VN Ren'Py Taking Advantage [v0.06] [SSHGAMES]

[Deleted member 5590233]

This man must have the strength of the gods to have this LONG ASS convo and hold her up in the same position LMAO!!!


Rt, I used to really like this game. A story about you cucking your brother and having a family with his wife; hot, new, very interesting.
But now the Dialogue is so bloated and bland. I just skipped through the whole game just to see the sex scene without context. I'm disappointed; If the dialogue isn't fixed soon, I'll have to drop this. Such a waste of a good premise ...

100%. You can't really fix the dialoguethough without exposing a larger problem; that this game has very little content or story to it. It's padded out by characters talking in this unnaturally verbous way, and then the writer explaining (in the most blunt way possible) exactly what each character thinks about what was just said. Meanwhile the audience looks at the same render for ten minutes from slightly different angles.

If you stripped out all the extraneous dialogue the entire game so far would be about five minutes long. There really is nothing here apart from some decent character models.

 

[s.freud]

Australia wants pedos on the streets =)

it seems so;
If you want the original, remove all alternatives!

 

[mare44]

great

 

[MrBenny]

Well I was enjoying this title, but I'm finding the conversation text hard to follow just after a short time into the story. The internal talk and speaking out loud text are hard to differentiate from, because they look too similar. (With NO italic or surrounding bracket, and with only a slight grey shade applied to the though text...at it's present state, makes it hard to follow. Which loses my interests to move forward with the story, having to constantly evaluate what kind of text I just read....internal or speaking directly.)

It would have made better sense, when ever an eternal thought takes place...that it was displayed with italic and the text is bracketed. This would better separate the thought text, from speak out text. Regards.



This is what "Normal speaking out loud text" looks like....



And this is what "Internal though text" looks like....

 

[Deleted member 2986322]

is there a lot of sex scenes so far?

 

[Sirrah]

is there a lot of sex scenes so far?

Yes, a decent number for being so early in development.

 

[Xo Mo]

Having played through most of this update, I do agree that the reviews about the script are fairly accurate. Of the 2000 or so lines, about 1/2 of them are literally repeating a line of thought from 3-4 lines above it or paraphrasing it but essentially containing the exact same content. It is very redundant and caused me to speed-click and skip through quite a few moments where two or more people say the same thing to one another 2-3 times in a row, in addition to a 4th time just thinking it.

The art is fine, the models are good looking, and the premise is fun, for sure. But the text could be edited down significantly.

One minor style thing is how the renders of two people thinking and talking happen. It's the both of them in one pose, but instead of animating or adjusting the pose, the camera angle changes without a single alteration of the position or pose, expression or sense of any movement. These events could be better animated, even with still shots but actually physically changing the position of an arm, leg, hand, or even facial expression. It's literally the unmoving frozen state taken from 2-3 angles.

 

[yoonbalol]

how many lolis are fucked so far? that's all i care about. lolis. being fucked. (with dicks)

 

[Rintal]

how many lolis are fucked so far? that's all i care about. lolis. being fucked. (with dicks)

Lolis with dicks? Monsieur is an expert in perversions!

 

[FormerlyknownasOlheden]

Lolis with dicks? Monsieur is an expert in perversions!

Yeah, that’s some next level pervyness.

 

[Kilersss]

Guys, why can’t I choose option 1 at the beginning of the game? What do you need to do to select option 1 at the beginning of the game?

 

[Kilersss]

Damn, I can’t select option 1 on stage 2? Is this just the case with Mina or has everyone encountered the same problem? If this is of no use to me, then how should I solve this problem?!

 

[Kilersss]

MOTHER OF HIS FUCK.. tiper this grave game after this scene where MC introduces Audrey.. shows a mistake or something like this.. I can’t continue to play,,, is this only for me or for someone else? Where can I then download the Russian version so that it doesn’t make a mistake during this scene?!?

 

[SshGames]

Guys, why can’t I choose option 1 at the beginning of the game? What do you need to do to select option 1 at the beginning of the game?

Damn, I can’t select option 1 on stage 2? Is this just the case with Mina or has everyone encountered the same problem? If this is of no use to me, then how should I solve this problem?!

I'm not sure which unofficial mod you are using, but both of the said scenes only have 2 options not 3.

Edit: The mod you are using is showing the sentences as a option but it's not a option in the first place.

 

[SshGames]

MOTHER OF HIS FUCK.. tiper this grave game after this scene where MC introduces Audrey.. shows a mistake or something like this.. I can’t continue to play,,, is this only for me or for someone else? Where can I then download the Russian version so that it doesn’t make a mistake during this scene?!?

Open and edit the "Flashback_meet_b_w.rpy" file with notepad then find and remove (show screen heart).

 

[rafa30]

Very Good
More Violet and Dad

 

[Deleted member 3168918]

It's fun. Really good for a 0.3 .
It doesn't seem to be able to decide on its target audience and the MC is really inconsistent (why does he go full creep, when he's already suceeding with charm?) but it's fun.

The netori aspect is wasted. He starts with the girls from the beginning and there is only really one scene where a LI chooses MC over her partner (the diaper change scene).

Shower scene was probably the best scene. The escalation flowed well. Lucy's story is the worst. Would be much better without the creepy medical condition angle.

 

[Kilersss]

Open and edit the "Flashback_meet_b_w.rpy" file with notepad then find and remove (show screen heart).

I play on Android, I don’t think that mine has somewhere the same folder that you mentioned... and I downloaded this game from etawa site

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since the game is in Russian .. the strange thing is that before there was no such problem, I could play this game normally and there was such a problem that I mentioned earlier for sure .. but after the update, this problem is payevlayets during the scene where MS's brother introduces him to Audrey and It doesn’t work anymore... maybe I need to download the tiper from other sites for Android, but for some reason I didn’t find where it is from the Russian language.. maybe you know where to look then?!

 

[Margon27]

German Translation ver 0.03 ready - Deutsch-Übersetzung von Ver 0.03 fertig!
Taking Advantage - German translation - Deutsch-Übersetzung
Unfortunately, the developer changed a lot with the update 0.03, inserted whole text passages into old parts, set variables differently etc. etc.
As a result, I had to translate practically the whole game from scratch.
Should further updates cause similar troubles, I will unfortunately have to stop my work on this game.

 

[AVA writer]

This game didn't have me... until the shower scene with the daughter, that was hot as hell. I see a lot of potential in this. The writing and renders are both good.