Okay, thanks for the advice, as I thought, Patreon will only have problems with Himawari and she's going to be on a patch.
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Hi! I will give my opinion, I hope not to offend anyone.
As a fan of the series I'm grateful that there are games with Naruto/Boruto characters even with Koikatu graphics, however the first 3 minutes are nonsense, Sasuke keeps saying loser to Naruto and Naruto has a shitty attitude towards him, it doesn't feel natural, in the series they don't behave like that, I know it's a porn parody but every parody has its logic, this one at least at the beginning doesn't have it.
When the "villain" appears the plot takes an interesting turn and apparently the good stuff starts, maybe if at the beginning the conversation was more nostalgic and less offensive (offensive in the childish sense, like you are a poop eater or something like that) it would be much better, it doesn't help Sasuke to call Naruto a loser all the time, he said it in practically every sentence.
PROS:
*The main characters I think are well done, they're not perfect but they're okay, although the landlady/mom I don't like at all, she looks too generic.
-good-
-bad-
*The MC is ok, I don't dislike it like in the other games made with Koikatu.
*The story, despite being the typical "you're the only man left", is well thought out and enjoyable.
*Game for fans, a good one I must say.
*The "power" given to the MC is enjoyable and gives a lot of play to a future to practically be with any female character.
*It has an incredible potential, I hope it doesn't fail.
CONS:
*The beginning of the story, I find it almost disrespectful to the fans as the conversation and how Naruto and Sasuke get along is unnatural.
-Sasuke is not like that-
-Neither is Naruto-
*The lack of animations, although it is understood that it is just the beginning, they are few.
*The game gives you a choice of what to call the Landlady, but if you decide to leave her as Landlady there are phrases that don't make sense as they don't belong to what a Landlady would say.
*The proportions of some characters look veeeery strange.
-hey dude, want some crack shit?
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So far I'm liking the game, I'm looking forward to seeing content from Sarada and Hanabi, they are my favorites.
In the future you could implement a kind of "dark patch" for Himawari content or adult characters that use a jutsu to regain a child appearance like this example:
In short, it is an excellent start, I believe that if you continue like this you will undoubtedly gain more fame and many more people will support you, there are just a few things to polish up, best of luck!
As a fan of the series I'm grateful that there are games with Naruto/Boruto characters even with Koikatu graphics, however the first 3 minutes are nonsense, Sasuke keeps saying loser to Naruto and Naruto has a shitty attitude towards him, it doesn't feel natural, in the series they don't behave like that, I know it's a porn parody but every parody has its logic, this one at least at the beginning doesn't have it.
When the "villain" appears the plot takes an interesting turn and apparently the good stuff starts, maybe if at the beginning the conversation was more nostalgic and less offensive (offensive in the childish sense, like you are a poop eater or something like that) it would be much better, it doesn't help Sasuke to call Naruto a loser all the time, he said it in practically every sentence.
PROS:
*The main characters I think are well done, they're not perfect but they're okay, although the landlady/mom I don't like at all, she looks too generic.
-good-
-bad-
*The MC is ok, I don't dislike it like in the other games made with Koikatu.
*The story, despite being the typical "you're the only man left", is well thought out and enjoyable.
*Game for fans, a good one I must say.
*The "power" given to the MC is enjoyable and gives a lot of play to a future to practically be with any female character.
*It has an incredible potential, I hope it doesn't fail.
CONS:
*The beginning of the story, I find it almost disrespectful to the fans as the conversation and how Naruto and Sasuke get along is unnatural.
-Sasuke is not like that-
-Neither is Naruto-
*The lack of animations, although it is understood that it is just the beginning, they are few.
*The game gives you a choice of what to call the Landlady, but if you decide to leave her as Landlady there are phrases that don't make sense as they don't belong to what a Landlady would say.
*The proportions of some characters look veeeery strange.
-hey dude, want some crack shit?
-
So far I'm liking the game, I'm looking forward to seeing content from Sarada and Hanabi, they are my favorites.
In the future you could implement a kind of "
In short, it is an excellent start, I believe that if you continue like this you will undoubtedly gain more fame and many more people will support you, there are just a few things to polish up, best of luck!
Special Week Thanks for giving your opinion! I really appreciate that!
