In fact, if you look closely, you can see that the whole game is based on two fragile pillars - Kirito's boundless stupidity and Inoda's boundless luck. If you just squander everything and jerk off to sex scenes, it's unnoticeable. But if you watch the narrative thoughtfully, it eventually gets annoying. And for some reason Kirito is dumb only when it comes to Asuna, in the investigation plot he quite demonstrates intelligence.
I understand that nothing can be changed now, but Fujino needed to develop the game according to a different scheme. For example, "a willing cuckold." It wasn't Asuna who would have discovered Kirito in the brothel, but on the contrary, Kirito would have discovered Asuna in the hotel, using Liz's glasses. But after the lessons on "How to be a cuckold and enjoy it" from the holy father in the church and Klein, Kirito would have realized that he likes to watch. With this arrangement, everything would immediately become simple and logical. Kirito didn't have to be dumb, and Inoda didn't have to have supernatural luck. And the fact that Kirito would suddenly start fucking Suguha and Sinon would be easy to explain - "Asuna is cheating, so I can too." And the fact that the memory is erased after leaving the blog would simply not be necessary, and Kirito would be happy that Inoda was fucking Asuna's mother - "She treated me badly, Inoda avenged me."
And the endings would be simple -
1.Kirito tells Asuna that he knows everything and becomes a cuckold in full.
2.Kirito remains silent and watches, even when Asuna has already become pregnant by Inoda.
The game would have ended long ago and Fujino would have gone to rest. Right now, he's just trying to untangle a tangle, consisting of plot holes, plenty characters, and events based on the 2 pillars I mentioned above. And at the same time extending the game until the end of the year. Poor Fujino, I hope he has a clear idea how to get out of this shit.
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