Hello.
It's always a good thing to have more bi games but the result is strange.
The worldbuilding is limited.
The characters are few and could be described better (outside Teya).
The plot is interesting and could lead in various directions.
The artistic side could use more care (we can see the pixels too much, particularly when we watch Teya from behind when entering her office for the first time).
It's really difficult to follow the game. You didn't differentiate the dialogs from the thoughts and the simple elements of description are done through the characters (why is Teya describing herself or why is Marcus describing his route and the ambiance of the office...), which is weird. The flow of event is too straight (it's just happening...). There's also a lack of emotions. The gay sex scene was just a series of images (so nearly lifeless). The blowjob of Teya (how come she ended up having sperm in her mouth though he had a condom on when she was giving it...) and the masturbation scenes where better though very rushed (some elements are missing). The sperm looks like plaster (and stays suspended in the end
). There's no choice yet so either include some or just indicate it's a kinetic novel.
We don't return to the main menu after reaching the end of content (it loops infinitely).
This game could become good but it's too all over the place now.
Good continuation.
It's always a good thing to have more bi games but the result is strange.
The worldbuilding is limited.
The characters are few and could be described better (outside Teya).
The plot is interesting and could lead in various directions.
The artistic side could use more care (we can see the pixels too much, particularly when we watch Teya from behind when entering her office for the first time).
It's really difficult to follow the game. You didn't differentiate the dialogs from the thoughts and the simple elements of description are done through the characters (why is Teya describing herself or why is Marcus describing his route and the ambiance of the office...), which is weird. The flow of event is too straight (it's just happening...). There's also a lack of emotions. The gay sex scene was just a series of images (so nearly lifeless). The blowjob of Teya (how come she ended up having sperm in her mouth though he had a condom on when she was giving it...) and the masturbation scenes where better though very rushed (some elements are missing). The sperm looks like plaster (and stays suspended in the end
). There's no choice yet so either include some or just indicate it's a kinetic novel.We don't return to the main menu after reaching the end of content (it loops infinitely).
This game could become good but it's too all over the place now.
Good continuation.