I will try to explain some things in my point of view
If that's the case, It was not my intention... I tried to use "Loser" instead of "Usuratonkachi", like Sasuke call Naruto all the time, maybe was not a good choice.
About Naruto, not really my intention to make him like this, the idea was just to make a fun banter between them, like the example you gave was more like Naruto toying with Sasuke's pride to gain something, not really with the intention to offend him, my bad if I couldn't let it clear.
< something like this.
Thanks!
About the landlady, I wanted to make her similar to MC and more like a "simple" person, she's not a kunoichi just a "normal"
woman, but I can see what you're saying.
Thank you so much!
I tried to explain this at the beginning, here for example:
I thought making Naruto look this way would make clear that he's joking, that goes to my lack of writing if I couldn't make it clear.
About Sasuke's "loser", my intention was to use "Usuratonkachi", but I couldn't find an English translation to this word that would make sense in this context.
That's true, my intention was clear to make her his mom, we have a flashback of a young MC, that defines that she's with him since his early childhood, which would explain her "Mommy" way with him even as Landlady, but I'll try to make it more clear in the future if she's his real mom or not depending on what your choose.
True. Wasabi definitely is not one of my best creations, I already reworked Sakura and Shizune, maybe I can rework Wasabi too, I think her hair makes the head too big.
Both are on my plans!
As I said before, thank you so much for this, It's always great to hear what people didn't like and like it, so I can improve.
Just to make clear, what I said here is my explanation for some things, not that I disagree or think you're wrong!
I hope I can keep you with me while I improve the game!
I will try to explain some things in my point of view
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About Naruto, not really my intention to make him like this, the idea was just to make a fun banter between them, like the example you gave was more like Naruto toying with Sasuke's pride to gain something, not really with the intention to offend him, my bad if I couldn't let it clear.
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About the landlady, I wanted to make her similar to MC and more like a "simple" person, she's not a kunoichi just a "normal"
woman, but I can see what you're saying.
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I thought making Naruto look this way would make clear that he's joking, that goes to my lack of writing if I couldn't make it clear.About Sasuke's "loser", my intention was to use "Usuratonkachi", but I couldn't find an English translation to this word that would make sense in this context.
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That's true, my intention was clear to make her his mom, we have a flashback of a young MC, that defines that she's with him since his early childhood, which would explain her "Mommy" way with him even as Landlady, but I'll try to make it more clear in the future if she's his real mom or not depending on what your choose.
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True. Wasabi definitely is not one of my best creations, I already reworked Sakura and Shizune, maybe I can rework Wasabi too, I think her hair makes the head too big.
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Just to make clear, what I said here is my explanation for some things, not that I disagree or think you're wrong!
I hope I can keep you with me while I improve the game!
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First of all, thanks for reading the comment, it is also appreciated that a developer pays attention to his fans/future followers, despite being a pirate forum you can get a lot of patreons or support in general around here.Special Week Thanks for giving your opinion! I really appreciate that!
I will try to explain some things in my point of view
If that's the case, It was not my intention... I tried to use "Loser" instead of "Usuratonkachi", like Sasuke call Naruto all the time, maybe was not a good choice.
About Naruto, not really my intention to make him like this, the idea was just to make a fun banter between them, like the example you gave was more like Naruto toying with Sasuke's pride to gain something, not really with the intention to offend him, my bad if I couldn't let it clear.
View attachment 1289630 < something like this.
Thanks!
About the landlady, I wanted to make her similar to MC and more like a "simple" person, she's not a kunoichi just a "normal"
woman, but I can see what you're saying.
Thank you so much!
I tried to explain this at the beginning, here for example: View attachment 1289634 I thought making Naruto look this way would make clear that he's joking, that goes to my lack of writing if I couldn't make it clear.
About Sasuke's "loser", my intention was to use "Usuratonkachi", but I couldn't find an English translation to this word that would make sense in this context.
That's true, my intention was clear to make her his mom, we have a flashback of a young MC, that defines that she's with him since his early childhood, which would explain her "Mommy" way with him even as Landlady, but I'll try to make it more clear in the future if she's his real mom or not depending on what your choose.
True. Wasabi definitely is not one of my best creations, I already reworked Sakura and Shizune, maybe I can rework Wasabi too, I think her hair makes the head too big.
Both are on my plans!
