RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

[renjen]

Correct me if I'm wrong, but hasn't Kirito's memory been being affected this whole time by we assume the Administrator? You might be able to just write two of them off as just being game mechanics. Every time he logs off Inoda's blog its erased from his mind, and the memory recall shrine every night that removes all of Kirito's built up anxiety around Asuna. But wasn't it confirmed that the wild dreams of Asuna that he occasionally has were being put there?

 

[Aniky Light]

You are too categorical) I wrote above that I am a fan of the original work, but not a total fan-fan! For me, the canonical couple is good and interesting, but at the same time I am not going to kill myself with grief because in some work Asuna will leave Kirito. Over the past 3 years, I have read about 100 amateur fanfics and who did not fuck who and in what combinations))) If you try to tie all this with the original, then you will really go nuts. By the way, I wrote about this on the forum before the New Year, that some people here take it too seriously. But I also understand that all people are different, and for some, SAO could have been their favorite work, which they doted on. And what they now see in the game simply breaks their hearts.

The only thing I can advise is not to treat this as a documentary. Asuna can't be a WHORE (they called her poor thing everything here). Asuna is a graphic character and does only what a specific author prescribes for her. You can even master RPGMaker and write your own ending to this work. For example, Asuna goes into the shower, drops a huge electric dildo that Inoda gave her. She gets an electric shock and loses consciousness. And when she comes to, all the settings in her brain from Sugo and Inoda are erased. She goes out into the room, and there Inoda is sitting naked and says, well, wifey, time to fuck! Asuna - "Who the hell are you? Get the fuck out of here!" and hits him in the forehead with a stool. Inoda - what's wrong with you? You're my whore! Asuna - are you fucking nuts?! And, being a skilled user of a kitchen knife, chops off Inoda's penis and nails it above the door frame) Happy ending!

it would be more fun if he hit him with a dildo xD

 

[Infeno2.0]

I remember when I first saw the description of the perks, the point about "having a baby so that Inoda would leave her life" seemed especially crazy. Inoda doesn't need a child, he needs Asuna, so it's nonsense if Inoda is satisfied that he has a child with Asuna. I also wondered how Fujino would make a 9-month timeskip in this case, or would Kyoko's company use some kind of technology and Asuna would give birth in a week?

If you think about it that's is because she is not being controled, Inoda will do that in order to force her to submit.
The line is saying something like this "I've agreed to have Inoda's baby to end this relationship and stay with Kirito" so she will not be a Alice 2.0, everything she will do from now on will be done by her own choices.
There's even something about raw sex and creampies, where she said "i need take the pill again because Inoda even i saying no he keep having these "accidents" not taking out in time.

 

[karlA29]

When I read Asuna is having Inoda's baby to make him leave I thought it was so Inoda can have a heir. Inoda is so pathetic no one would want to his child and thus his line would end. Asuna agrees to have his child as payment to leave her life. It is a Chinese Asian way of thinking.

Wow, interesting. That's why I love forums!

 

[mos555]

I think it's comprehensible the fans frustrations with this update but at same time misplaced, Fujino did what he understood being the fans desires, he left this clear in his message that in his view and in terms of NTR this story could be over by last update because in his view the best part of a NTR story is the slowly FMC progression into corruption and he think that was done already, but the fans, mostly chinese fans, wanted more "hardcore/humiliation" in the plot so he found himself into a corner, in how to do that? the only way available was by sugestions and "Mindcontrol" which is the main sub plot/theme of the entire game.

The idea was good? Yes
The presentation of the idea was good? Yes
The final execution was good? No

I think his idea was about memorie manipulation for Yui and Asuna for her own will fall even more just playing along with Inoda shenanigans like she's being doing for the past 3 updates but in the end he gave the impression of Asuna being brainwashed by Inoda as his personal cum dump and i think he did that on purpose because the real effect will be over Yui that's how Inoda will bang her because she's already horny for that.

The reality is Fujino can easily correct that, with Asuna getting mad with Inoda in the hotel room at first, saying to him that was all nonsense and that never happened, remember Oberon talking about you had to be very careful in how to do it or the mindcontrol wont work/stick here you have the exit for Fujino.
Even in the perks list there's a hint about her being confuse over her fellings even after this last update, she will agree to have Inoda's baby in order to end their relantionship.

