suguha had a scene-generating purpose in Fujino’s game because of the slow progression of Asuna. She took the place of the insta-corruption girl, so Fujino could show some more exciting scenes. If both Asuna and Suguha had slow corruption, Part 1 could have been boring for people who came in for SAO characters. Again, there is nothing wrong with your suggestion, although tbh, it’s more a romance story with a bit of drama than actual NTR.

I also agree with Alter that NTR is about the love interest of the MC being stolen, not about destroying his life—that’s called sadism

 

[LoyalSilence]

I think you may be missing an important point here. Your plot is totally fine as it is, but it’s more suitable for an fmc. Suguha had a scene-generating purpose in Fujino’s game because of the slow progression of Asuna. She took the place of the insta-corruption girl, so Fujino could show some more exciting scenes. If both Asuna and Suguha had slow corruption, Part 1 could have been boring for people who came in for SAO characters. Again, there is nothing wrong with your suggestion, although tbh, it’s more a romance story with a bit of drama than actual NTR.

I also agree with Alter that NTR is about the love interest of the MC being stolen, not about destroying his life—that’s called sadism

The main form of NTR is the love interest being stolen for sure and this story achieves that with Asuna. You're right that people would get impatient without enough h scenes but I'm just talking about a hypothetical where people could wait out the buildup. I don't think we truly disagree, I just think there was a chance to shake things up with Suguha where she didn't follow a corruption arc. I love corruption though so her arc in part 1 doesn't bother me or anything.

I will disagree about the "not about destroying his life" thing however. There's varying degrees of brutality in NTR but the feeling of loss is a huge huge part of NTR. For a lot of people the most effective NTR stories are normally pretty brutal. But obviously everyone prefers different things. I'm not saying saying you can't enjoy it if that isn't your thing.

 

[4-kun]

The main form of NTR is the love interest being stolen for sure and this story achieves that with Asuna. You're right that people would get impatient without enough h scenes but I'm just talking about a hypothetical where people could wait out the buildup. I don't think we truly disagree, I just think there was a chance to shake things up with Suguha where she didn't follow a corruption arc. I love corruption though so her arc in part 1 doesn't bother me or anything.

I will disagree about the "not about destroying his life" thing however. There's varying degrees of brutality in NTR but the feeling of loss is a huge huge part of NTR. For a lot of people the most effective NTR stories are normally pretty brutal. But obviously everyone prefers different things. I'm not saying saying you can't enjoy it if that isn't your thing.

Don’t get me wrong—the suffering due to the relationship being destroyed is an essential part of NTR; I’m not arguing about that. But that doesn’t mean the MC has to lose everything that matters to him, like his family, work or even his life. That has nothing directly to do with NTR, although these things can be negatively influenced throughout the story. However, they shouldn’t be the main focus of an NTR story. So basically, I share Alter’s feeling that some people are more concerned with the MC losing everything than with the actual loss of his love interest. That’s my understanding of NTR, and we shouldn’t start arguing about it; it’s fine to agree to disagree

 

[nani1995]

I'd honestly want an Orihime from Bleach Fujino game.

 

[Misarmor]

I'd honestly want an Orihime from Bleach Fujino game.

I've been thinking that ever since I played NTR online

 

[publicenemy4345]

nvm found it

 

[Cuongmt]

I'd honestly want an Orihime from Bleach Fujino game.

Yes yes yes, and narutooo

 

[4-kun]

ok everyone already finished twice at this point, why there is no 0.50 saves around at all, cmon help the mate out mod doesnt include story, and i want to hear it

There was no save included this time
Start a new game and choose '6/20' for the newest content.

 

[Laziepeon]

what kind of incest? is it related to main character?

Suguha is Kirito cousin and they keep that detail in this game. She has a couple scenes with the mc, one being an unskippable scene when she takes care of him when he is sick and otheres she does to him in secret ways that you have to use your resources at the end of day shrine to prievew.

 

[Laziepeon]

Just like in canon, Kirito and Suguha here are not related so no Incest tag is correct.

She is blood related cousin, but adoptive brother. So the cannon is they are related, but if you don't count cousin, then you do you.

 

[kinglionheart]

She is blood related cousin, but adoptive brother. So the cannon is they are related, but if you don't count cousin, then you do you.

