RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

[kuonkuro]

This game development's spiraling like every WEG where the dev tries to please everyone but putting everything in the game

 

[Meepopx]

In short China happened.
Just like most things porn goes against the CCP agenda or whatever so ya what he was doing was illegal.

That sucks, I hope everything is going okay for him.

As for the whole premise of having the Inoda going too fast is not something I am really on board with. The entirety of part 1 is essentially a whole game in length just trying to finally have her give in to lust and become a nympho. I was hoping part 2 would of just built on that instead of having to go through the whole routine again.

 

[icyair]

Just got done with part 1 and was wondering what all the fuss was about with part 2 and I can see where the complaints are coming from. There is way too much text and a lot of it feels like padding, it also doesn't help that there isn't a fast forward function that is usually present in these type of games. Not only that the relationship between Asuna and the Fatguy got reset, it is like most of what happened in part 1 besides the final act didn't matter at all. Asuna was super horny in part 1 but suddeny in part 2 she is acting all prude and shit makes no sense.

For me the problem lies in the last update. It was tolerable before, but this update is the end of my patience.
The battle with the tree and the upcoming massage already gave everything needed to seduce Asuna. And this update should have finally given the development of the main action of the game. Asuna and Inoda. But no. It all dragged on too long, too much focus on Asuna's mother, too much focus on trying to portray a natural seduction. Intional ruining of Kirito's character to make Asuna lean more towards Inoda. But that's not NTR. Anything else, but that's not NTR. And honestly after the last update, I don't see how this can go back to the path of NTR.
Kirito, who has seen many things and is confident in himself in the update turns into a clown, Inoda, the rapist and scumbag from the first part, turns into a great guy from all sides. And Asuna starts to resemble a mediocre love harem girl with schizophrenia and pity syndrome. It seemed to me from the first part that the scumbag Inoda should steal Asuna away from the awesome Kirito, not because Kirito is bad at everything and Asuna is willing to sleep with the first guy she meets out of pity, but because pleasure will overpower the voice of reason. I hope fujino will look at his first games, think well where this second part went.

 

[Leo D. Marstone]

Sooo, reading the last few pages and having played part 1 I have one question.

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[kinglionheart]

Sooo, reading the last few pages and having played part 1 I have one question.

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Yes it did happened. The beginning of Part 2 was a flashback to that event. There are a few dream sequences in this update and the next because it was the only way for us to see some real-world sex between Inoda and Asuna.

 

[4-kun]

Damn! After reading this, I think ppl are just worrying for nothing. He really planned it through, and when the hot content will start to come. This part 2 will be one of the best NTR game!

My guess is that this is exactly what some fans are not happy about. After studying the perks, if they are implemented as they are now, it is basically a story about Asuna finding her true love in Inoda. That is absolutely clear in the perk description.

A love story is not something most people expect from NTR.

Without giving away the exact words, it's evident from the context:

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One last thought: the only exception, in my view, would be if Inoda treats her like shit, yet she is already so fallen that she perceives it as love. We know her status most likely represents her wannabe thoughts, even if she acts totally different.

 

[Rtistik]

Hey guys, anybody knows what the option that requires 20 green unlocks ?

 

[Entoma01]

Just thoughts on the second part of the game:
The plot of the game changed in the other direction, in the first part of the game everything was like in the usual N.T.R. genre.
- stupid, blind GG. with a small penis and no stamina.
- a cunning, fat freak, a loser, with a huge penis and stamina, who presses for pity or blackmails or deceives or manipulates girls in the game.
GG doesn’t guess anything and doesn’t notice anything (well, or just a little). We observe(as a player) of hidden betrayals and enjoy it (at the end of the day in the room of memories we discover something that we didn’t see (and we get even more excited as a player and jerk off _))
Everything is going according to N.T.R.’s scenario. and blah blah blah, the slow corruption of Asuna by Inoda. And everything is fine for us (as a player) because we expected this from N.T.R.

