How is nobody mentioning the absolute horrible English? I get it, if it's not your native language it can be hard. I still stugge with it after 25+ years and I use it daily. But damnit, have someone proofread it. Have your patreons proofread it and correct the text for next updates.
There are browser addons like grammerly that spellcheck and/or rewrite your text. Hell, ask chatgpt to do it. ANYTHING!!!!
One example
"oh, War magic wands are hardly illegal for us students" (first of all, what? War magic sounds dangerous and not something students should be allowed to touch.
Bit further
"we must be really careful. It's really dangerous and strictly prohibited".
More than anything than bugfixes, this needs either a dedicated proofreader, or a proper rewrite.