Rake Tyler
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This game is still in its early stages so I won't rate it anymore, the graphics are very beautiful
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TheRetroAiden
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game looks good so far cant wait for more, and more ntr pls!
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zandalari
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Very nice for a first game. Pretty early on and things can change, but so far Sara seems pretty irrelevant. Take her out and nothing changes. Evelyn is the exact opposite and has the most interesting story bits so far.
Hey dev, I opened up the Owen line and so far his and MC's places were merely swapped for Eve. Does this mean that on this questline MC will get no action with her? That would be odd given all the other things that happened before.
Hey dev, I opened up the Owen line and so far his and MC's places were merely swapped for Eve. Does this mean that on this questline MC will get no action with her? That would be odd given all the other things that happened before.
JenMistress
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I am glad that I saw that this game had promise after the first release, just wanted to be sure before I added it to my Games to Play List, so tagged it with a Maybe Later. Well, this update showed that it does indeed have that promise, and this was indeed interesting. So much I enjoyed of these 4 days. Thank you so very much for this, and now that it's been added, totally be looking forward for more!!!
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This was... interesting? It's not bad, just had some odd moments.
Feels like there should be a patch for this. I know you can already do that for Evelyn in what you call her, but the other characters felt like they needed something similar. Like William calls Owen his friend. Felt like it should have been brother. And Mara and Sara feel like sisters, not just roommates. Definitely feels like there should be a patch for everyone else.
I'll stop there as it is getting way too long. There were some other little things that bothered me too but can't remember them at the moment lol. Like I said, it's not bad, it just, has some odd moments that irked me. It was just weird. I'll maybe check out the next update to see how things go, but not sure if this will be up my alley or not.
Either way, thanks and best of luck with this.
Feels like there should be a patch for this. I know you can already do that for Evelyn in what you call her, but the other characters felt like they needed something similar. Like William calls Owen his friend. Felt like it should have been brother. And Mara and Sara feel like sisters, not just roommates. Definitely feels like there should be a patch for everyone else.
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I'll stop there as it is getting way too long. There were some other little things that bothered me too but can't remember them at the moment lol. Like I said, it's not bad, it just, has some odd moments that irked me. It was just weird. I'll maybe check out the next update to see how things go, but not sure if this will be up my alley or not.
Either way, thanks and best of luck with this.
AL.d
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It mostly happens after Evelyn's first dream, when they are both present in a scene. Game stills uses second person referring to the MC but we are also seeing Evelyn's thoughts in first person. Which makes it look like we are controlling multiple characters in a scene.Oh hey, thanks for pointing that out! I'm trying to remember... which scene was that from? Was it pretty early on? Still learning since this is my first game, but I'm trying to improve with every update.
It absolutely will not happen unless you specifically pick it. It is pretty obvious, you'll get a choice, and I've made sure to put "(NTR)" right there on the option, so player won't accidentally pick the wrong one. Choosing the other path means the NTR story doesn't happen at all in your game – it's not just skipped; it's genuinely not happening. I don't know about percentage but it's not the main focus of the story, just an optional thing.
Yeah, you're right, thanks for the suggestion! Totally, feels like I have to explain it every time haha. I'll update the genre tab with the planned tags and everything. Thanks!
It's because of Patreon, I need to be careful with that. So, it has to be like that as I don't know how to do patches and stuff.This was... interesting? It's not bad, just had some odd moments.
Feels like there should be a patch for this. I know you can already do that for Evelyn in what you call her, but the other characters felt like they needed something similar. Like William calls Owen his friend. Felt like it should have been brother. And Mara and Sara feel like sisters, not just roommates. Definitely feels like there should be a patch for everyone else.
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I'll stop there as it is getting way too long. There were some other little things that bothered me too but can't remember them at the moment lol. Like I said, it's not bad, it just, has some odd moments that irked me. It was just weird. I'll maybe check out the next update to see how things go, but not sure if this will be up my alley or not.
Either way, thanks and best of luck with this.
Regarding Owen, it's because of the succubus. She kinda spots things and uses them to influence people – she doesn't really care who it is, honestly. She'll peek into memories from the day to see if there's anything useful in there. Okay, I did kinda pushes the NTR stuff a bit in this update. It's probably better for players to see what kind of content are already in the game now. I don't like my first release cause people might think differently about what the game will be. So, this update was supposed to give players a glimpse of what future content would be like.
As for Sara, make sure to try resisting on Day 2 and Day 3 – you'll get some scenes with her. I mean you kinda already had a date with her on DAY 1. When the MC is over at her place, I figure they're likely just super tired after those long cafe shifts. But hey, there's always tomorrow, right?