Now what everyone is thinking and complaining is about the mindcontrol thing because everyone thinks from now on
all will be based upon a easy Lie more or less fake it until you make it, but the thing is all those things Asuna said to Inoda are true, she never loved Kirito, she is sexual frustraded, she was with him only for a misplaced sense of gratitude/guilty and convinience, Inoda just make her give up the facade saying things she already thought about many times.

This is how Asuna will fall completely IRL.

Now the fans of SAO canon need to make up their minds, again this is a parody where the author likes the NTR genre which is about the MC being cucked and got the FMC stolen from him, Kirito is only the hero in the SAO canon here he is just a chump.

About the other characters everyone agrees thet they need some action, not only pity HJs or BJs to Kirito, someone will bang them probably not Kirito if you get the hint left by Fujino in the Admin dialogue "there's no happy endings in this story"

Asuna could have fallen quite naturally. I, and I think many people, had the feeling that there was just a little bit left, but Fujino just cut off the natural corruption and hit Asuna on the head with a hammer. Inoda, as a character, was disappointing from the very beginning by doing nothing but talking in order to steal Asuna. Inoda has achieved everything he has with the help of other people powers, incredible luck and a combination of circumstances. As if that wasn't enough, Fujino gave him a new feature for his penis - memory rewriting.

All that remained was to give him the ability to distort the space-time continuum so that Inoda could jump into the past and fuck Kyoko, and Asuna became his daughter. That's what's most disappointing - one way or another, the smooth line of corruption has been thrown out like garbage.

 

[throdo]

Correct me if I'm wrong, but hasn't Kirito's memory been being affected this whole time by we assume the Administrator? You might be able to just write two of them off as just being game mechanics. Every time he logs off Inoda's blog its erased from his mind, and the memory recall shrine every night that removes all of Kirito's built up anxiety around Asuna. But wasn't it confirmed that the wild dreams of Asuna that he occasionally has were being put there?

Kirito has been getting brainwashed day 1 to forget everything so I'm not sure why everyone is upset all of a sudden.

 

[Aniky Light]

I wish that in the end Kirito was useful for something, now don't come and write lines like "yes, like a loser cuckold" because I don't mean that, if Kirito is present in the game and is Quinella's chosen one it means something is cooking
and if Kirito decided to make a difficult decision, that of sacrificing himself to save humanity, like if I kill myself with me Quinella will also die and everything will go back to how it was before, Asuna will regain her original memory and realize that she was deceived and that it was her fault that Kirito had to make this drastic decision. Afterwards Kirito's soul remains bocata in dreams and became a new administrator and nothing at this point part three begins in which Inoda becomes a cuckold and Kirito enjoys torturing him like Quinella did with Kirito, the new bastard? (I don't know, an American name would be needed since the third part is set in America)

Sorry I fantasized a bit

 

[mos555]

I wish that in the end Kirito was useful for something, now don't come and write lines like "yes, like a loser cuckold" because I don't mean that, if Kirito is present in the game and is Quinella's chosen one it means something is cooking
and if Kirito decided to make a difficult decision, that of sacrificing himself to save humanity, like if I kill myself with me Quinella will also die and everything will go back to how it was before, Asuna will regain her original memory and realize that she was deceived and that it was her fault that Kirito had to make this drastic decision. Afterwards Kirito's soul remains bocata in dreams and became a new administrator and nothing at this point part three begins in which Inoda becomes a cuckold and Kirito enjoys torturing him like Quinella did with Kirito, the new bastard? (I don't know, an American name would be needed since the third part is set in America)

Sorry I fantasized a bit

Dick - I think it's a great American name for a bully. No matter how much we dream, Fujino will read it, then do the opposite, trample it, grind it in a mixer and dump it on us.

 

[Infeno2.0]

Asuna could have fallen quite naturally. I, and I think many people, had the feeling that there was just a little bit left, but Fujino just cut off the natural corruption and hit Asuna on the head with a hammer. Inoda, as a character, was disappointing from the very beginning by doing nothing but talking in order to steal Asuna. Inoda has achieved everything he has with the help of other people powers, incredible luck and a combination of circumstances. As if that wasn't enough, Fujino gave him a new feature for his penis - memory rewriting.

All that remained was to give him the ability to distort the space-time continuum so that Inoda could jump into the past and fuck Kyoko, and Asuna became his daughter.:ЛОЛ: That's what's most disappointing - one way or another, the smooth line of corruption has been thrown out like garbage.

