I really like how so far this is kind of a slice of life, the conversations seem like how real people would talk to each other and the relationships don't seem to be of the zapped in the microwave style. Looking forward to what's next. Good luck with your continuation(s).
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I 2nd this. I'd also repace the Shayna model before needed to replace too many renders. Sorry to be blunt, but she looks like...
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She looks good here. Maybe it's just the hair, exaggerated facial expressions and lighting in these other renders.
Anyway, I'm enjoying the story so far. Good luck!
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I pointed the Shayna/Golum renders out to the dev on his discord a while back. He said they were 'overmorphed'
He redid a good chunk of the renders in Chapter 1 and is planning to do a bunch more as he goes along, obviously reworking old images is lower priority than progressing the story, but those should be on his radar.
Presumably if he comes to a 'writers block' along the way is when rework would happen.
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You should really rethink making all the Li's and fetishes optional (as in they don't happen at all) because NO ONE likes a forced scene or fetish (like the forced bj for example).
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Network 34 Games I'm really interested in the story. Want to see where this goes.
Yeah, some of the facial expressions are weird and over the top, and some of the renders are really bad, but, after all, even if it is a porn story, it is after all still a story, and the one we are being told is quite interesting. No big dramas (I hope none come our way), cool characters, nice setting.
I liked it even with those quirks. Or in spite of them. Maybe even sometimes, because of them.
Don't be afraid to try new things, maybe they will not always work, what matters tho is that it was tried and maybe something was learned from it. I would go easier on the facial expressions sliders, but, you do you. Just keep this churning along, I want more.
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Yeah, some of the facial expressions are weird and over the top, and some of the renders are really bad, but, after all, even if it is a porn story, it is after all still a story, and the one we are being told is quite interesting. No big dramas (I hope none come our way), cool characters, nice setting.
I liked it even with those quirks. Or in spite of them. Maybe even sometimes, because of them.
Don't be afraid to try new things, maybe they will not always work, what matters tho is that it was tried and maybe something was learned from it. I would go easier on the facial expressions sliders, but, you do you. Just keep this churning along, I want more.
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Well. we're about to get a whole new level of fuckuppery for Chapter 4, as I recently went through the process of upgrading MOBO and CPU. (still only running 2 x 1050Ti's though lol) so the pace is better now. next upgrades are the GPU's themsleves. but. I spent a ton on this (even though i said the game was going to pay for those upgrades... Oh well. I got impatient lol)
We're also experimenting with a few things as well. so next chapter should see much improvement overall
We're also experimenting with a few things as well. so next chapter should see much improvement overall
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Really enjoying the game so far but it has some obvious early flaws (haven't finished current update yet). And i have to say that so far the best looking models are at work, Cash...Wow!
And the dialogue/writing is pretty decent between the characters for the most part. Looking forward to seeing what direction the story ends up going.
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I really wanted to give your work a chance but the only thing I ended up liking was the writing. The renders were so bad that I had to stop and after reading the forums I realized that even though you plan on fixing them there are so many red flags that I don't intend to continue
1) Title seems to indicate male dominance but talk of Femdom and no mention of Maledom.
2) Drug use was a total turnoff
3) Kinetic novel which equates to forced scenes and no choices. This doesn't make any sense when you say that the Femdom is avoidable.
4) Group sex and Lesbian. Two kinks that are a turn off for me but that I don't mind if they 100% avoidable (as in never happened).
5) Probably the biggest thing is your response about "spoilers". A lot of us do not like to be surprised about content. We don't want to get invested in a character or story and then find out that it will contain something we find repulsive. A creator that acts that way is very suspicious (we have all been burned in the past) which is why we ask so many questions. We want to support you but we want to know what we are supporting first.
I wish you the best and maybe I'll check back in a couple of updates to see what you have decided to do and if I like it I will check you out again.
1) Title seems to indicate male dominance but talk of Femdom and no mention of Maledom.
2) Drug use was a total turnoff
3) Kinetic novel which equates to forced scenes and no choices. This doesn't make any sense when you say that the Femdom is avoidable.
4) Group sex and Lesbian. Two kinks that are a turn off for me but that I don't mind if they 100% avoidable (as in never happened).
5) Probably the biggest thing is your response about "spoilers". A lot of us do not like to be surprised about content. We don't want to get invested in a character or story and then find out that it will contain something we find repulsive. A creator that acts that way is very suspicious (we have all been burned in the past) which is why we ask so many questions. We want to support you but we want to know what we are supporting first.
I wish you the best and maybe I'll check back in a couple of updates to see what you have decided to do and if I like it I will check you out again.
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1) Yes, it's a male building a female harem game that already has some minor male-dom dream/fantasy cut scenes.
So far it's pretty vanilla TBH.
3) What does being kinetic in the early game have to do with the ability to add choices and avoidance options? He's already had (flavor only) choices.
So far it's pretty vanilla TBH.
3) What does being kinetic in the early game have to do with the ability to add choices and avoidance options? He's already had (flavor only) choices.
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Sneaky peeky. we're looking into a smaller release at the end of the month. wont be as long as the last couple chapters have been, but they'll be more frequent is the hope.
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