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Yeah it was and I recall the same thing. If you read all the dialog through out the game they may say "my Mary" alot but they never really changed any of the other references indicating the family relationship. If someone make an Incest patch it will not be the creators and I think it will not happen until the project is finished. After it finishes and Uberpie moves on to the next thing Patreon will not be able to do anything about it. I think the game creators did try to at least make it so you can change the character names for the MC's family so if you want you could just change Mary to mommy, mother or what ever and same with Tiffany. you could even input into the name change a sentance like "my mother Mary" and My sister Tiffany so that when the dialog with the names come up it will indicate sister, mother. I suspect with no proof that this was Uberpie's solution for what was promised.
 

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I wonder why in the game it also refers to the headteacher as 'The Walter' sure it should just be Walter or 'The headteacher/headmaster' I don't know how to extract and edit the lines in this game or I'd tackle it myself.
 

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I wonder why in the game it also refers to the headteacher as 'The Walter' sure it should just be Walter or 'The headteacher/headmaster' I don't know how to extract and edit the lines in this game or I'd tackle it myself.
I think it is meant to be derogatory. Its like when you say that you are talking about a thing not a person, that is the way I took it. I have no clue how to modify the game other wise I would have gone through and fixed 100's of typo's. I am not a grammar /spelling Nazi but the ones I see are just so obvious and stupidly simple.
 
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I think it is meant to be derogatory. Its like when you say that you are talking about a thing not a person, that is the way I took it. I have no clue how to modify the game other wise I would have gone through and fixed 100's of typo's. I am not a grammar /spelling Nazi but the ones I see are just so obvious and stupidly simple.
lostraven is a mensch, but I vaguely remember Uberpie not being a native English speaker. lostraven has edited a lot of content from before he was brought on, but I assume there are still parts he has not gotten to yet or slipped past em.
TLDR typos probably originated from uberpie or pre lostravens involvement.
 

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lostraven is a mensch, but I vaguely remember Uberpie not being a native English speaker. lostraven has edited a lot of content from before he was brought on, but I assume there are still parts he has not gotten to yet or slipped past em.
TLDR typos probably originated from uberpie or pre lostravens involvement.
I have spoken to lostraven about this back in the thread a ways back when he was still visiting. I know the later content is his these are typically very small mistakes. Which is why they bug me because a re-read before submission should have caught them. I really love what Lostraven is doing with the writing I agree with you he is a real stand up guy for sure. I in no way was saying he was not good. I make stupid mistakes all the time and I am not good with grammar or spelling(thank god for spell check). I read my posts before I post them and still I have had to edit a few times no one is perfect. Also re-reading a short post is far easier to to than a wall of text. There are some situational discrepancies as well like when you are in the warehouse you are using the flashlight on your phone to get to the room where Becca is but then once there you have to find a light switch because it is too dark. There were a few more that don't come immediately to mind but those may not be his fault. I said in another post some pages ago that they need a proof reader , I mean even professional writers need an editor to go through the manuscript to catch mistakes. Does not mean they are shit writers.
 
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lostraven is a mensch, but I vaguely remember Uberpie not being a native English speaker. lostraven has edited a lot of content from before he was brought on, but I assume there are still parts he has not gotten to yet or slipped past em.
TLDR typos probably originated from uberpie or pre lostravens involvement.
Uberpie isn't a native English speaker no,

While I'm not able to speak as much about the development anymore, I can say I did manage to persuade and hire on a proof-reader/editor.
 

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Will it be possible to separate Danny and Clara in the future? Danny is a great trap but Clara's slave route has gotten repetitive. And repetition and tedium is what kills games
Yes, in my opinion, Clara's slave routine was absolutely great at first, but now it's starting to decay in terms of keepeing up the kinkiness. It seems to peak, I don't know, maybe consider getting into BDSM or other things should be a option to consider.
I also don't dislike the way things are going, keep it up, fantastic work.
 

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I finally got around to finishing all the content in the latest version...

I enjoyed the slave route Red/Blue has taken with Clara and the trap route with Danny/Vivian.

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Given how the game has gone so far on the main route I don't think this is likely to happen, MC (Red/Blue/Master) has been adamant about keeping the girls to himself and not sharing, in what world is he now going to change his mind and allow that scrawny little dirtbag near any one of his women, especially when Danny seems adamant that Becca is his girl. The kid is clearly delusional and needs to be put in his place, but not by allowing him to get his rocks off with anyone, that's way too nice in my opinion. What Danny really needs is to be dominated and turned into a slave without ever having his first real taste of poontang. Clara is clearly in love with MC as has been shown so far and why would MC now risk damaging that bond for the sake of letting her get dicked by her submissive feminized son?

However in the sharing route maybe this could be a thing but it would need to happen sooner (I.E before Clara tells the MC she loves him, otherwise this will just damage an already well-told story) In the NTR version for example it could have Danny find the pills MC has just discovered and have him take them to become more like MC and then proceed to steal his girls (Not into NTR though but thought I'd put that option forward for those who like that kind of thing)

It should also allow for the MC to be able to take his girls back and either make the other guys submit through either pure domination or physical threats, if the game wants to go a darker route it should also allow you to take the life of any man who dares to touch your women.
 
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Will it be possible to separate Danny and Clara in the future? Danny is a great trap but Clara's slave route has gotten repetitive. And repetition and tedium is what kills games
I have no idea. My spoiler thread was one of many paths I'd like to see the game travel. I'm just someone with many kinks.
 

masteraaran

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Hey everyone.
I checked this game out a long time ago (as in around version 0.11.2c) and at that point I was rather confused by what was going on and it didn't seem to have much lewd content. I decided to shelve it for a while, but after reading through a few pages and seeing how interested everyone is in the story, I want to give it another chance.

That said, could anyone give me an idea of how much lewd content is available in the game at it's current state? The images in the first post haven't been updated since the first time I tried it and I've found before that the 'content' lists in first posts and tags aren't always actually implemented.

Thanks!
 

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Hey everyone.
I checked this game out a long time ago (as in around version 0.11.2c) and at that point I was rather confused by what was going on and it didn't seem to have much lewd content. I decided to shelve it for a while, but after reading through a few pages and seeing how interested everyone is in the story, I want to give it another chance.

That said, could anyone give me an idea of how much lewd content is available in the game at it's current state? The images in the first post haven't been updated since the first time I tried it and I've found before that the 'content' lists in first posts and tags aren't always actually implemented.

Thanks!
There is a lot of lewd, and with nearly every major character that could. There are a shit ton of playthrough videos on YouTube ("censored") and on various adult video sites that you could reference that probably would answer your question better ... but rest assured there is no dearth to the MC sharing his dick.
 

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There is a lot of lewd, and with nearly every major character that could. There are a shit ton of playthrough videos on YouTube ("censored") and on various adult video sites that you could reference that probably would answer your question better ... but rest assured there is no dearth to the MC sharing his dick.
Awesome! Thanks for the reply, I'll check it out!
 
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