RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

[Asr127]

I started a new game on part 2 but the game just displays a black screen after kirito take a shower. Does anyone know how to fix the issue?.

 

[Infeno2.0]

This is most likely a further corruption event of Asuna in the sense that, when Hebishima tries to blackmail Asuna, Inoda would be nearby and would immediately run to her rescue becoming Asuna's "Knight in Shining Armor".

I think he was kick out by the council because he was messing with Kirito and the 6 did not want that, so i think is very unlike he will try sometning with Asuna, but who knows.

 

[Versace217]

I think he was kick out by the council because he was messing with Kirito and the 6 did not want that, so i think is very unlike he will try sometning with Asuna, but who knows.

Probably as a form of revenge against Kirito for getting kicked out of the council.

 

[hui13594]

But to me it's less about Fujino rushing the game and more just Fujino not really planning out the overall story at all. Part 1 doesn't really have any main focus other than a typical NTR story where Inoda is going to NTR Kirito and steal Asuna from him. And honestly that's kind of all the story needs to be to generally be more or less satisfactory. But Fujino probably feels ambitious and wants to try do something unique and interesting, so they started this secret council plotline. Unfortunately plot lines like this are things that should have been developed and established back in Part 1. Like finding out after 15 - 20 hours into the game that Hebishima was actually part of this secret society is kind of yikes rofl.

^THIS
I feel like part 2 lacking clear direction, is it classic ntr like part 1 or something more? Well, this update kinda answered that, but I wish it was just a simple one "Inoda fucking Asuna while Kirito doing everything to prove himself to Asuna's mother. Because Fujino can do great stuff even with simple premise.
Also lack of direction so far, I think, was bc monthly updates are not enough time to craft the story in long term, it's difficult, and Fujino said that they are "wage slave" irl and it's understandable how hard to do such an ambitious project solo after daily work.

In game dev messege after 0.55 is conserning, bc it sounds like they are a bit tired of the game and doesn't know themselves what to do forward clearly, asking for ideas. Well, I hope you guys write them good one's so Fujino delivers

 

[variaNTR]

V0.55 Discussion
The Asuna clothes option was a long time coming a VERY welcome addition.

Now onto the spoilers...

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Overall a very nice update with a bunch of new stuff added in to spice things up.
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Wow.. I mean I haven't read yet but I guess it's some kind of story summarising judging by those picts? If yes then, thanks a lot, I will surely read this so I can pick up the plot I long forgotten

 

[ron34]

I'm still puzzled by the ongoing complaints about Inoda. . He is still the biggest lovable POS NTR protagonist. The whole story is written around him winning Asuna. Every other character introduced are meant to drive the story towards this goal. Complaining or wishing Kirito would do something to Inoda is contradictive to the story. Rather, some of the plot was meant to turn Kirito into a willing cuck.

As per the update itself, it wasn't as bad as some of you make it out to be. The council's introduction feels somewhat convoluted this late in the story, but it was a nice curveball to keep things interesting. Inoda and Lisbeth peeking on the window had me laughing. I didn't mind the way Asuna discovered fake Kirito in the brothel, rather it was a good way to break her and accept that things in FOG are just pretend. Which is what we been asking, but for some reason new posters in this thread have a problem with. The quality of the CGs was really noticeable, especially the last scene, and the music used is the cherry on top.

Also, regarding the perk spoilers, if anyone went inside the DVD store with Inoda, it seemed to hint that we may actually get Asuna and her mom with Inoda, as well as the possible scenes when you are opening the doors. Not to forget, that possible, hopefully, I wish , Inoda moves into the guest room in Asuna's home.

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[erfqwef]

It was a good update. Tons of exploration, non-linear scenes, hints about future Asuna's pregnancy.

 

[kinglionheart]

I think he was kick out by the council because he was messing with Kirito and the 6 did not want that, so i think is very unlike he will try sometning with Asuna, but who knows.

Probably as a form of revenge against Kirito for getting kicked out of the council.

Nah. The council meeting scene said the previous guy was kicked out after being caught. Probably Hebishima's crypto scam and getting caught by the police was why he is out of the group. He really didn't seem to care about the council or the plan when we met him again. Probably just wanted to indulge in carnal pleasures so don't need Administrator and the council for that. He might have introduced Sinon to the council to square things with her.

 

[Versace217]

Wow.. I mean I haven't read yet but I guess it's some kind of story summarising judging by those picts? If yes then, thanks a lot, I will surely read this so I can pick up the plot I long forgotten

The pics aren't really summary per se, but just the important snippets from the conversations from the update. There is a lot of content I skipped on like Alice's and Asuna's brothel scenes, so it's just some things that were important in the update.

