VN Ren'Py The Adored Marriage [Ch.2 v0.8] [Simbaclaw]

[Justaphase]

Yeah, but regardless our choices should matter. It doesn't matter how many sharing points we have, if we say no, it shouldn't happen at all. He can be a major part of the story without being forced upon us, even if we say no.

We should also have an option added to office scene. Once William says he doesn't share, we should have an option to say no we don't share either then and walk out with some different dialogue and renders.

I really just think our choices should matter more and we should have more say and these two scenes need changing, to give us control and not base it off points only for most part. Dev is just forcing too much.

The sharing route definitely felt more cuckold, I would even say that the scene with Evelyn, Diana and William had a bit of humiliation going on, so I wasn't a massive fan as I hate humiliation. Completely different vibe to that foursome they had with Julie and Matt, which felt more like actual sharing/swinging.
I do think that the dev forces things on us with the main story in mind. If we turn down everything with Brandon and then have the option to slam the door in his face when he came over (which I wish we had) then whatever plan he has wouldn't make much sense IMO.

 

[wmrxd]

It feels like our choices aren't doing anything; we're still being forced to watch these horrible scenes. Our choices should matter. Just as I thought—and as you said—the office scene would be much better structured: "We should also have an option added to the office scene. As soon as William says he doesn't share, as MagicMan753 said, we should have the option to say no, that we don't share either, and then leave with different dialogue and renderings." That alone would make it at least five times better. As for the Brandon scene, I have no idea how to fix it because it's so bad and still leans heavily toward NTR, a manipulative jerk who wants to steal the FMC from MC. I have no idea how that could be fixed. Do you have any ideas on how this scene could be improved? It seems like all the sharing scenes are increasingly heading towards NTR and humiliation and the passive cuckold who accepts everything the woman wants and just sits in the chair watching her do whatever she wants. It completely left the vibe of the couple Julie and Matt from before, which was a very good dynamic. It's a real shame.

 

[CursedByAll]

Simbaclaw
Dude, you need a serious rewrite of the last 3 updates, or make completely new renders to make an alternate set of scenarios.
If you think that sharing is just another cheating/cuck thing, you have it completely wrong, and should give up, remove some scenes and tags, and get on with making your NTR story. Because that is all those updates are, no matter what bullshit excuse you have.
I am obviously not alone in saying that you have it wrong. just read other comments, and take it on board.
And of course, as I said previously, those on the cheating and NTR paths have no problems, and don't know what the fuss is about, as it seems, do you.

 

[Joshy92]

Simbaclaw
Dude, you need a serious rewrite of the last 3 updates, or make completely new renders to make an alternate set of scenarios.
If you think that sharing is just another cheating/cuck thing, you have it completely wrong, and should give up, remove some scenes and tags, and get on with making your NTR story. Because that is all those updates are, no matter what bullshit excuse you have.
I am obviously not alone in saying that you have it wrong. just read other comments, and take it on board.
And of course, as I said previously, those on the cheating and NTR paths have no problems, and don't know what the fuss is about, as it seems, do you.

If he did that it'd mean no more cuckolding just NTR.

 

[CursedByAll]

It feels like our choices aren't doing anything; we're still being forced to watch these horrible scenes. Our choices should matter. Just as I thought—and as you said—the office scene would be much better structured: "We should also have an option added to the office scene. As soon as William says he doesn't share, as MagicMan753 said, we should have the option to say no, that we don't share either, and then leave with different dialogue and renderings." That alone would make it at least five times better. As for the Brandon scene, I have no idea how to fix it because it's so bad and still leans heavily toward NTR, a manipulative jerk who wants to steal the FMC from MC. I have no idea how that could be fixed. Do you have any ideas on how this scene could be improved? It seems like all the sharing scenes are increasingly heading towards NTR and humiliation and the passive cuckold who accepts everything the woman wants and just sits in the chair watching her do whatever she wants. It completely left the vibe of the couple Julie and Matt from before, which was a very good dynamic. It's a real shame.

Only possible fix is to have Evelyn call MC when the older stooge gets in the taxi, and explain that she wants him home now, because she is being pressured by Brandon. MC refuses the fare, goes home, and explains to Brandon that they do not "share" without both being present and involved, dashing any hope that Brandon might have for solo action. Evelyn agrees, and then they can proceed to have a 3some, and then Brandon leaves the next morning, knowing he can't break that relationship.

But am not counting on Simbaclaw to write anything like that really. He obviously doesn't know how....
He is probably planning on Brandon staying until he breaks her, and fucks her every which way known to man.

