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Firaxius

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Vn isn't to bad, but i noticed several grammar faults here and there, also, when going out, you choose between red or black dress, I picked the red dress, then enter club she wore red dress, but when seated she suddenly in black dress. Might hev to revise the grammar faults and such image mistakes, but beside that it a decent VN.
 
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Simbaclaw

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Nov 20, 2024
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Vn isn't to bad, but i noticed several grammar faults here and there, also, when going out, you choose between red or black dress, I picked the red dress, then enter club she wore red dress, but when seated she suddenly in black dress. Might hev to revise the grammar faults and such image mistakes, but beside that it a decent VN.
I’ll fix them and reupload asap. Thank you so much!
 

DIRTY FILTHY Animal

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Jun 11, 2020
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not a bad first update, wifes hot, got a great body, the fading in and out of every scene is a little repetitious, i know you can turn that off under transitions but then it saves that setting for other renpy games. Also if you need a proofreader let me know, since I do that for a couple other games. here is the scene people are talking about in the club after we picked the red dress, when she sits down one frame is shown in the black dress
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Kerobin

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Oct 3, 2017
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wow, the haters are coming out of the woodwork. As far as I can see, this is the developer's first release so I don't understand comments like "where is the ignore button" or "it will be abandoned". Regardless, I'm excited to see what happens next. The tags could be revised. As far as I can see, you play only as a male protagonist and some of the tags are more "planned" than in game ;)..anyway good luck
 

AssRider

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Jul 4, 2017
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Got my attention.
Haven't played it but the fact that you can choose outfit so early in the game is a big plus. Keep the high heels, add some nylons, but most importantly: communicate constantly (at least once a month) and I'll more than likely throw some bucks in that direction.
Good luck!
 
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JLConradie

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Nov 17, 2019
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Really a nice start.. I like it... just don't die on us.. and don't let us wait 20 releases later, or 6 years for the first encounter
:rolleyes::unsure::ROFLMAO::LOL:
 
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shiqz

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wow, the haters are coming out of the woodwork. As far as I can see, this is the developer's first release so I don't understand comments like "where is the ignore button" or "it will be abandoned". Regardless, I'm excited to see what happens next. The tags could be revised. As far as I can see, you play only as a male protagonist and some of the tags are more "planned" than in game ;)..anyway good luck
It's quite simple as to why but i just put them onto my Ignore as they pop up, tired of seeing their hate comments. (y)

Simbaclaw Looks good, will keep this one on my Watch, don't lose your Motivation because of some comments :)
 

Gamesstar

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Jul 3, 2019
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Simbaclaw Congratulations on your game :)
Is there any femdom scenes currently in the game? What are your future plans on femdom, will there be a separate route for it?
 
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xert13

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Sep 24, 2023
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it's clearly written in the post under the description, NTR
Yes, but NTR as used on this site can encompass netorase which is sharing, netori where the male steals others LI or Netorare where the LI is “taken” by another without knowledge or consent of husband/bf. If he knowingly watches it’s cuck. Sharing or netorase is often labeled Netorare. So, I get the sense that this VN is more sharing, but could be mistaken. Only the Dev can clarify.
 

Frankbob

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wow, the haters are coming out of the woodwork. As far as I can see, this is the developer's first release so I don't understand comments like "where is the ignore button" or "it will be abandoned". Regardless, I'm excited to see what happens next. The tags could be revised. As far as I can see, you play only as a male protagonist and some of the tags are more "planned" than in game ;)..anyway good luck
Yep pretty normal for the anti NTR types to constantly try and trash devs and games that don't fit their idea of what a game/story should be.
 
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