 

[4-kun]

I can see this happening. It'd be similar to what happened in Part 1 with the delinquents trying to hit on Asuna when she was on a date with Kirito. Inoda is really good at playing the victim and setting up situations that make him look innocent so he might do something similar to Hebishima to further his IRL corruption on Asuna

I mean, realistically, there’s no point in trying to predict what’s going to happen, as Fujino just uses whatever idea pops into his mind to make things happen in Part 2. If you think about how low the chances were for what happened in this update, it’s crazy. Basically every character in the game was involved to make Asuna's corruption happen; even Hebishima and Agil.

But I have to admit, it’s still fun to think about the possibilities

 

[kinglionheart]

HOLY SHIT! You can still use the old Title. Just start a now game in "Convergence of Undercurrents" chapters and the Title will go back to the old one. Start a now game in "Persistently Contaminated Spring" to use the new Title again. Way to go Fujino! I was afraid you would not let us see the old Title again!

 

[Aniky Light]

Wow.. I mean I haven't read yet but I guess it's some kind of story summarising judging by those picts? If yes then, thanks a lot, I will surely read this so I can pick up the plot I long forgotten

there will be no Yui, fujino never puts loli girls

 

[kinglionheart]

there will be no Yui, fujino never puts loli girls

The reason he never put in any lolis was because China's strict laws about child pornography. That includes anything that looks lolis too even if they are legal. But now he is out of that country he could put lolis in without much issue. Maybe that is why we suddenly hear about Silica after no mention of her ever.

 

[renjen]

V0.55 Discussion
The Asuna clothes option was a long time coming a VERY welcome addition.

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Overall a very nice update with a bunch of new stuff added in to spice things up.
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The perverted old dude, Vulture Drake, is Silica's dad, see the Sugha 6/27 Good Deal scene for proof.

 

[variaNTR]

there will be no Yui, fujino never puts loli girls

Ok bro.. I mean....I haven't mentioned anything about "Yui" at all.. I don't even know what is "Yui"?

 

[renjen]

When Liz gave Kirito the xray glasses, my first thought was that she was gonna put them on him, turn them on so that he could immediately see through her clothes to further tempt him

 

[gaka200]

^THIS
I feel like part 2 lacking clear direction, is it classic ntr like part 1 or something more? Well, this update kinda answered that, but I wish it was just a simple one "Inoda fucking Asuna while Kirito doing everything to prove himself to Asuna's mother. Because Fujino can do great stuff even with simple premise.
Also lack of direction so far, I think, was bc monthly updates are not enough time to craft the story in long term, it's difficult, and Fujino said that they are "wage slave" irl and it's understandable how hard to do such an ambitious project solo after daily work.

In game dev messege after 0.55 is conserning, bc it sounds like they are a bit tired of the game and doesn't know themselves what to do forward clearly, asking for ideas. Well, I hope you guys write them good one's so Fujino delivers

I've always mentioned Fujino should focus on doing bi-monthly updates or bigger chunks. It would help with Fujino since every update is done in a very episodic/chapter like approach. This kind of further supports the lack of clear direction, as each chapter is kind of just thought of over the month Fujino is developing it. You end up with some loosely connected updates because of this.

But while this is indeed a flaw, it's just growing pains for Fujino's development as a game developer, so it is what it is.

Anyways I also agree that the basic NTR premise has more than enough to work with to at least get something done. It won't necessarily be this engaging thing, but a quote I think I mentioned in a previous post. "Ideas are shit, Execution is King", and Fujino is going down the path of trying out a potentially crazy idea, so we're on a slippery slope.

Anyways probably the last time I post/respond in the thread for a few days. Just tired talking about the update. Said more or less what I wanted to say. I'll pop back in for the progress reports.

 

[Infeno2.0]

Talking about possibilities, Fujino is using the trope of dumb slut Wife/GF whatever who get conviced by the Bull that she have to do some "training" to learn better how to please the cuck or aliviate the stress, and already happen with the BJ scene.
Inoda wil keep telling to Asuna that's is the way better to improve her relationship with Kirito, i imagine Sugu doing overtime in Kirito bedroom from now on to dry his balls before every time Asuna try somenthing new.

 

[Aniky Light]

The reason he never put in any lolis was because China's strict laws about child pornography. That includes anything that looks lolis too even if they are legal. But now he is out of that country he could put lolis in without much issue. Maybe that is why we suddenly hear about Silica after no mention of her ever.

I'm against Inonda being helped by Yui, everything is fine but not Yui, I don't give a shit if it's a game, but how much more help does that son of a bitch have to get, all he needs is for Silica to help him too, and then he also becomes a fat lolicon

 

[Aniky Light]

Ok bro.. I mean....I haven't mentioned anything about "Yui" at all.. I don't even know what is "Yui"?

Yui is an AI girl who was found unconscious in the forest and is later adopted by Asuna and Kirito