RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

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Uwukz said:
Oh, how resentful and hypocritical you look.
Since you don't care about anyone else, you probably shouldn't impose your point of view on other people, much less forbid them from doing so in your direction.
I don't give a damn about reverse NTR. This subgenre has no place in games that are based on NTR. The author is wasting his time and energy on developing something that is incomprehensible. Especially when you consider that male protagonists in NTR games are stupid and illogical. I hate the reverse NTR in Sao, because it looks like the mentally retarded protagonist is followed by a crazy nanny-sister who wipes his arse and snot. It would've been better to keep Hebishima.
On top of that, because of the reverse NTR, the whole work turns into some kind of circus and swingers. The whole foundation becomes meaningless if the main characters don't care about each other, they both just fuck on the side.
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I get your point, but we can't call this game as "NTR" game either, because Asuna doesn't and have not love Kirito in Fujino's fictional world. Asuna surely loves big dick, but I'm not sure if she loves Inoda or not. But for this game, if someone steals Asuna from Inoda, that would be real NTR.

(just a reminder for you; I know nothing about swort art online. I only played this game and I can confidently say that Asuna has no feelings toward Kirito at all. She finds petty excuses to blame Kirito all the time, but she forgets and forgives everything Inoda does. Also she favors Inoda all the time, while ignores Kirito. If you think this game was a good "NTR" game before Suguha x Kirito and Sinon x Kirito, then you probably just think canon swort art online couple, as I heard they are one of the most wholesome couple in all anime or manga history or whatever. But for this game and Fujino's fictional world, Asuna and Kirito are complete failure as couple and there was no NTR at all, maybe just cheating)
 
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Queen_Nothing said:
Yeah that one seemed wrong. Surely tanning and hair dye are both less severe than permanent body markings? I'd say Moderate should be tattoos and piercings, with High being like actual bimbofication/body alteration.
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While a few people have said this, there seems to be a lack of understanding on how people generally perceive a character. In real life, Tattoos and piercing might be more permanent "body modifications" than a tan, but when we are talking about the recognizable character traits, especially anime characters having something like a tan completely alters their aesthetics, while a piercing or a tattoo is a minor detail that can be ignored in a character model outside of sex scenes.

To make an example with Asuna, imagine 3 CGs of her fully clothed.

On the first one, you can notice her nipple piercings through her sweater in a mild manner.
On the second one, she has a completely different tone of skin after the beach episode that never came to NTR online.
And finally on the third, we have Asuna with huge badonkadons, extremely large anime tits the size of her head.

Light, intermediate, and extreme "body modifications" through the lenses of aesthetics.
 
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Aniky Light said:
Who the fuck is wiping whose ass and mopping? Your way of speaking shows you hate the protagonist. If you don't like that Kirito has the option to hang out with Sinon or Suguha, you shouldn't care. Besides, they're the ones who come to Kirito. He certainly didn't call them, and they don't come to wipe his ass and mop his ass. What the fuck are you talking about? Someone who says things like that is obviously pissed off or frustrated.
You don't like Reverse NTR? Turn the page, and anyway, there's no Reverse NTR in this game, and I won't explain it to you since someone has already explained it.
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I don't hate the main character, I don't care about him, he's artificial and goofy. It's impossible to get any good feelings for someone when that someone is dumber than a rock and basically serves as a camera for the audience.
And of course I don't like this Sinon or Suguha crap because:
a) For the entire duration of the game's creation, it would take up a huge chunk of the author's time. That time could have been spent on better realisation of Kirito and Asuna's relationship, for example. So that they don't act like strangers to each other. But instead I get to watch someone jerk off an empty Kirito while he's unconscious or some other nonsense.
b) the whole NTR is going to hell because of this constant fucking. Kirito and Asuna's relationship is strained and delusional. Kirito, who canonically loves Asuna very much, in the game is constantly fucking on the side and considers Asuna a "current" girl. What the hell kind of NTR is that? That's some kind of disingenuous swinging that has nothing to do with NTR. I'll remind you that NTR is the main genre the game is based on. Or rather it was, the second part because of the author's constant tossing back and forth turned into something incomprehensible.
 