As I said before, thank you so much for this, It's always great to hear what people didn't like and like it, so I can improve.
Just to make clear, what I said here is my explanation for some things, not that I disagree or think you're wrong!
I hope I can keep you with me while I improve the game!
I understand your points of view, and they make sense, I know that making a game is not easy, much less making a good one.
In the end it's your game and you decide how to run it.
And of course, I'll keep an eye on it from time to time.
Your good attitude reminds me of F.Lord, another developer, I remember when he just published his game, I was one of the lucky ones to play it from the very beginning.
His game didn't have a good start because some things in his game were not well planned and the first months were hard for him in terms of patreons/economics, but he didn't give up and grew a lot considering how he started.
I hope you grow too as I really see that this has potential, I will try to update my review as I play, so far they are good feelings, details that can be fixed without much trouble.
A scene like this in the future would be great, obviously with the MC instead of Naruto:
And then have Hanabi join for a double training session, man, I have such high hopes for this game.
Anyway...
Best regards!
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Even though it wasn't Developer intention I think the "normal looking" of MC mom/landlady indicated that MC bloodline are basically nobody, an unnamed family that will leave a normal life and die without any impact to the world not until disaster strike and fate choose him to be the savior. I would love if Dev decide to make some rework for her model in the long run like she's looks plain and generic at first because she had to care for daily living and MC but overtime after increasing the relationship with him she will slowly care and make herself look more and more beautiful, more seductive and dressed herself with decent clothes,.... very nice idea to see a character grow like that in each update
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what is the comic called i want to read itHi! I will give my opinion, I hope not to offend anyone.
As a fan of the series I'm grateful that there are games with Naruto/Boruto characters even with Koikatu graphics, however the first 3 minutes are nonsense, Sasuke keeps saying loser to Naruto and Naruto has a shitty attitude towards him, it doesn't feel natural, in the series they don't behave like that, I know it's a porn parody but every parody has its logic, this one at least at the beginning doesn't have it.
When the "villain" appears the plot takes an interesting turn and apparently the good stuff starts, maybe if at the beginning the conversation was more nostalgic and less offensive (offensive in the childish sense, like you are a poop eater or something like that) it would be much better, it doesn't help Sasuke to call Naruto a loser all the time, he said it in practically every sentence.
PROS:
*The main characters I think are well done, they're not perfect but they're okay, although the landlady/mom I don't like at all, she looks too generic.
-good-
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View attachment 1289565
-bad-
View attachment 1289561
*The MC is ok, I don't dislike it like in the other games made with Koikatu.
*The story, despite being the typical "you're the only man left", is well thought out and enjoyable.
*Game for fans, a good one I must say.
*The "power" given to the MC is enjoyable and gives a lot of play to a future to practically be with any female character.
*It has an incredible potential, I hope it doesn't fail.
CONS:
*The beginning of the story, I find it almost disrespectful to the fans as the conversation and how Naruto and Sasuke get along is unnatural.
-Sasuke is not like that-
View attachment 1289570
View attachment 1289571
-Neither is Naruto-
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*The lack of animations, although it is understood that it is just the beginning, they are few.
*The game gives you a choice of what to call the Landlady, but if you decide to leave her as Landlady there are phrases that don't make sense as they don't belong to what a Landlady would say.
*The proportions of some characters look veeeery strange.
-hey dude, want some crack shit?
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So far I'm liking the game, I'm looking forward to seeing content from Sarada and Hanabi, they are my favorites.
In the future you could implement a kind of "dark patch" for Himawari content or adult characters that use a jutsu to regain a child appearance like this example:
View attachment 1289587
View attachment 1289586
In short, it is an excellent start, I believe that if you continue like this you will undoubtedly gain more fame and many more people will support you, there are just a few things to polish up, best of luck!
- Feb 6, 2021
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Can't get passed sister event, keeps going to the main menu after getting +2 relationship from picking either of them.
Sorry, there's a bug in v0.3.0 with this event, you guys need to download the bugfix and follow the instructions, is just a 20kb file.
You just need to play and the events will fire, but can you tell me specifically which one is not triggering, I can say what you need to do.
I can definitely do something like that! Great idea!
- Jun 2, 2020
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Thank you!
Sorry if the terms are not too friendly for people who don't know Naruto.
Thank you!
Here: Bugfix