To be honest she already had fallen before this update, like i said the "mindcontrol sour taste" is misplaced Fujino can easily fix that with few lines of dialogue. Mind you the first perk in the list "hypocrite".

Inoda was able to do many things with help yes those are plot conviniences, but many of his achivements were him just telling the truth about her and due to her own hypocrisy, it's not by mistake that Fujino put one line so many times in her inner monologues "i fell free with him" because all her interactions with Kirito were faked or forced but natural wih Inoda

 

[Aniky Light]

Dick - I think it's a great American name for a bully. No matter how much we dream, Fujino will read it, then do the opposite, trample it, grind it in a mixer and dump it on us.

yes, like Wolf Dick the one who wrote Law & Order

or we can call him Dick Dickenson

 

[UnknownAnonymous]

I think some people are way too invested in this project, this is an NTR hentai game, so what if Asuna's memories got rewritten? Just seeing Inoda fucking Asuna right in front of Kirito while mentioning Suguha at the same time is hot enough. just fap and move on.

And you gotta keep in mind, Fujino is 1 person and he actually does an amazing job dishing out this much content on monthly basis and is actually committed to finishing the project unlike many of the other creators out there.
And he doesn't even have tier advantages, you can be the lowest tier in his Patreon and still get access to all his posts.
So what if he slips and makes a mistake?? You suddenly going to ignore all the good things he delivered to us just because he made a single decision that you don't agree with? Get the fuck out of here.

Be happy that you get such amazing content for free. specially those cgs.

 

[Infeno2.0]

I think some people are way too invested in this project, this is an NTR hentai game, so what if Asuna's memories got rewritten? Just seeing Inoda fucking Asuna right in front of Kirito while mentioning Suguha at the same time is hot enough. just fap and move on.

And you gotta keep in mind, Fujino is 1 person and he actually does an amazing job dishing out this much content on monthly basis and is actually committed to finishing the project unlike many of the other creators out there.
And he doesn't even have tier advantages, you can be the lowest tier in his Patreon and still get access to all his posts.
So what if he slips and makes a mistake?? You suddenly going to ignore all the good things he delivered to us just because he made a single decision that you don't agree with? Get the fuck out of here.

Be happy that you get such amazing content for free. specially those cgs.

I think is this case/update was more to expectation IRL vs delivery FOG, and the way i see it some fans of his work are unfortunately "shippers" who want lovey dovey in the end, others can't disassociate this game from canon, because of that they get mad when he touch and subvert theirs "sacred cows" as in the possibility of a Vanilla love ending or some plot lines from canon.

But he's dosen't get a free jail card, his story teller abylity is lacking and that is also another big reason for complains

 

[mos555]

I think some people are way too invested in this project, this is an NTR hentai game, so what if Asuna's memories got rewritten? Just seeing Inoda fucking Asuna right in front of Kirito while mentioning Suguha at the same time is hot enough. just fap and move on.

And you gotta keep in mind, Fujino is 1 person and he actually does an amazing job dishing out this much content on monthly basis and is actually committed to finishing the project unlike many of the other creators out there.
And he doesn't even have tier advantages, you can be the lowest tier in his Patreon and still get access to all his posts.
So what if he slips and makes a mistake?? You suddenly going to ignore all the good things he delivered to us just because he made a single decision that you don't agree with? Get the fuck out of here.

Be happy that you get such amazing content for free. specially those cgs.

Your whole post boils down to the fact that Fujino is good because he makes beautiful CG pornscene. If I just wanted to see porn with Asuna and the others, i would download a 150 GB Koikatsu of mods, find the perosage maps, and run these scenes myself. If I was too lazy to download Koikatsu, i would just find something on Kemono. There's a lot of content with Asuna and NTR.

You say that Fujino sells content cheaply (with someone else's intellectual property) and makes good CG, but people are disappointed with how he presents the plot. There are players who have come to play the game to see how Fujino will develop corruption and how the characters will develop NTR interactions.

Fujino game - is just a jerk off for some, but for others, it's an emotion. There are good porn scenes in this update, I won't deny it (and no one will, probably), but in terms of the plot, it was a low blow.