Yea, my bad. I had her confused with another character.

 

[4-kun]

Yea, my bad. I had her confused with another character.

kinglionheart: -10 Suguha affection

 

[kinglionheart]

kinglionheart: -10 Suguha affection

I thought I remember somewhere in the recent update it said Suguha was not related but it really doesn't matter. The Incest tag is applied even if the characters are not related.

 

[Aniky Light]

Imagine Kirito opening the door and catching this scene

 

[NTR Apologist]

Imagine Kirito opening the door and catching this scene

Probs would only happen in a dream like the other times he's "discovered" about Asuna's infidelity.

 

[SixDates]

I thought I remember somewhere in the recent update it said Suguha was not related but it really doesn't matter. The Incest tag is applied even if the characters are not related.

I can't wait for the sudden plot twist in part 3 where it will be revealed that Inoda was actually adopted, and he was Kirito's blood-related brother all along, causing Suguha to malfunction for having two different oni-chans.

It will surely be peak incest content.

Now, jokes aside, I feel like there are tons of possibilities for Leefa x Kirito content in future. That being said, I don't know if we will get such scenes when the story will shift into a more IRL focus with Asuna and Inoda.

 

[NTR Apologist]

I can't wait for the sudden plot twist in part 3 where it will be revealed that Inoda was actually adopted, and he was Kirito's blood-related brother all along, causing Suguha to malfunction for having two different oni-chans.

Will there be a part 3? I hope so but I don't think Fujino (at least to my knowledge) has said anything about a Part 3 coming out after finishing Part 2. Unless it's one of those "hasn't confirmed or denied questions regarding Part 3".

Now, jokes aside, I feel like there are tons of possibilities for Leefa x Kirito content in future. That being said, I don't know if we will get such scenes when the story will shift into a more IRL focus with Asuna and Inoda.

The next update will more than likely be focused entirely on the 3 days FOG is down, ergo only IRL stuff. Best case, we get an H-scene between them; whether it be Kirito is sleeping and Sugu does Sugu things to him, or something akin to his peeping tom move in the dressing room. Worst case, we get a short interaction between them discussing potential future dates. The update after will show off the new additions to the Underground City. And down there will we maybe see some H-scenes of Kirito with either Leafa or her brothel alter ego (I forgot her stage name).

 

[kinglionheart]

I can't wait for the sudden plot twist in part 3 where it will be revealed that Inoda was actually adopted, and he was Kirito's blood-related brother all along, causing Suguha to malfunction for having two different oni-chans.

It will surely be peak incest content.

Now, jokes aside, I feel like there are tons of possibilities for Leefa x Kirito content in future. That being said, I don't know if we will get such scenes when the story will shift into a more IRL focus with Asuna and Inoda.

I doubt Suguha would think Inoda as a brother even if he was related to Kirito. She only calls Kirito onii-chan because they grew up together. Inoda is only a stranger and not the object of her love.

Will there be a part 3? I hope so but I don't think Fujino (at least to my knowledge) has said anything about a Part 3 coming out after finishing Part 2. Unless it's one of those "hasn't confirmed or denied questions regarding Part 3".

Fujino has said he is continuing Part 2 for a while and will get to version 1.0 before ending. So maybe there won't be a Part 3 and he will finish the story in Part 2.

 

[NTR Apologist]

Fujino has said he is continuing Part 2 for a while and will get to version 1.0 before ending. So maybe there won't be a Part 3 and he will finish the story in Part 2.

If he does wrap up the story in Part 2, not needing to make a 3rd part, the closest thing we'd get to a part 3 is something like an epilogue, probably similar in length to his bonus games.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

If he does wrap up the story in Part 2, not needing to make a 3rd part, the closest thing we'd get to a part 3 is something like an epilogue, probably similar in length to his bonus games.

I doubt he would make an 'epilogue' if he's already doing multiple endings, though.

Personally, if he's gonna do something like that, I would instead prefer a collection of "Alternative Endings" to both be fun and satisfy everyone's tastes, like, you could have one ending where Kirito's life is completely ruined for those that can only get hard seeing him suffering, one where Inoda loses NTR MC immunity and gets screwed over by reality like Hebishima was, one where Suguha actually Wins, etc! That way everyone would feel satisfied even if they're all non-canon endings XD