But then we start playing the second part of the game) and everything becomes somehow wrong:
“Deus ex Machina” appears (read on the Internet what this means
in the role of “Administrator” and here the script goes in the laziest way:
- we remember that Inoda was deceived when he bought “candles”
(candles are fake) BUT on a rainy night when Asuna has already been at her house for several hours (candles do NOT affect her) and it’s BOOM! "Administrator" is just having fun and makes Asuna super sensitive. And Inoda rapes her and blah blah blah.
- further in the story, Kirito finally becomes super anxious, constantly notices something, adds 1+2 and analyzes, and begins to suspect Asuna and Inoda (but we, as a player, saw how stupid, deaf and blind Kirito is_)) and it seems that here again the influence of the “Administrator” "(after all, Kirito amuses her and she always, and everywhere, intervenes for the sake of her amusement).
- the appearance of Lisbeth, so that Inoda gets 1 more girl (but for now I assure us that she is interested in Kirito and may get him. SPOILER - NO!), she starts her own intrigue. Takes patronage over Inoda. And again, it’s not clear whether she’s a genius at finding out secrets and noticing and analyzing everything (or whether the “Administrator” directs her for his own entertainment)
- the appearance of Alice and Sinon, Alice is interested in Kirito just like Suguha, and Sinon who will go to Kirito because Hebishima will be removed from the game later (because no one is interested in him and everyone asked to remove him)
- now we have parity, Inoda will have Asuna, (Asuna's mother) Kyoko and Lisbeth, Kirito will have Suguha, Alice and Sinon, but we will be shown the tapo Alice will be with Klein SPOILER - NO!
- then the plot turns into a soap opera like Santa Barbara, there is a lot of text and reflections, the characters change their character and the first part of the game seems to be forgotten, there are almost no peeks with guesses about what is happening there (no intrigue) because we, as a player, are waiting for the end of the day to see what was left behind the scenes in the room of memories later (to have a good jerk off)
- the lazy way of how to reveal the plot continues, due to the fact that we already know that everything in the game is the tricks of the “Administrator”, all the characters lose their significance
- Asuna twisted her ankle, Inoda (after praying to all the gods) BOOM! knows how to give a massage and BOOM! Asuna forgave him for RAPE! and HARASSMENT! during the fight with the TREE! and is already jerking off to him, hiding everything from Kirito as always (but we, as a player, know that it was the “Administrator” who intervened, and not the whore Asuna, or the genius Inoda, such as they are)
- “Administrator” helps any character, or interferes in reality or in the FOG if this requires advancing the plot or explaining something
- with Alice’s hypnosis I laughed and jerked off =) The stage is fire! but the plot idea is just funny
(where then are the dances with a tambourine? or rolling a chicken egg on the forehead =) such a lazy plot...

My opinion is that the influence of the “Administrator” should be reduced, because because of her, all the characters, their actions, actions and thoughts are devalued. It turns out we are playing a game where the “Administrator” controls everyone like puppets for fun. The feeling of N.T.R disappears.

 

[dialma]

The game is really very cool. But I agree with the previous commentator. The very essence of NTR, as it seemed to me, is that a girl loves her boyfriend, but she is not satisfied with sex with him, so over and over again she finds herself “stolen” by a more depraved guy. And all the drama and feelings are built on her internal contradiction between love and lust, where she gradually loses her morality more and more and tends to believe that sex becomes more important to her than love. Therefore, the first part was a masterpiece for me. The hottest scene was undoubtedly the fireworks and action scenes.
It seems to me that Fujino certainly knows better how to make his game, but I hope the spirit of the first part will return. During the first part, I lazily skipped content with Suguha and random girls (and that’s ok), in the second part I admit I got bored from the abundance of filler content.

In any case, thanks for this game, it's one of the best in the genre along with Home Prisoner

 

[icyair]

My guess is that this is exactly what some fans are not happy about. After studying the perks, if they are implemented as they are now, it is basically a story about Asuna finding her true love in Inoda. That is absolutely clear in the perk description.

A love story is not something most people expect from NTR.

Without giving away the exact words, it's evident from the context:

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One last thought: the only exception, in my view, would be if Inoda treats her like shit, yet she is already so fallen that she perceives it as love. We know her status most likely represents her wannabe thoughts, even if she acts totally different.

In these perks, the point where Inoda asks Asuna to still play the role of Kirito's girlfriend is confusing and feels like some kind of mental disorder. from all of Inoda's actions in the first part, it's clear that he wants to make Asuna his. And that surrogacy thing, what a load of bullshit.

 

[Rubyrosesilver22]

You know at the end of the day we are still going come back to see the ending because sex scene are hot and erotic we want to see inoda bang Asuna and maybe Liz why because that tiny dark resides in are heart i like this game my only beef I hate hebishima

 

[Misarmor]

In these perks, the point where Inoda asks Asuna to still play the role of Kirito's girlfriend is confusing and feels like some kind of mental disorder. from all of Inoda's actions in the first part, it's clear that he wants to make Asuna his. And that surrogacy thing, what a load of bullshit.

Gotta admit I didn't understand this "surrogacy" thing

 

[4-kun]

Gotta admit I didn't understand this "surrogacy" thing

Well, I think, as soon as Inoda finds out that Asuna is completely fallen in love with him, he'll probably get his "revenge" by allowing them to meet. I'm sure he will use some provocative methods, perhaps putting a vibrator on her while she's on date with Kirito, but he'll forbid Asuna from having any kind of sexual contact with him. It's just about manipulation and power I guess. Same with surrogacy, it's a total victory in his eyes.

That's my interpretation. However, Asuna going along with this does not make any sense, aside from truly loving Inoda and turning into a total bitch all of a sudden.^^

On a side note, in terms of content, many fetishes will be covered, so don't worry about that.

 

[bucefala]

I really liked part one, but these comments really make me uneasy about whats to come. I hope Cuckito isnt made to be too much of a loser or be disrepected too much for no reason, or that Asuna suddenly starts turning on him for the smallest things. I hate that kind of thing in these games. For me, at that point sex scenes turn from naughty to simply plainfull.