 

[Infeno2.0]

Lefting brainwash/mindcontrol aside, one thing flew under the radar, the fact that Yui it's not affected/deceived by Inoda cheat abilities like the invisibility, she looked straight and talked direct to him.
In that scenario she will not be deceived either by Laefa/Sugu or Sinon since they also use cheat abilities, maybe she will be the one to discover sugu secret identity, sinon and council schemes inside FOG a tell everything to Inoda.
There's plenty of possibilities with her in the mix now, or Fujino just wanted to include her as another blowup doll to inoda bang time will tell, but one thing is certain since Asuna agreed to help Inoda to have his harem, Yui probabaly will do the same.

 

[mos555]

Lefting brainwash/mindcontrol aside, one thing flew under the radar, the fact that Yui it's not affected/deceived by Inoda cheat abilities like the invisibility, she looked straight and talked direct to him.
In that scenario she will not be deceived either by Laefa/Sugu or Sinon since they also use cheat abilities, maybe she will be the one to discover sugu secret identity, sinon and council schemes inside FOG a tell everything to Inoda.
There's plenty of possibilities with her in the mix now, or Fujino just wanted to include her as another blowup doll to inoda bang time will tell, but one thing is certain since Asuna agreed to help Inoda to have his harem, Yui will probabaly will do the same.

Yeah... Somehow I didn't think much of it. It seems like another way to get rid of strong characters like Sinon and Suguha. With this scenario, the possibility that Suguha will fall on Inoda's penis or someone else's penis becomes more real.

 

[Sinner30700]

Perfect update
This opened up all the routes for inoda x ors
Ntr harem ending ftw

 

[4-kun]

Yeah... Somehow I didn't think much of it. It seems like another way to get rid of strong characters like Sinon and Suguha. With this scenario, the possibility that Suguha will fall on Inoda's penis or someone else's penis becomes more real.

One thing I’ve learned about this game: all those little details we like to theorize about mean very little. Fujino introduced so many gimmicks and features—like the X-ray vision, the heartbeat meter, or Inoda’s ability to hide his and Asuna’s online status, etc. etc.—used them once, and then never again.

Also, Inoda lusting after other girls is nothing new. He’s been doing it throughout the entire game. It’s just his wishful thinking, nothing more. Sinon is too smart and powerful for Asuna, and Suguha pretty much hates her, so there’s no realistic chance that Asuna could somehow help Inoda corrupt them. The only real shot they have is with airhead Liz.

Now I'm gone.

 

[mos555]

Lefting brainwash/mindcontrol aside, one thing flew under the radar, the fact that Yui it's not affected/deceived by Inoda cheat abilities like the invisibility, she looked straight and talked direct to him.
In that scenario she will not be deceived either by Laefa/Sugu or Sinon since they also use cheat abilities, maybe she will be the one to discover sugu secret identity, sinon and council schemes inside FOG a tell everything to Inoda.
There's plenty of possibilities with her in the mix now, or Fujino just wanted to include her as another blowup doll to inoda bang time will tell, but one thing is certain since Asuna agreed to help Inoda to have his harem, Yui will probabaly will do the same.

P.s. In this case, the truth is, you can still ask a question - Yui was born with the help of the FOG game event and is essentially a FOG character at the moment (especially with her new body). Will she obey the FOG rules? Maybe she only sees Inoda because he's her father? And this scene wasn't made to show her "strength", but just to make the players understand "who's daddy now"?

 

[mos555]

One thing I’ve learned about this game: all those little details we like to theorize about mean very little. Fujino introduced so many gimmicks and features—like the X-ray vision, the heartbeat meter, or Inoda’s ability to hide his and Asuna’s online status—used them once, and then never again.

Also, Inoda lusting after other girls is nothing new. He’s been doing it throughout the entire game. It’s just his wishful thinking, nothing more. Sinon is too smart and powerful for Asuna, and Suguha pretty much hates her, so there’s no realistic chance that Asuna could somehow help Inoda corrupt them. The only real shot they have is with airhead Liz.

Now I'm gone.

At the moment, I'm still holding on, but if now it becomes Fujino's habit to develop a character and then throw it out, then I'll probably save my nerves too. Let's see what happens in the next update.

 

[Aniky Light]

P.s. In this case, the truth is, you can still ask a question - Yui was born with the help of the FOG game event and is essentially a FOG character at the moment (especially with her new body). Will she obey the FOG rules? Maybe she only sees Inoda because he's her father? And this scene wasn't made to show her "strength", but just to make the players understand "who's daddy now"?

are you aware of the bonus of Inoda fucking Leafa next to Sinon? well, what if it was actually a taste of what's to come?