RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

[mos555]

This is exactly why I don't pay and won't pay for this game. It's just a cliched and overused generic NTR game, especially if you don't know anything about sword art online, and game's story is utter crap. If I want a game like this, I can easily find a completed generic NTR game which exactly follows same plot. There are dozens of that. Heck, even FMC may be better than Asuna for my taste, as I don't like her hair color.
So... Why would I pay monthly for a game I already know its story - how it will unfold and end? I don't think Fujino deserves a monthly subscription, if he can't bring something new (plus, the worst thing is he even can't write a proper generic NTR story, as we can see in this game MC and FMC relationship is terrible, FMC doesn't love and care about MC, while MC is just a brainless idiot who sometimes does lewd stuff with other girls and honestly this is the best treat about him).


So he calls himself as a fat assed raper who can't do anything other than humping? Fujino could face some serious problems in life if he doesn't change his standpoint

Well, I used to pay because it made some sense and the game kind of followed the rules of slow corruption, even considering that the whole second part is a soft reboot, after the raw sex between Inoda and Asuna.

The game peaked at 0.45, the scene in the treehouse because Asuna's actions had an explanation (flower pollen), Kirito didn't have to be dumb because he went off to kill the boss and then defended the treehouse, and Inoda didn't have to be a "manipulative genius" because Asuna just fell into his hands because of the pollen.

Then, in version 0.50, questions began to appear. If earlier in the battle scenes there was some explanation for why Kirito didn't notice anything - being blinded by an enemy or Asuna being in another place, then the battle scene in update 0.50 doesn't give any options at all. Why can't Kirito just look back? Just because Asuna told him to pay attention and focus? And this rape scene of Asuna in the real world somehow gets out of the narrative ( Why did Inoda put on a condom? Asuna would have gotten pregnant and found out in a couple of months, when she wouldn't have resisted. I think it's a good idea ).

Then there's version 0.55, which just ruins the whole atmosphere. Kirito suddenly became blind and deaf to Asuna's feelings and behavior. Asuna herself used to be someone who was ashamed of her infidelities and felt guilty, now she's a righteous girl who helps relieve pressure from her boyfriend, but in fact she's just taking revenge for Kirito's infidelity in a brothel (judging by how quickly she agreed that Kirito is a loser with a small dick. This has never happened before. So Asuna was just hypocritically retaliating instead of relieving the pressure). Inoda suddenly became a cool manipulator.

And then everything goes downhill into the pit, Asuna completely loses interest in the relationship with Kirito, stops resisting. The hospital would still be an acceptable arch if it weren't for Liz's absolutely psychopathic rape, but it's just my personal heavy dislike of rape, because my wife has told me several stories about what such actions do to women's minds and lives.

Quarantine arc is the worst move, because long-distance relationships in the NTR game, in which there is already no choice and the MC can't do anything, destroys the atmosphere instantly. Kirito watches as Asuna gets fucked by Inoda and doesn't even react or understand anything. Is this an NTR or a voyeurism game? So sometime after version 0.70, I canceled my subscription, simply because the game became too mundane, the characters stopped being characters from SAO, but simply became characters from any NTR game, and the game itself completely followed the path of the worst representatives of the genre. Well, that's just my opinion, of course.

So he calls himself as a fat assed raper who can't do anything other than humping? Fujino could face some serious problems in life if he doesn't change his standpoint

Fujino, before he wrote about Inoda, wrote that he wanted to go to a therapist. But apparently he didn't have time... and he turned into Inoda. In general, what's the point of going to a therapist if you can't tell him the whole truth? "I lost my mind because of the porn game and now I consider myself one of the characters."

 

[Aniky Light]

Do you know why Kirito is blind to everything Asuna does with Inoda? Because he told Asuna, "I trust you blindly."

 

[Aniky Light]

If Kirito trusts Asuna, it doesn't mean he automatically has to trust Inoda, so let's open the investigation, this farce has gone on too long

 

[Arya12345]

Just have to wait and see what happens here in a few days

 

[darkbatVX]

This is exactly why I don't pay and won't pay for this game. It's just a cliched and overused generic NTR game, especially if you don't know anything about sword art online, and game's story is utter crap. If I want a game like this, I can easily find a completed generic NTR game which exactly follows same plot. There are dozens of that. Heck, even FMC may be better than Asuna for my taste, as I don't like her hair color.
So... Why would I pay monthly for a game I already know its story - how it will unfold and end? I don't think Fujino deserves a monthly subscription, if he can't bring something new (plus, the worst thing is he even can't write a proper generic NTR story, as we can see in this game MC and FMC relationship is terrible, FMC doesn't love and care about MC, while MC is just a brainless idiot who sometimes does lewd stuff with other girls and honestly this is the best treat about him).


