-CookieMonster666-

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One thing that slightly bugs me in this VN is the dev's tendency to have a character say the same line twice. For instance:
Python:
nv "Maybe you should help me now? I wouldn't mind a new {i}splash{/i} of art on me right about now..."
nv "Maybe you could help me out, too? I wouldn't mind a new {i}splash{/i} of art on me right about now..."
That's not even in a conditional, so there's no reason this shouldn't have been caught. It's not nearly as sloppy as some other games, but it's still dumb. Did even a group of testers miss this? :rolleyes: And this isn't even remotely the first time this happens. It's been every so often throughout the whole VN so far, like here again, in the very same scene:

Python:
scene b2c11s07_3-a78-2-f with dissolve
"Each time she bottoms out her breasts bounce on her chest, still slick with {i}you{/i}, proudly wearing your /'art/' for you."
pause
scene b2c11s07_3-a78-3-f with dissolve
"Each time she bottoms out her breasts bounce on her chest, still slick with {i}you{/i}, proudly wearing your \"art\" for you."
 
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So, I just started this game and am currently saving the cam guys from the wasps as I write this... and honestly, why the f*** MC tries to save Xasan? He's been a pain in the ass since the beginning, takes bombs to (hopefully) finish with the other gang, it's an idiot and serves no real purpose in the story (at least up to this point). Now the other guys have to leave with nobody knowing how to drive a boat and MC is left behind (even the girls said nothing). This is supposedly a VN; however, the little choices you make are not meaningful. In this situation I chose "to stay in the boat" and even if I say "wasps deserve the bomb" MC still tries to be the hero for the wrong person (he should've prioritized the girls (and Q) and not the dumb suicide guy). Anyway... story is interesting enough so I'll probably keep playing but some things make zero sense.
 

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So, I just started this game and am currently saving the cam guys from the wasps as I write this... and honestly, why the f*** MC tries to save Xasan? He's been a pain in the ass since the beginning, takes bombs to (hopefully) finish with the other gang, it's an idiot and serves no real purpose in the story (at least up to this point). Now the other guys have to leave with nobody knowing how to drive a boat and MC is left behind (even the girls said nothing). This is supposedly a VN; however, the little choices you make are not meaningful. In this situation I chose "to stay in the boat" and even if I say "wasps deserve the bomb" MC still tries to be the hero for the wrong person (he should've prioritized the girls (and Q) and not the dumb suicide guy). Anyway... story is interesting enough so I'll probably keep playing but some things make zero sense.
I can't remember the specifics now, but I think that's because he feels like possibly Xasan might end up being important in his overall investigation, both as a member of the Syndicate and also as being tied to Nia (his sister), from the Narurra cult. Generally, during a crime investigation, it's best of all potential suspects and/or informants stay alive so you can get information from them... even when they do stupid things. Plus, he's a cop (and not corrupt, other than banging everyone with a pulse in sight practically) — generally cops don't like the idea of people dying, even crazy ones, unless they're actually evil or a threat to all of society.
 

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I like the story of the Winners club , i like the story of the Fighters or whatever the name was club. But i absolutely hate the sex cult club story.
And i promised myself that if the MC did NOT stop Lumi from getting the sex cult tattoo that i would remove the game and never play it again.

Well what i feared happened , Lumi is getting more into the cult , finally got the tattoo and with that i'm saying goodbye to this game .
The sex cult story absolutely ruins this game for me.

I wanted this to give a choice , to stop Lumi from getting a tattoo or letting her get it.
But nope , all choices in this game are irrelevant and the writer as fetishes that ruin the game for me , Fetish Locator was ruined , i had hopes that this would be different , the premise , the investigation , was so interesting , but the fact that the MC does actually nothing to stop anything bad from happening , pisses me off.

He could have stopped Lumi from losing her innocence , from getting a tattoo of a sex cult that when the cult is all arrested will be there for all her life , he could have stopped everyone from taking drugs , could have stopped illegal fighting but the MC does absolutely nothing.

"But he is undercover so he can't stop those things" he could have still stopped some of those things without blowing away his cover!
 
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-CookieMonster666-

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the Book one GOG download crashed for me consantly and when i got to the part where your about to fuck the black counceller i get 50 Traceback errors... did he not finish working on the bugs before making book 2? View attachment 5294405
In the main folder where you have the game (so not in the game folder, but the folder just one level above that), you should have a file called traceback.txt that contains the error on that screen pictured in your post.
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Could you attach that file instead, please? Then everyone in this thread can see the full error message so see all relevant details. It will help anyone who understands the error to see what might need to be done either to fix the error or to get around it.
 

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In the main folder where you have the game (so not in the game folder, but the folder just one level above that), you should have a file called traceback.txt that contains the error on that screen pictured in your post.
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Could you attach that file instead, please? Then everyone in this thread can see the full error message so see all relevant details. It will help anyone who understands the error to see what might need to be done either to fix the error or to get around it.
I ended up just deleteing and Re-Extracting it and it seems fine I think sound files were just fucked up or something from the original extract
 
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apparently mc's parents didn't tell him to not to date lunatics or he's forgotten that or he's and idiot.
 
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Dr.TSoni

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apparently mc's parents didn't tell him to not to date lunatics or he's forgotten that or he's and idiot.
Technically he was sent there to fuck information out from as many people as possible.
 
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