RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

[hahaha12138]

is it worth the time to play part1？

 

[kinglionheart]

The medical report at the hospital says that what excites Asuna is the trauma, like doing something forbidden and immoral like being raped by Inoda, betraying Kirito, saying dirty thing at sex or insulting or being insulted. Sex with Kirito is just normal sex so it do not activates Asuna PTSD.

How lucky for Inoda he is a egotistical rapist while Kirito is a kind loving boyfriend then. It is like the world is working to get Inoda and Asuna together!

Kirito being a chad was unexpected lmao. Not really my style, I wanted Cuckrito to suffer.

Good thing Chadrito is only on one route. If you don't want to see him then don't get on that route.

 

[Mr Technician]

is it worth the time to play part1？

I think many people will have a mixed feeling, when they play Part 1 and after that they will play Part 2. But i would recommend to see it for yourself. Both parts that is.

 

[kinglionheart]

With no offence - i will say this is a discussion. Why you assume he won't give explanation like this? We already know that Fujino is unpredictable, especially with his updates. If he doesn't try harder, he will have a lot of critique. You post - assuming he reads it here - are justifying him to not make any effort to make it bigger than it might be.
I won't change my mind and say i relieve him from thinking deeper. That will never happen. However, with reaction like yours i will just say - i will see what happens next. And my hopes are maybe too high for this author. Yet he maybe just lazy sun of a gun... who stole characters and abusing them all.

To be fair Fujino will answer some questions about how his story differs from the canon but something big like this it would be smarter for him to quite. If he throws his two cents then a lot worse "discussions" like this will happen. He hates long discussions especially if they get rude. He has locked his comments before to stop them.

is it worth the time to play part1？

Is it worth watching Avengers Infinity Wars before Endgame? Is it worth watching the previous Harry Potter movies before the next one?

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

To be fair Fujino will answer some questions about how his story differs from the canon but something big like this it would be smarter for him to quite. If he throws his two cents then a lot worse "discussions" like this will happen. He hates long discussions especially if they get rude. He has locked his comments before to stop them.

Yeah, and as extra to this, Fujino doesn't really CARE for the original IP or characters much (Though one could argue this for all NTR artists respecting the latter, but that's another different argument XP), he has always been an insta-corruption writer for a reason, he cares more about the girls getting fucked or stolen instantly than any of the depth any of the original characters or settings may have. People that have only seen his SAO game may think otherwise, but this is mostly him experimenting, and A LOT of the time you can see where trying to drag the plot artificially time and time again just makes it worse because he's really not used to not write the girls having immediately fallen 2 minutes into the plot, or even negative minutes into the plot depending on the game XD

 

[Mr Technician]

To be fair Fujino will answer some questions about how his story differs from the canon but something big like this it would be smarter for him to quite. If he throws his two cents then a lot worse "discussions" like this will happen. He hates long discussions especially if they get rude. He has locked his comments before to stop them.

Omg... I mean thanks for explanation! I think predicting future for him has no sense at all... We will see what he has cooked in this game.
And i really want to see if he will go with something even better.

 

[kinglionheart]

Yeah, and as extra to this, Fujino doesn't really CARE for the original IP or characters much (Though one could argue this for all NTR artists respecting the latter, but that's another different argument XP), he has always been an insta-corruption writer for a reason, he cares more about the girls getting fucked or stolen instantly than any of the depth any of the original characters or settings may have. People that have only seen his SAO game may think otherwise, but this is mostly him experimenting, and A LOT of the time you can see where trying to drag the plot artificially time and time again just makes it worse because he's really not used to not write the girls having immediately fallen 2 minutes into the plot, or even negative minutes into the plot depending on the game XD

I think he cares enough to make his game accurate enough for an NTR game to do some research. It is just his research only expends to the anime so a lot of nuance and details that the LN provides are not there.

Omg... I mean thanks for explanation! I think predicting future for him has no sense at all... We will see what he has cooked in this game.
And i really want to see if he will go with something even better.

Predicting what the next updates might have is one of the few on-topic things to talk about in-between updates. If not this people will start talking about what next game Fujino should do or penis size and shapes again.

