- Thread starter Rashok
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- Feb 2, 2018
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if you're meaning the description of the pupils voice, that probably reads as sultry.
- Mar 8, 2018
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'My' girlfriend had sex with me, that's new. :biggrin: Thank you for that. Dialogue needs a little TLC but not too bad overall.
Thanks everyone who played this short demo. I got feedback what I'm doing wrong and I will try fix this with 0.2 version. One more thing I also search someone who have free time and want to help me with script editing. English is not my native language and I need help.
- Jun 2, 2017
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Of course, he will be tempted, as soon as his girlfriend's mom comes to visit. Or maybe he will meet his MILF in another place?
- Nov 16, 2017
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Well, I gave this short first release a go, and I'm not all that impressed so far... This is a new developer working on his/her first project, and it sort of shows... The story is a very basic one, with not a whole lot of depth and/or meaning... it is mostly just a Love/Lust relationship building game, based on choices... And most of the current content, is pretty much just a porn fest, if you decide to pursue any type of sexual relationship... The non-sexual choices lead no where, beyond just not getting relationship points of one type or the other... The text also needs some work, as although it is mostly readable, it's a slight mix of broken English as well as spelling/grammar issues... There are a few character students that I've seen in other VN/Games, so I'll assume they are shout outs... I'm thinking this is more of a getting their feet wet, for the developers... I went ahead and posted my review...
This seems like it was written by a third grader. I understand if English isn't your first language but damn, there's ways to check these things before throwing a game demo out.
- Sep 21, 2017
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this place looks deader than state of decay 2 :tf:
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