So he calls himself as a fat assed raper who can't do anything other than humping? Fujino could face some serious problems in life if he doesn't change his standpoint

If you dislike this game so much, then just stop paying attention to it. It's not worth wasting your time on a game you don't even like.

 

[orrpolip]

MC and FMC relationship is terrible, FMC doesn't love and care about MC, while MC is just a brainless idiot who sometimes does lewd stuff with other girls and honestly this is the best treat about him).

ABSO-fucking-LUTELY,
at this point their relationship does not exist, yet they still can't stop shouting "I cannot betray Kirito"/"Asuna is the only one for me"

Bitch, you basically betraying ur bf from day 1, chapter 1 (let's be honest ashuna was always a piece of shit girlfriend) but now u are just a mindbroken/brainwashed cumdump who is so addicted to inoda's cock(i mean veeery in love according to the narrative) u would sell ur 2 kidneys and eat shit for one more fuck(maybe she did when she gave a rimjob to inoda it happened before a bath if im correct). After the memory change stuff the "Kirito true love status" has been deleted so there is no more point to be together.

And kirito dude, you are getting HJs, FJs left and right, u titfucked ur sis, u clearly enjoying sex more with anyone else than asuna, somehow ur dick grows bigger sometimes when u having sex with another girl. I know u were written as a braindead who knows sees and hears nothing but you should realise at this point you are no longer loved or cared by ur gf.

oh and the support cast AKA kirito's harem. 4 hot chicks wants his cock for different reasons, at least 3 of them knows about asuna's affair, for every one of them the only blocker is kirito's pseudo relationship SO none of them tells shit to kirito. and the reasons are: emotional damage or "it could be too much for him" yadda yadda... I don't know about all the guys but most of us would gladly fuck anything or anyone after a breakup just to fix our EGO.


ps: i know that was a crappy summary of the plot, and there could be some explanation for all of this.
and don't get me wrong im not THAT pissed at the game and i have no bad feelings about the dev or about anyone who enjoying this. but after 40+ hours i had to rant a little bit. im also looking forward to how this will end, and in the first time in an NTR game somehow im rooting for the sad cuck of the story, which is insane

 

[SilentLuix]

The hospital would still be an acceptable arch if it weren't for Liz's absolutely psychopathic rape, but it's just my personal heavy dislike of rape, because my wife has told me several stories about what such actions do to women's minds and lives.

This! Finally I read someone other than myself noticing how trash this part was. I agree 100% with your whole comment, is as it would come from my mouth lol. The game was having a interesting plot, good moments, geniunely unique parts, worth paying a subscription, but it gradually become trash. And this scene with Liz (which was way worse than the rape scene of Suguha in part 1 which I hated so much too), was so bad, nonsense trash that destroyed every inch of respect I had for the story, you can imagine how my face was while I was playing.

Why am I here if I dislike the game so much? Because is not that I always disliked the game, I used to really like it so much, and while I don't enjoy or like the game anymore, I want to know how it's going to end, so I come here to see updates, reading others, enjoying the discussions ^.^

 

[Aniky Light]

And kirito dude, you are getting HJs, FJs left and right, u titfucked ur sis, u clearly enjoying sex more with anyone else than asuna, somehow ur dick grows bigger sometimes when u having sex with another girl. I know u were written as a braindead who knows sees and hears nothing but you should realise at this point you are no longer loved or cared by ur gf.

To tell the truth, Kirito hasn't had real sex with Suguha or any other girls yet.

 

[orrpolip]

To tell the truth, Kirito hasn't had real sex with Suguha or any other girls yet.

wait, maybe i lost the plot but the handjobs and footjobs or the titjob wasn't real? :O
i know there was no actual sex, but those sexual acts (liz HJ at the café, bathing together with sis )were real, right? if not then i'll admit i don't get what is "real" in the game and what is not...

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

To tell the truth, Kirito hasn't had real sex with Suguha or any other girls yet.

wait, maybe i lost the plot but the handjobs and footjobs or the titjob wasn't real? :O
i know there was no actual sex, but those sexual acts (liz HJ at the café, bathing together with sis )were real, right? if not then i'll admit i don't get what is "real" in the game and what is not...

Aniky was referring to actual sex, yeah, sexual acts all those did happen indeed. He hasn't actually IRL FUCKED anyone but Asuna yet...at least willingly, we know Suguha has been using his dick at lot during unseen nights (Even if only in the ass). In-game, he ironically has had sex with other girls twice already, one conscious semi-forced with Sinon and one unconscious and puppetted by Liz.

EDIT: Actually, nevermind, if you chose to do it he actually DID fuck Alice at the police station, as short and unstatisfaying for her as she was, I had forgotten completely because of how little I care about Alice in this game LMAO

 

[mos555]

you can imagine how my face was while I was playing.

