Looks promising, a few typos here and there, but overall good for a first attempt at a kinetic novel.
Based on the story so far, the only choices I can foresee you'd need (if you ever plan to veer off the simple kinetic path), would be whether or not to get involved with other girls (besides the main LI).
I'd also suggest adding the option of renaming the MC, but that's a minor point for a kinetic novel.