 

[Mr Technician]

Predicting what the next updates might have is one of the few on-topic things to talk about in-between updates. If not this people will start talking about what next game Fujino should do or penis size and shapes again.

Ahahaha! Well, some of them looked quite off. But i think you are right. Those dayum penis shapes and sizes gonna haunt us forever... what once have been seen - cannot be unseen.
But omg, why this has to have so many shapes, why Asuna was complaining about Kirito dick being too big when it wasn't, even not that big compared to Pig Boy's...

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

I think he cares enough to make his game accurate enough for an NTR game to do some research. It is just his research only expends to the anime so a lot of nuance and details that the LN provides are not there.


Predicting what the next updates might have is one of the few on-topic things to talk about in-between updates. If not this people will start talking about what next game Fujino should do or penis size and shapes again.

I mean, even if he legit was based on ONLY the anime, he is ignoring it too, the game has even the most basic things as the characters' attitudes wrong even putting aside the made-for-NTR (Like Kirito having a small dick, being mega-blind, and no sexual stamina) aspects, like making Sugu an angry tsundere 101 back in Part 1 or Asuna retarded enough to believe anything Inoda says or does XP He 'cares' enough to just make the characters and world look and seem the same at first glance, but it's obvious he cares more for his NTR plots than any level of accuracy if his game is stared at for anyone that knows them for any decent lenght XD Mind you, that's not necessarily bad or needed when making a game like, this but I'm mostly saying it in the way that he doesn't care about SAO enough to make a gigantic plot-twist that the entire thing has actually been a canon-accurate virtual simulation using Season 3's overy compex technicalities and lore at the end, lmao (Especially as we technically already know the world is real because it's the same as in his Fate village games).

 

[Mr Technician]

I mean, even if he legit was based on ONLY the anime, he is ignoring it too, the game has even the most basic things as the characters' attitudes wrong even putting aside the made-for-NTR (Like Kirito having a small dick, being mega-blind, and no sexual stamina) aspects, like making Sugu an angry tsundere 101 back in Part 1 or Asuna retarded enough to believe anything Inoda says or does XP He 'cares' enough to just make the characters and world look and seem the same at first glance, but it's obvious he cares more for his NTR plots than any level of accuracy if his game is stared at for anyone that knows them for any decent lenght XD Mind you, that's not necessarily bad or needed when making a game like, this but I'm mostly saying it in the way that he doesn't care about SAO enough to make a gigantic plot-twist that the entire thing has actually been a canon-accurate virtual simulation using Season 3's overy compex technicalities and lore at the end, lmao (Especially as we technically already know the world is real because it's the same as in his Fate village games).

So, simply to say you think that there are no chances for Fujino to make it better? I mean i like to hope he can...

 

[kinglionheart]

I mean, even if he legit was based on ONLY the anime, he is ignoring it too, the game has even the most basic things as the characters' attitudes wrong even putting aside the made-for-NTR (Like Kirito having a small dick, being mega-blind, and no sexual stamina) aspects, like making Sugu an angry tsundere 101 back in Part 1 or Asuna retarded enough to believe anything Inoda says or does XP He 'cares' enough to just make the characters and world look and seem the same at first glance, but it's obvious he cares more for his NTR plots than any level of accuracy if his game is stared at for anyone that knows them for any decent lenght XD Mind you, that's not necessarily bad or needed when making a game like, this but I'm mostly saying it in the way that he doesn't care about SAO enough to make a gigantic plot-twist that the entire thing has actually been a canon-accurate virtual simulation using Season 3's overy compex technicalities and lore at the end, lmao (Especially as we technically already know the world is real because it's the same as in his Fate village games).

We all agree if the game was actually accurate to any of the SAO media then NTR couldn't happen. So I said the game was accurate enough. Looks familiar not different enough for NTR to happen basically. But besides the big changes like Kirito's penis (again with the penis discussion ) and the characters personality, a lot of the subtle differences only you SAO lore wizards noticed were ones not explained in the anime.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

We all agree if the game was actually accurate to any of the SAO media then NTR couldn't happen. So I said the game was accurate enough. Looks familiar not different enough for NTR to happen basically. But besides the big changes like Kirito's penis (again with the penis discussion ) and the characters personality, a lot of the subtle differences only you SAO lore wizards noticed were ones not explained in the anime.

