- Mar 17, 2019
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OK it's not bad game, there are issues with the writing and characterization, but honestly those I can mostly ignore in the pursuit of a visual novel fap experience. My REALLY big pet peeve is that almost all the dirty talk is literally just the game telling you she "told you very dirty things". WHAT DIRTY THINGS? Am I supposed to just imagine what they said? Are they telling you how tight their pussy is or are they telling you the floor needs a good scrubbing after your done? What's dirty exactly?
It's somewhat of a boner killer when I read "while she embraced me and whispered very dirty things into my ear", like that's fucking PG-13 type shit, I want to know WHAT dirty shit she's saying, there's few things sexier than a girl dirty talking to me, but referencing it isn't particularly sexy at all.
EDIT: Instead of "facepalming" me, maybe have the expectation that somebody writing a visual novel live up to the most basic standards of writing you'd expect of the erotica genre. I'm not expecting anything outstanding, but at least put in the effort.
It's somewhat of a boner killer when I read "while she embraced me and whispered very dirty things into my ear", like that's fucking PG-13 type shit, I want to know WHAT dirty shit she's saying, there's few things sexier than a girl dirty talking to me, but referencing it isn't particularly sexy at all.
EDIT: Instead of "facepalming" me, maybe have the expectation that somebody writing a visual novel live up to the most basic standards of writing you'd expect of the erotica genre. I'm not expecting anything outstanding, but at least put in the effort.
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