I had the same thing happen playing Hentaria 2, until the halfway point it was naughty, after that every sex scene felt so long and torturous that I couldnt wait for story bits. It was brutal, which would be good if there was a good payoff in good endings, which there was for male characters, but not for female. They barely apologized, and if they did, it was only for cruelly betraying him and telling on him, not for slutting themselves. Even the mc only blamed himself, even if he was so sweet of a character.

Sorry for the rant, but I hope I dont feel the same with this one.

 

[Lezardvy]

Use winrar to extract the files.

Thanks.

It worked.

I was extracting the files with the default option from android.

 

[4-kun]

I really liked part one, but these comments really make me uneasy about whats to come. I hope Cuckito isnt made to be too much of a loser or be disrepected too much for no reason, or that Asuna suddenly starts turning on him for the smallest things. I hate that kind of thing in these games. For me, at that point sex scenes turn from naughty to simply plainfull.

I had the same thing happen playing Hentaria 2, until the halfway point it was naughty, after that every sex scene felt so long and torturous that I couldnt wait for story bits. It was brutal, which would be good if there was a good payoff in good endings, which there was for male characters, but not for female. They barely apologized, and if they did, it was only for cruelly betraying him and telling on him, not for slutting themselves. Even the mc only blamed himself, even if he was so sweet of a character.

Sorry for the rant, but I hope I dont feel the same with this one.

Not gonna lie, it's not looking good for Kirito by any means but he probably won't know anything until the end.
Theoretically, there is a very slight possibility that Sugu picks him up."

 

[icyair]

I really liked part one, but these comments really make me uneasy about whats to come. I hope Cuckito isnt made to be too much of a loser or be disrepected too much for no reason, or that Asuna suddenly starts turning on him for the smallest things. I hate that kind of thing in these games. For me, at that point sex scenes turn from naughty to simply plainfull.

I had the same thing happen playing Hentaria 2, until the halfway point it was naughty, after that every sex scene felt so long and torturous that I couldnt wait for story bits. It was brutal, which would be good if there was a good payoff in good endings, which there was for male characters, but not for female. They barely apologized, and if they did, it was only for cruelly betraying him and telling on him, not for slutting themselves. Even the mc only blamed himself, even if he was so sweet of a character.

Sorry for the rant, but I hope I dont feel the same with this one.

forget it, part two is a love story between inoda and asuna's mother. Well, only one scene, the battle with the tree in the previous update, is worth something. Other than that every update goes about inoda and asuna's mother, kirito is physically painful to play in the last update. Asuna is now an innocent maiden who can't decide what she wants and gives handjobs to kirito and inoda. Out of pity

 

[saitamaTM]

forget it, part two is a love story between inoda and asuna's mother. Well, only one scene, the battle with the tree in the previous update, is worth something. Other than that every update goes about inoda and asuna's mother, kirito is physically painful to play in the last update. Asuna is now an innocent maiden who can't decide what she wants and gives handjobs to kirito and inoda. Out of pity

we need more sex in battle

 

[4-kun]

forget it, part two is a love story between inoda and asuna's mother. Well, only one scene, the battle with the tree in the previous update, is worth something. Other than that every update goes about inoda and asuna's mother, kirito is physically painful to play in the last update. Asuna is now an innocent maiden who can't decide what she wants and gives handjobs to kirito and inoda. Out of pity

Asuna decides nothing, she isn't even a proper character in the common sense to begin with; she has no goal, motivation, or developement. She is just there to reflect the actions of others.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

You know at the end of the day we are still going come back to see the ending because sex scene are hot and erotic we want to see inoda bang Asuna and maybe Liz why because that tiny dark resides in are heart i like this game my only beef I hate hebishima

Well, we may have gotten an even more original way of getting rid of Hebishima after this last update, so maybe that last bit of hate from you (and me) will pay off XD

I really liked part one, but these comments really make me uneasy about whats to come. I hope Cuckito isnt made to be too much of a loser or be disrepected too much for no reason, or that Asuna suddenly starts turning on him for the smallest things. I hate that kind of thing in these games. For me, at that point sex scenes turn from naughty to simply plainfull.

Ironically, that description of Kirito is usually how Fujino went with the main girls and the MCs on his Fate games before (They fell almost instantly to the NTR guy and over time they acted more and more 'subtly negatively towards their previous love interest until they were outright not insulting them to their faces to keep the façade, poorly at that), and this SAO one was the first time he tried going a different way actually XD

Asuna decides nothing, she isn't even a proper character in the common sense to begin with; she has no goal, motivation, or developement. She is just there to reflect the actions of others.

An accurate description tbh, hell, most of the characters were like this during Part 1 and a good chunk of Part 2, as a direct result of the NTR world and NTR Tropes being applied over their personalities. Ironically, Liz was the first one to leave that mold by trying her 'manipulations', but the moment Inoda turns the tables on her she will end up the same way. And Suguha was like that too until her unexpected change in this update :O