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Uwukz said:
I don't hate the main character, I don't care about him, he's artificial and goofy. It's impossible to get any good feelings for someone when that someone is dumber than a rock and basically serves as a camera for the audience.
And of course I don't like this Sinon or Suguha crap because:
a) For the entire duration of the game's creation, it would take up a huge chunk of the author's time. That time could have been spent on better realisation of Kirito and Asuna's relationship, for example. So that they don't act like strangers to each other. But instead I get to watch someone jerk off an empty Kirito while he's unconscious or some other nonsense.
b) the whole NTR is going to hell because of this constant fucking. Kirito and Asuna's relationship is strained and delusional. Kirito, who canonically loves Asuna very much, in the game is constantly fucking on the side and considers Asuna a "current" girl. What the hell kind of NTR is that? That's some kind of disingenuous swinging that has nothing to do with NTR. I'll remind you that NTR is the main genre the game is based on. Or rather it was, the second part because of the author's constant tossing back and forth turned into something incomprehensible.
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swinging is a piece of shit tag i wish it not exist it ruined ntr for me
 
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saitamaTM said:
swinging is a piece of shit tag i wish it not exist it ruined ntr for me
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I totally agree with you.
This may not be very enjoyable to some, but I wouldn't want there to be any people at all who come to this game for the sake of seeing Suguha or Sinon jerk off or suck the main character's goofy microdick.
The author is trying to please absolutely everyone, and as a result he's ruining the game completely. turning it into a circus.
People who want a happy ending for the protagonist go to the wrong genre. And as a result there is neither a normal quality NTR, nor an adequate happy ending for the protagonist. For "new" girls of the main character are sick on the head, they fucked half the city. And the girls themselves are mocking Kirito and raping him. And Kirito turns into a total unfaithful arsehole, not much better than Inoda.
Is this the kind of happy ending they want? Absolutely everyone ends up in the shit, including the happy ending lovers who are just self-deluding themselves.
 
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Uwukz said:
I don't hate the main character, I don't care about him, he's artificial and goofy. It's impossible to get any good feelings for someone when that someone is dumber than a rock and basically serves as a camera for the audience.
And of course I don't like this Sinon or Suguha crap because:
a) For the entire duration of the game's creation, it would take up a huge chunk of the author's time. That time could have been spent on better realisation of Kirito and Asuna's relationship, for example. So that they don't act like strangers to each other. But instead I get to watch someone jerk off an empty Kirito while he's unconscious or some other nonsense.
b) the whole NTR is going to hell because of this constant fucking. Kirito and Asuna's relationship is strained and delusional. Kirito, who canonically loves Asuna very much, in the game is constantly fucking on the side and considers Asuna a "current" girl. What the hell kind of NTR is that? That's some kind of disingenuous swinging that has nothing to do with NTR. I'll remind you that NTR is the main genre the game is based on. Or rather it was, the second part because of the author's constant tossing back and forth turned into something incomprehensible.
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Many have noticed that it's not like before, it's like watching the Indian version of Spider-Man xD
 
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Uwukz said:
By the way, gentlemen. Does anyone know what NTRS means in the Fujino poll? View attachment 5137327
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NTRS is more of a dramatic character development process. For example, Kirito finds out that Asuna is cheating on him, gets angry about it, but eventually realizes that it excites him and gets involved in this process on a voluntary basis.

On the technical side, NTRS is simply a combination of the netorare and netorase genres, in which a character can be guided along any path - complete ignorance or voluntary acceptance. It's a rather lazy option that expands the scope of possibilities and fetishes in the game, but at the same time creates a certain blurriness of the narrative.

As a result of the author's actions, the main character looks like a schizophrenic who cannot understand what he needs from this life. :LOL:

This is exactly what Fujino game looks like - Kirito cheats with several women, but at the same time, he doesn't even think for a millisecond that Asuna can cheat too. That is, Fujino wanted to prepare Kirito's transition from NTR to NTS using third-party characters (the Holy father and Klein), but he completely forgot that Kirito should also change his worldview and consider Asuna's betrayal as something possible or happened. It looks like some kind of nonsense. :FacePalm:

I can only suggest one NTRS ending for this game - Kirito will approach Asuna himself and ask, "Does she want to have sex with someone else?" And he'll offer Klein. Asuna will be happy that she can hide her infidelities and will suggest calling Inoda instead of Klein, since he is their mutual friend and can be trusted. Then Kirito realizes that judging by the sex between Inoda and Asuna, it's not the first time they've done this, but he won't do anything anymore. The end.

But as I said, none of this will work, or it will work like an alcoholic's liver (very badly), unless Kirito abruptly changes his worldview. And here we have the end of the game very soon, so again we will have to come up with some kind of "great" plot move. Administrator will change Kirito's character. And what? It worked once.
 
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Personally, I'd like Fujino's next game to be Bleach. If they analyze the situation carefully, there's good content. Soul Society would work like Fog. They could add another Inoda and have Orihime help him (or something like that), not to mention that there are also a lot of female characters. :D
 
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With all the stuff going on, I really think fujino is taking notes to make a shit game involving the characters won in the poll, he may really has no idea for the plot for the game or just gathering majority of opinions just so that the fans in ci-en and patreon don't spam or harass him when the actual game is released
 
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