RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

[Magride]

I saw some people get the same "bug" After getting the box down for work to the department. You get the security footage with the thing burning and you call Asuna she is getting railed by Inoda Etc... then you end the call and from that point you can't do shit. Can't go back to work. You can only rewatch that scene on the camera over and over again. I reported it to the author.

 

[LolKek95]

Where to find the first part? I recall playing it, but it was unfinished.

And is it any recollection room in the game? The dialogues are really annoying sometimes, I want to make a speed run.

 

[saekoa]

The question is not if the overall game is bad or good, it's good by the way, it's the feeling of lazinees that update brings.
Like i said, i understand what Fujino wanted with this, build some tension but was done in the wrong way and time.
Everyone was expeticting a exciting update to get this, that,s why people are frustrated because they know Fujino can do better than some of those "half-baked" games, looks like this time he did because he need to delivery something that's all and include a new mcguffin to Inoda, another one in the pile (plot device) to turn Liz into Succubuliz.

Like i said he is building the tension for far too long now, he should had delivered the payoff in one go not in "instalments", with that the next update already lost it's momentum.

I’m not saying every criticism is invalid. Calling out that the tension drags or that pacing kills momentum is fair feedback. That’s not what I was addressing.

I’m talking about the people who show up every single update just to dump on it regardless of what’s in it. That isn’t constructive, it’s compulsive complaining. Fujino is one guy working in a niche with limited tools and he still delivers more than most of his peers. If you want to give feedback, great. If you just want to complain for the sake of complaining, that’s a different conversation. I wasn’t really addressing you specifically, it was more of a catch-all for that type of commenter.

 

[buner1337]

Where to find the first part? I recall playing it, but it was unfinished.

And is it any recollection room in the game? The dialogues are really annoying sometimes, I want to make a speed run.

Check the first post of the first page of this thread. The part 1 links are there at the spoiler titled saikey translation

 

[niifan]

The question is not if the overall game is bad or good, it's good by the way, it's the feeling of lazinees that update brings.
Like i said, i understand what Fujino wanted with this, build some tension but was done in the wrong way and time.
Everyone was expeticting a exciting update to get this, that,s why people are frustrated because they know Fujino can do better than some of those "half-baked" games, looks like this time he did because he need to delivery something that's all and include a new mcguffin to Inoda, another one in the pile (plot device) to turn Liz into Succubuliz.

Like i said he is building the tension for far too long now, he should had delivered the payoff in one go not in "instalments", with that the next update already lost it's momentum.

this game will lose interesting plot so many things is missing

 

[vall6269]

So the last scene of the update is the menu animation, quite clever (Since we can see kirito calling from the stairs and they are hidden). And she is doing it raw. Interesting. And thats why we are kicked out of the game so abruptly too i guess.

Unlikely. The scene from the menu is one from the office I'm pretty sure
The "kicked out" part is intended, as mentioned on his patreon there's only the morning for Saturday, so I guess he had to cut the day in some way, even though it's an odd way instead of TP-ing us to the recall room lol

 

[buner1337]

Do you guys want the next update to be the last and finish this game?

Personally I feel that way or at least I hope this game finishes this year. Just felt this way when I looked at the first page and saw it was posted all the way back in 2023 which is almost 3 years ago. Time sure flies huh.
It's been great and all but it's kind of dragging now. I just feel the author should move on and try making another game in the same vein like this.

 

[Arya12345]

Was reading some of the Ci-en translated comments that community is being a bit more harsh / confused at everything it seems xD

 

[niifan]

Was reading some of the Ci-en translated comments that community is being a bit more harsh / confused at everything it seems xD

its a normal reaction how you can feel if something makes u dissapointed

 

[Infeno2.0]

I’m not saying every criticism is invalid. Calling out that the tension drags or that pacing kills momentum is fair feedback. That’s not what I was addressing.

I’m talking about the people who show up every single update just to dump on it regardless of what’s in it. That isn’t constructive, it’s compulsive complaining. Fujino is one guy working in a niche with limited tools and he still delivers more than most of his peers. If you want to give feedback, great. If you just want to complain for the sake of complaining, that’s a different conversation. I wasn’t really addressing you specifically, it was more of a catch-all for that type of commenter.