That's why I also pointed out how even basic logic was changed in the game even outside the NTR-logic or the actual mechanics, really XD Suguha's base personalities and even the characters intelliegence in general or their way of reacting to things you WOULD know from watching the anime alone, plus other simple logic stuff, also is completely inaccurate Again, my point was just to exemplify that Fujino doesn't care enough for such an insane plot-twist as Technician was describing that 'would make the game better' in his opinion, that's all, I have long since stopped genuinely being annoyed at the countless inaccuracies or caring at all for the main plot unlike other people XP

 

[mos555]

We all agree if the game was actually accurate to any of the SAO media then NTR couldn't happen

Well, to be honest, even with the completely original SAO characters, it would be possible to make NTR if Fujino wasn't such a lazy plagiarist. If you sit, think and squeeze out a little creative thought, it would be quite possible to come up with something good.

For example, if Kirito were to kidnap members of the Laughing Coffin in the real world and blackmail Asuna-if she didn't do what they said, Kirito wouldn't receive the antidote that needs to be administered every few days.

Or, as I wrote above, the FOG game will turn out to be Sugo global plan to get Asuna a special "seal of lust."

Or someone kidnaps Asuna and you need to save her while playing as Kirito, and the more you delay, the more depraved things they do to Asuna.

Just think about how much dumber what Fujino came up with looks compared to what I came up with in 2 minutes. "Asuna meets a fat schoolboy and suddenly becomes a gullible, hypocritical, cheating whore" - It looks like Fujino spent exactly ZERO effort and time coming up with the plot.

Fujino, just took the dumbest character types from different NTR games and gave them the looks and names of famous SAO characters. There is no need to justify Fujino's lazy and leaky way of making games, as well as the extremely mediocre writing of the story and characters, by the fact that, allegedly, in the SAO universe it is impossible to make a normal NTR with original characters.

 

[Mr Technician]

Well, to be honest, even with the completely original SAO characters, it would be possible to make NTR if Fujino wasn't such a lazy plagiarist. If you sit, think and squeeze out a little creative thought, it would be quite possible to come up with something good.

For example, if Kirito were to kidnap members of the Laughing Coffin in the real world and blackmail Asuna-if she didn't do what they said, Kirito wouldn't receive the antidote that needs to be administered every few days.

Or, as I wrote above, the FOG game will turn out to be Sugo global plan to get Asuna a special "seal of lust."

Or someone kidnaps Asuna and you need to save her while playing as Kirito, and the more you delay, the more depraved things they do to Asuna.

Just think about how much dumber what Fujino came up with looks compared to what I came up with in 2 minutes. "Asuna meets a fat schoolboy and suddenly becomes a gullible, hypocritical, cheating whore" - It looks like Fujino spent exactly ZERO effort and time coming up with the plot.

Fujino, just took the dumbest character types from different NTR games and gave them the looks and names of famous SAO characters. There is no need to justify Fujino's lazy and leaky way of making games, as well as the extremely mediocre writing of the story and characters, by the fact that, allegedly, in the SAO universe it is impossible to make a normal NTR with original characters.

I think you might be one who understand it... And what i wanted to say previously was that if author goes with clever explanation - like this is some kind of Matrix game (ahaha! but yeah... i mean why not?) - the game would feel much better to handle at any perspective you play it. And it doesn't even matter the Player choices - if the Player knows this is like a Virtual Game anyway... This way you can go to main screen yet again, just like it would be a login screen to any Virtual Game.
And i think that kind of a solution would be better fitted for all Players.

 

[mos555]

I think you might be one who understand it... And what i wanted to say previously was that if author goes with clever explanation - like this is some kind of Matrix game (ahaha! but yeah... i mean why not?) - the game would feel much better to handle at any perspective you play it. And it doesn't even matter the Player choices - if the Player knows this is like a Virtual Game anyway... This way you can go to main screen yet again, just like it would be a login screen to any Virtual Game.
And i think that kind of a solution would be better fitted for all Players.