I didn't even look at it, just pressed "W" and scrolled through. This is probably the only time I can really "complain" that I experienced almost physical discomfort from this scene. To understand how disgusting this is, you need to talk to at least one such girl, especially if she is young and she had plans for life, love and family. Everyone reacts to it in different ways, but it breaks everyone down. And Fujino just took this scene for granted and didn't even react to the negative, which was quite massive in the comments, and after that he also said that he felt like an Inoda. I don't understand what's going on in his head. Perhaps Fujino really should have sought medical help.

wait, maybe i lost the plot but the handjobs and footjobs or the titjob wasn't real? :O
i know there was no actual sex, but those sexual acts (liz HJ at the café, bathing together with sis )were real, right? if not then i'll admit i don't get what is "real" in the game and what is not...

Well, this, apparently, is not exactly considered "sex" in the conventional sense, rather like petting or foreplay.

SO none of them tells shit to kirito. and the reasons are: emotional damage or "it could be too much for him" yadda yadda...

This is one of the funniest moments in the game, which raises a lot of questions. In this regard, one can understand Suguha taking care of her brother (one way or another, but taking care), but why would Liz, who just set herself the task of taking Kirito away from Asuna, just not tell him, but use some vague hints (Kirito is deaf and blind, even if Liz says it outright, he won't immediately understand).

Moreover, Liz also admits to Asuna that she knows everything, and instead of blackmailing her and suggesting that Asuna leave Kirito so that Asuna herself would stay with Inoda and Liz would pick up the broken Kirito, she agrees to hide it. As if Liz knows that Fujino is planning to add her to Inoda's harem.(breaking the fourth wall - the character knows about the plot that is prepared for him, so he does absolutely illogical things that are necessary for the plot).

Sinon and Agil are also inexplicably silent. Sinon wants to get information out of Kirito's head. She could show him the truth, so that while Kirito is suffering, she can play a sympathetic friend and gain his trust and loyalty. Agil, one of Kirito's best friends, but he prefers to pretend to be a mysterious bartender and keep quiet. It's a kind of delusional cycle in which all the characters behave like schizophrenics simply because they need to keep the remnants of NTR in the game.

Fujino put logic, the meaningfulness of the characters' actions and the adequacy of the plot on the altar of one tag - NTR. And the words that have been written here more than once, that "this is a porn game and there should be no logic or meaning in it, and most importantly, this is porn with Inoda and Asuna," seem to have become Fujino's motto.

 

[timurotbasaroglu]

If you dislike this game so much, then just stop paying attention to it. It's not worth wasting your time on a game you don't even like.

I already told the reason many times why I'm still here, because I enjoy discussion here and I have my fellow homies who laugh to this game with their asses and I like to talk with them here while I say the reasons why I don't like this game and won't pay any money for it, and you don't have the right to judge that.

we know Suguha has been using his dick at lot during unseen nights (Even if only in the ass)

Wait, did Suguha inserted his penis in her ass? I don't exactly remember that.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

I already told the reason many times why I'm still here, because I enjoy discussion here and I have my fellow homies who laugh to this game with their asses and I like to talk with them here while I say the reasons why I don't like this game and won't pay any money for it, and you don't have the right to judge that.


Wait, did Suguha inserted his penis in her ass? I don't exactly remember that.

Baasically, it was a soft-retcon from Fujino to avoid the 'plot-hole' of "Suguha fucks herself on unconscious Kirito's dick until she gets pregnant and wins by default", everyone assumed she was using her pussy as the camera-animations weren't quite clear but then she clarified in-story that she had only been using her ass because she wants their first time having 'proper' sex to be while he's conscious and willing, that's why despite all her chances both in VR and IRL she hasn't actually had normal sex with him, to the point Sinon stole the march on her in that front in VR XD

 

[timurotbasaroglu]

Baasically, it was a soft-retcon from Fujino to avoid the 'plot-hole' of "Suguha fucks herself on unconscious Kirito's dick until she gets pregnant and wins by default", everyone assumed she was using her pussy as the camera-animations weren't quite clear but then she clarified in-story that she had only been using her ass because she wants their first time having 'proper' sex to be while he's conscious and willing, that's why despite all her chances both in VR and IRL she hasn't actually had normal sex with him, to the point Sinon stole the march on her in that front in VR XD

So Suguha gifted her first anal sex to his unconscious brother? Man, I really don't remember her saying that knowing Suguha she would be so proud about that but I remember nothing about it

 

[orrpolip]

Well, this, apparently, is not exactly considered "sex" in the conventional sense, rather like petting or foreplay.