Haters will hate that's a fact don't mind them.

I agree with you that Fujino does his best and usualy delivers great content and most of the critics are bs, but he sometimes can't help himself like now, and we can tell he knew this update would be "problematic" because for the first time the pigeon had nothing to explain. What we have to do is wait, if he try to overcompensate in the next update or release some extra scene is the indication that he know he fuck it up which is normal.
And relax i never take anything personal, i just like to debate that's all.

 

[Arya12345]

Haters will hate that's a fact don't mind them.

I agree with you that Fujino does his best and usualy delivers great content and most of the critics are bs, but he sometimes can't help himself like now, and we can tell he knew this update would be "problematic" because for the first time the pigeon had nothing to explain. What we have to do is wait, if he try to overcompensate in the next update or release some extra scene is the indication that he know he fuck it up which is normal.
And relax i never take anything personal, i just like to debate that's all.

We dont debate here only hurt feelings! jk lol yea I think there will be some context added to the last night of the hotel and the morning trip back. I think he intended on it to be that way though. He wanted to leave it on a cliff hanger to leave the audience wanting more (maybe?) Just like the end of part 1, maybe he likes to end finales of chapters/arcs like this.

 

[Infeno2.0]

Do you guys want the next update to be the last and finish this game?

Personally I feel that way or at least I hope this game finishes this year. Just felt this way when I looked at the first page and saw it was posted all the way back in 2023 which is almost 3 years ago. Time sure flies huh.
It's been great and all but it's kind of dragging now. I just feel the author should move on and try making another game in the same vein like this.

That's the thing, at the same time Fujino seems to be tired of this game development, he clearly want to push this game into the next year, there's plety of things missing from the plot and because of that it don't look anywhere near the end.

 

[Ramoa]

anyway all we had to do now is wait 3 or more week

 

[Dssunra2]

I liked the update, but as it's coming to an end, everything will be quite rushed. Like Liz's case, I liked that we finally had more scenes with her, but the ending will be quite rushed.....

 

[milo366061]

is there any upgrade for bug fix? game sent me back to log in screen while i am in front of my house at 7/18

 

[Infeno2.0]

We dont debate here only hurt feelings! jk lol yea I think there will be some context added to the last night of the hotel and the morning trip back. I think he intended on it to be that way though. He wanted to leave it on a cliff hanger to leave the audience wanting more (maybe?) Just like the end of part 1, maybe he likes to end finales of chapters/arcs like this.

This is not how cliff hangers are done, a cliff hanger is something in the future that the reader or player had no way to know what's going to happen they only can speculate about it, but here we know with 95% certainty, that Kirito will discover nothing and do nothing, and Asuna is going to be rawdog and creampied into oblivion, by the way i think she already was rawdog in the hotel but not creampied yet, the only thing that remains to be seen is what plot convinience Fujino will use to do that again.

Fujino will have to do several flashbacks to explain how we get from point A to B than we have the Inoda's room scene.

 

[ciccio76]

I still haven't figured out if after the whole train sequence and getting home, the game crashes and returns to the home screen due to a bug, or if it's intentional. Anyway, I think Fujino got tired; each update is getting shorter and shorter, and I think a little less interesting.

 

[Infeno2.0]

is there any upgrade for bug fix? game sent me back to log in screen while i am in front of my house at 7/18

that's the end of the update, don't worry everyone is kinda confused about it.

 

[milo366061]

that's the end of the update, don't worry everyone is kinda confused about it.

Oh. I see. Thanks .

 

[Arya12345]

This is not how cliff hangers are done, a cliff hanger is something in the future that the reader or player had no way to know what's going to happen they only can speculate about it, but here we know with 95% certainty, that Kirito will discover nothing and do nothing, and Asuna is going to be rawdog and creampied into oblivion, by the way i think she already was rawdog in the hotel but not creampied yet, the only thing that remains to be seen is what plot convinience Fujino will use to do that again.

Fujino will have to do several flashbacks to explain how we get from point A to B than we have the Inoda's room scene.

By cliff hanger I meant leaving us wondering what happened from the last night in the hotel and the morning of coming back leading to outside the apartment....and why are they fucking outside vs inside lol