(Joke)

Yes, it would be funny if at the end Kirito and Asuna wake up somewhere, for example, on the "Ocean Turtle" from Alicization and both find out that they have been in virtual reality all this time, but each of them was in their own separate reality.

Kirito was in a simulation in which Asuna was cheating on him with a "fat schoolboy", and Asuna was in a simulation in which Kirito was cheating on her by gathering a harem around himself. Both realities are managed by an Administrator. And all these outbursts of lust, visions with a harem, the desire to get Suguha, the appearance of Chadkirito's personality is a breakthrough from Asuna's reality (in which Kirito is a harem Gigachad) into Kirito's reality. At this time, CuckKirito appears in Asuna's reality, who does not understand why all the girls are running around him. And when they wake up at the end, knowing everything that happened in their own virtual worlds, they.... And then the open final!!!

I think it's brilliant. If Fujino had come up with something like this, I would have thought that Fujino had been killed, and instead, finally, someone with a brain and imagination had come.

P.S. I wonder if it was Reverse NTR and Kirito was being molested by a fat pimply girl with glasses, how realistic would it be?

 

[NTRSandman]

I see a lot of potential for Rent a Girlfriend if the game is in NTR, just make the protagonist as her boyfriend already.

That's already being done by a different dev, plus NTR is almost too easy in that setting so it'd pale in comparison to NTR Online in terms of build-up.

Well, to be honest, even with the completely original SAO characters, it would be possible to make NTR if Fujino wasn't such a lazy plagiarist. If you sit, think and squeeze out a little creative thought, it would be quite possible to come up with something good.
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Just think about how much dumber what Fujino came up with looks compared to what I came up with in 2 minutes. "Asuna meets a fat schoolboy and suddenly becomes a gullible, hypocritical, cheating whore" - It looks like Fujino spent exactly ZERO effort and time coming up with the plot.

No offense, but what's good and what isn't is highly subjective and a matter of taste.

I'm not saying Fujino couldn't have done better, but the "she has a helper complex" angle, while not particularly original, is fine enough in my book.
Some of your examples would also require players to have a better understanding of the original works' plot, and not everyone cares about that (I watched most of the animes, but forgot most of the plot because I found it kinda silly and cringe and only watched it out of boredom).

 

[Mr Technician]

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Some of your examples would also require players to have a better understanding of the original works' plot, and not everyone cares about that (I watched most of the animes, but forgot most of the plot because I found it kinda silly and cringe and only watched it out of boredom).

Well... to be fair - i started to watch original anime because of this game NTR Online... And i haven't finished Seazon 3 yet... but my understanding goes higher and higher as i watch more of them. Sometimes also reading wiki of SAO.

 

[Dimitri.]

The game has a lot of bugs, but there is one that interferes with the progress of the game. I sit down on a chair and a black screen appears, I cannot continue playing. View attachment rn_image_picker_lib_temp_848400ae-67de-47b0-8fda-48234bea9f03.webp

 

[Dimitri.]

The developer is going to fix this.

 

[mos555]

Some of your examples would also require players to have a better understanding of the original works' plot, and not everyone cares about that (I watched most of the animes, but forgot most of the plot because I found it kinda silly and cringe and only watched it out of boredom).

Those who don't care about it, they also don't care about the plot in Fujino's game - they just came to masturbate to cool porn scenes. Fujino's plot doesn't work at all without knowledge of the original SAO (at least the first anime season should be watched).

Who is Aincrad, who is Sugo, where did he keep Asuna? What kind of ALO? How much time has passed? Are Asuna and Kirito really lovers?(it's not clear from the game at all, since Asuna, literally for no reason, starts betraying him with some "random" dude. She's only known Inoda for 2-3 weeks.)

If you don't know the answers to these questions, then Fujino's game has no NTR at all, no atmosphere, no adequate plot. It's just a bunch of obscure words, names and events.

P.S. - If the first part of the game is just a set of events and scenes that have nothing to do with SAO, except for the characters Kirito and Asuna, then the second part is very, very closely related to the original SAO, through the addition of many events, characters and memories. Fujino was just too lazy to make a normal backstory, so for those who don't know anything about SAO, this game is just meaningless porn with a silly plot and a nominal NTR.