 

[CursedByAll]

If he did that it'd mean no more cuckolding just NTR.

Would still leave plenty of opportunities for cucking Joshy, don't worry. In fact it would be more likely imo. You yourself said the last scene was great. That was NTR, with cucking involved. You even had a chair, a silly grin on your face, and then your wife told you you loved it straight after, hinting at more of the same.

 

[Joshy92]

Would still leave plenty of opportunities for cucking Joshy, don't worry. In fact it would be more likely imo. You yourself said the last scene was great. That was NTR, with cucking involved. You even had a chair.

Sorry but I don't consider it NTR. MC was happy and loved it. Evelyn even said how happy he looked.

 

[Dessolos]

I only read about it gonna didn't play it yet but from what I read I don't really consider cuck for what being a cuck is to me. As it didn't seem like there was humiliation involved unless I missed some comments. But I can understand why it would be to others

 

[Joshy92]

So far both sharing and NTR are separated and I doubt Simbaclaw will combine them now. Brandon is going to try and steal Evelyn but that doesn't mean he'll succeed.

I know other games have duped nts fans before but I like to think the dev has a plan so Simba dude I trust you and I know you'll make everything work out for all paths.

 

[TonyMurray]

Only possible fix is to have Evelyn call MC when the older stooge gets in the taxi, and explain that she wants him home now, because she is being pressured by Brandon. MC refuses the fare, goes home, and explains to Brandon that they do not "share" without both being present and involved, dashing any hope that Brandon might have for solo action. Evelyn agrees, and then they can proceed to have a 3some, and then Brandon leaves the next morning, knowing he can't break that relationship.

But am not counting on Simbaclaw to write anything like that really. He obviously doesn't know how....
He is probably planning on Brandon staying until he breaks her, and fucks her every which way known to man.

That's already been covered by the bit where he picked up the fare. He clearly gave her permission to do stuff with Brandon but that she then had to give him all the details when he got home. So he's relinquished any claim to always need to be there when she's with another guy, which I think might fall under "hotwife" rather than specifically sharing?

I'm not entirely sure as I've not played it the scene from 0.8, I just did 0.6.5 last night, but if you're going to change the scene, I'm guessing it would have to be in dialogue between her and Brandon – maybe he says something about his intentions (though presumably not the stealing her part of them) and she tells him it's not what's happening, she's in control of what they do/how far they go, and what it means? Perhaps it's Brandon getting too emotionally involved in it and she pushes back and says that's not what she's after – it's just sex, not making love – and if he expects more from it then they can stop right there.

 

[CursedByAll]

That's already been covered by the bit where he picked up the fare. He clearly gave her permission to do stuff with Brandon but that she then had to give him all the details when he got home. So he's relinquished any claim to always need to be there when she's with another guy, which I think might fall under "hotwife" rather than specifically sharing?

I'm not entirely sure as I've not played it the scene from 0.8, I just did 0.6.5 last night, but if you're going to change the scene, I'm guessing it would have to be in dialogue between her and Brandon – maybe he says something about his intentions (though presumably not the stealing her part of them) and she tells him it's not what's happening, she's in control of what they do/how far they go, and what it means? Perhaps it's Brandon getting too emotionally involved in it and she pushes back and says that's not what she's after – it's just sex, not making love – and if he expects more from it then they can stop right there.

So, he is a weak simp, leaving all discretion up to her. I mean, she was the one who fucked the boss and the boss's wife, got told "no sharing allowed here", which she is totally up for because "hey, cock", and made him sit in a chair, ffs. And she has now turned into the cock-slut hotwife category? Couldn't last 2 hours with some dude before giving in. "Oh please can I fuck this guy now, I can't wait, my pussy is so hungry for cock. Yeah, keep driving, we don't need you. The later the better, more cock for me."
Fuck that, may as well just play the cheating path, with her as the turbo-slut, and I wasn't here for that, at all. He is just turning into a willing cuck. And that ain't sharing in my book. Might be for others, more power to them if thats what they see here, and they can enjoy it. One thing I am not into is being cucked, in any manner. Even without the humiliation, and I am supposing that ain't far down the track either, from the way this shit-show is going.
Nah, this game is shit, for mine, as it stands now. Just another cuck-game.
I mean, the game is already at 0.8, can't be much more in it, so it ain't going anywhere I like very soon.
Too bad, I lose, haha.