And about the dream? That's because the succubus is still pretty low on energy. The more energy she collects and more influence on people, more interesting things are going to happen in real life too!Yeah, that's because Evelyn is getting influenced by the succubus, but Sara isn't. Don't worry, you'll definitely see more of Sara later on! Regarding Owen, Evelyn's story with the MC is the main storyline so you won't miss out on stuff with her. It's just if you pick Owen, some Evelyn scenes will be with him. So, you won't miss out on the main stuff, just some of the scenes will be a bit different.
So glad you enjoyed my game, thanks for playing!
Ah, I get it! Yeah, that's because Evelyn is kinda a second lead at this point. The story mostly focused on Allen as the main character, it's just that you get to see a little bit from Evelyn's perspective too.
Haha, sorry about that! So yeah, I personally like Futa too. As of right now, I've only planned to include that on the NTR path. But hey, the game is still super early in the works!
zandalari
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That's cool with me as long as MC gets his share too. Owen was an interesting choice. He's so soft and the opposite of assertive that I look forward to seeing how this develops.
When you don't resist the succubus gets influence points. How drastic will the difference be with high points vs low? This can be a trap for game dev'ing. If the outcome is bad, players will bitch. If you have to skip all the sex to avoid the bad outcomes, they will also bitch. Hope you can balance this well.
Hmm, hard to say right now, as there are a bunch of things to consider. You know how some games make it feel like you get nothing if you don't pick that one option? I really don't like that. I want to make it so even if you try to resist, you still get something. Can't promise it'll happen every time, but I'll try.
loaderblaster
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i'm gonna be a bit of a hater but new dev+Ntr+harem is big yikes since most just make poor ntr stories with no emotional bulid up for it,and i've seen soo many games with these tags get Abandoned and seeing soo many tags tells me the dev is making plans as they go, so i imagine this gonna turn into a scene collector with no real story. i mean using the succubus so early just to make an Ntr scene with no bulid up in the corruption,anyways GL dev.
Really liked the VN so far. Good sympathetic characters so far and the pacing is good too. Personally I opted out of the NTR choices but I don't mind them in the story as long as you have a choice.
I'm curious, your future tags mentioning slaves. Will the LIs become slaves with enough corruption? Would it be limited to the NTR paths? Or does it mean that MC will be enslaved by the Succubus, if he doesn't resist?
Oh and I hope you really will add lesbian scenes in the future. Always nice having your LIs having a little fun with each other.
Anyway good work so far
I'm curious, your future tags mentioning slaves. Will the LIs become slaves with enough corruption? Would it be limited to the NTR paths? Or does it mean that MC will be enslaved by the Succubus, if he doesn't resist?
Oh and I hope you really will add lesbian scenes in the future. Always nice having your LIs having a little fun with each other.
Anyway good work so far
i must say, owen seems more like that one good bro/subordinate you can build a sharing path with if you are building a dominat mMC. not like your typical ntr threat at all. im rly hoping it goes in the former region with owen since i think this would fit the vibe a lot more.
from first impression it seems like neather owen nore the MC would want anything bad for the other. maybe there is room for a non-jealousy route?
from first impression it seems like neather owen nore the MC would want anything bad for the other. maybe there is room for a non-jealousy route?
"This content will only appear if you specifically choose to experience it within the game.
If you avoid selecting these choices, it will not be happening at all in your playthrough." It says.
When in reality should be responsability of the dev to create a switch for that, in the menu options, even before the game starts. That or to ask in the very beginning of the gameplay, like many other games do. It's already overwhelming enough to know that i'm playing a game that has this kind of filthyness as an option... the least the game could do is not hint about that in the gameplay, given the player chose not to.
If you avoid selecting these choices, it will not be happening at all in your playthrough." It says.
When in reality should be responsability of the dev to create a switch for that, in the menu options, even before the game starts. That or to ask in the very beginning of the gameplay, like many other games do. It's already overwhelming enough to know that i'm playing a game that has this kind of filthyness as an option... the least the game could do is not hint about that in the gameplay, given the player chose not to.
RaveDev
Ah, yes, the old debate of NTR in a harem game and the excuse that it is avoidable.
Let me ask you, why should harem fans who think NTR is repulsive support you financially in making content they hate?
Ah, yes, the old debate of NTR in a harem game and the excuse that it is avoidable.
Let me ask you, why should harem fans who think NTR is repulsive support you financially in making content they hate?