This is one of the funniest moments in the game, which raises a lot of questions. In this regard, one can understand Suguha taking care of her brother (one way or another, but taking care), but why would Liz, who just set herself the task of taking Kirito away from Asuna, just not tell him, but use some vague hints (Kirito is deaf and blind, even if Liz says it outright, he won't immediately understand).

Moreover, Liz also admits to Asuna that she knows everything, and instead of blackmailing her and suggesting that Asuna leave Kirito so that Asuna herself would stay with Inoda and Liz would pick up the broken Kirito, she agrees to hide it. As if Liz knows that Fujino is planning to add her to Inoda's harem.(breaking the fourth wall - the character knows about the plot that is prepared for him, so he does absolutely illogical things that are necessary for the plot).

okay thanks, i was afraid for a moment i went braindead like poor kirito, i generally consider petting as sex(especially a titjob) or sexual act but whatever

about the other topic why the fuck even hide it? from asuna point of view(after the memory change)Inoda is her true love. So what can she even lose if kiroto breaks up with her? as you mentioned she only can lose the opportunity to help inoda creating a harem. This is fucking DUMB.
Asuna is also so addicted, she agrees on sharing her true love Inoda with others if this pleases her lover. Its not love, its addiction/mindbroken status. Like in a "goblin breeding game" or something like that.

 

[Aniky Light]

I didn't even look at it, just pressed "W" and scrolled through. This is probably the only time I can really "complain" that I experienced almost physical discomfort from this scene. To understand how disgusting this is, you need to talk to at least one such girl, especially if she is young and she had plans for life, love and family. Everyone reacts to it in different ways, but it breaks everyone down. And Fujino just took this scene for granted and didn't even react to the negative, which was quite massive in the comments, and after that he also said that he felt like an Inoda. I don't understand what's going on in his head. Perhaps Fujino really should have sought medical help.


Well, this, apparently, is not exactly considered "sex" in the conventional sense, rather like petting or foreplay.


This is one of the funniest moments in the game, which raises a lot of questions. In this regard, one can understand Suguha taking care of her brother (one way or another, but taking care), but why would Liz, who just set herself the task of taking Kirito away from Asuna, just not tell him, but use some vague hints (Kirito is deaf and blind, even if Liz says it outright, he won't immediately understand).

Moreover, Liz also admits to Asuna that she knows everything, and instead of blackmailing her and suggesting that Asuna leave Kirito so that Asuna herself would stay with Inoda and Liz would pick up the broken Kirito, she agrees to hide it. As if Liz knows that Fujino is planning to add her to Inoda's harem.(breaking the fourth wall - the character knows about the plot that is prepared for him, so he does absolutely illogical things that are necessary for the plot).

Sinon and Agil are also inexplicably silent. Sinon wants to get information out of Kirito's head. She could show him the truth, so that while Kirito is suffering, she can play a sympathetic friend and gain his trust and loyalty. Agil, one of Kirito's best friends, but he prefers to pretend to be a mysterious bartender and keep quiet. It's a kind of delusional cycle in which all the characters behave like schizophrenics simply because they need to keep the remnants of NTR in the game.

Fujino put logic, the meaningfulness of the characters' actions and the adequacy of the plot on the altar of one tag - NTR. And the words that have been written here more than once, that "this is a porn game and there should be no logic or meaning in it, and most importantly, this is porn with Inoda and Asuna," seem to have become Fujino's motto.

and what about Klein? He once tried to make Kirito doubt by saying that Asuna might betray you (I don't remember the exact sentence) but Kirito seemed annoyed

 

[biuvakhang]

Ntr online 1 saves ??? please

 

[kinglionheart]

So Suguha gifted her first anal sex to his unconscious brother? Man, I really don't remember her saying that knowing Suguha she would be so proud about that but I remember nothing about it

Yes. She does say she only giving Kirito anal because she wants their first time vaginal to be conscious and willing. You see this in the bear cam scene in the recollection room where she is riding him. Although it is not an retcon as Alter said because the dialogue always said this was anal as I remember it. If the dialogue was changed or added later then it would be retcon. But I could be wrong. I have been forgetting little details.

Also who knows if Suguha gave her first anal to Sleepito? Hebishima did so much with her, maybe they have already had anal. Suguha didn't say Sleepito was her first anal.

 

[timurotbasaroglu]

Also who knows if Suguha gave her first anal to Sleepito? Hebishima did so much with her, maybe they have already had anal. Suguha didn't say Sleepito was her anal.

If Hebishima fucked her ass off-screen, that's just a missed chance. Also last time we saw Hebishima fucked her he was using condoms, so I'm not sure if Hebishima banged her ass. Actually I'm very skeptical about it, but who knows.

 

[Arya12345]

Asuna comes back and tells Kirito to try Anal...Kirito is excited...but poor Asuna just doesn't feel anything xD