 

[TonyMurray]

I mean, the game is already at 0.8, can't be much more in it, so it ain't going anywhere I like very soon.
Too bad, I lose, haha.

No idea how much further the game will go, but being on 0.8 is no indication, as that doesn't equate to 80% complete (version numbering progression isn't 0.8 > 0.9 > 1.0 and complete, it's 0.8 > 0.9> 0.10 > 0.11 and so on as far as required).

 

[Simbaclaw]

Your comments and thoughts are valuable to me, since many of you are more experienced in this space than I am. Before releasing 0.8 here, I’ll be making a few changes in some scenes and dialogues to reduce the situations that caused discomfort as much as possible. I’ll also make certain scenes optional for those who don’t want to experience cuck content.

As for the Brandon issue, don’t worry I already have solid plans for how his story will end. I just ask you to be a little patient. I also believe that a bit of drama and “bad character” energy makes the story more engaging up to a certain point.

Hopefully 0.8 won’t get leaked here without my consent before I release it myself, otherwise things could get messy again. But don’t worry, the release date for the new update won’t be too far off.

 

[Joshy92]

Your comments and thoughts are valuable to me, since many of you are more experienced in this space than I am. Before releasing 0.8 here, I’ll be making a few changes in some scenes and dialogues to reduce the situations that caused discomfort as much as possible. I’ll also make certain scenes optional for those who don’t want to experience cuck content.

As for the Brandon issue, don’t worry I already have solid plans for how his story will end. I just ask you to be a little patient. I also believe that a bit of drama and “bad character” energy makes the story more engaging up to a certain point.

Hopefully 0.8 won’t get leaked here without my consent before I release it myself, otherwise things could get messy again. But don’t worry, the release date for the new update won’t be too far off.

Thank you for clarifying things. You seem like a nice person and m glad I found this gem of an avn. Goodluck with everything mate.

 

[CursedByAll]

No idea how much further the game will go, but being on 0.8 is no indication, as that doesn't equate to 80% complete (version numbering progression isn't 0.8 > 0.9 > 1.0 and complete, it's 0.8 > 0.9> 0.10 > 0.11 and so on as far as required).

Yeah, I get that point, you are right.

Your comments and thoughts are valuable to me, since many of you are more experienced in this space than I am. Before releasing 0.8 here, I’ll be making a few changes in some scenes and dialogues to reduce the situations that caused discomfort as much as possible. I’ll also make certain scenes optional for those who don’t want to experience cuck content.

As for the Brandon issue, don’t worry I already have solid plans for how his story will end. I just ask you to be a little patient. I also believe that a bit of drama and “bad character” energy makes the story more engaging up to a certain point.

Hopefully 0.8 won’t get leaked here without my consent before I release it myself, otherwise things could get messy again. But don’t worry, the release date for the new update won’t be too far off.

Options would be a nice touch. At every point, not just some. At the moment, it feels like we are all being railroaded into watching whatever YOU believe is good, thus taking away any player agency and making choices meaningless, and the point system of not much use at all.
I get it, you have a story to tell, but if each path is kinetic in nature, you have to make sure those paths don't cross, surely?
What is the point of building stats, like sharing or cheating, or confidence, if they have little to no impact on the story progression.
And you sorta made this worse, by saying "no worries guys, you can cheat with anyone as much as you like, maybe not Diana so much, but otherwise go for it" This just opens it up as a full-on cheating-only option for MC, while he sits back and watches FMC do whatever the hell she likes, openly or not, as her choice only really, even though she "allows" the courtesy of maybe telling him after the fact.
wtf is honest about that?

Good luck in fixing it, but in my mind, as I have said, it needs a lot of work, and a lot more story, before becoming something I would actually enjoy, like I absolutely did at the start, to what is now my great sorrow.

 

[Deleted member 9536489]

Is this NTRS/Swinging, where MC deliberately wants his wife to cheat on him?

 

[Joshy92]

Is this NTRS/Swinging, where MC deliberately wants his wife to cheat on him?

There is a path where he encourages her to have fun with other guys, yeah.

 

[Deleted member 9536489]

There is a path where he encourages her to have fun with other guys, yeah.

Fun as in he knows she'll have sex with them?

 

[Joshy92]

Fun as in he knows she'll have sex with them?

Yeah. There are a couple of scenes like that already.

 

[Deleted member 9536489]

Yeah. There are a couple of scenes like that already.

Dang, I though it'd be some NTR kino with no swinging or NTRS route. But I guess I was wrong. I'll pass, since I only like NTR. Thanks for helping me out, mate!