So.. wow.. where to even start with this one? How about the fact it's missing a rape tag for one.. or the fact that within 2 min the woman forgives the MC and becomes his secret wife? And that's just the start of how much of a shitbag the MC is..
The story doesn't get any better after that and the dialog is just painful to read. I guess the one good thing is the English is actually coherent so.. yay proper English?
Oh and props for having the whitest "Indian" girl ever.. at least she had the brains to run away (though I'm sure she'll be back.. poor girl)
The story doesn't get any better after that and the dialog is just painful to read. I guess the one good thing is the English is actually coherent so.. yay proper English?
Oh and props for having the whitest "Indian" girl ever.. at least she had the brains to run away (though I'm sure she'll be back.. poor girl)