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he prolly meant that if you go down the sharing path she jumps too quickly from just letting the guy rub her clit to being double penetrated, sucking random guys' dicks, etc. Of course you can choose not to, but then you won't see the scenes at all. Like, in the previous chapter it was real slow burn and this VN was unique at that, I mean it's a feature that could let this VN standout, but in the chapter 2 it was ruined - you either stop swinging at all or she suddenly gets super bold and open (like in other games like this) - this leap in her personality just took out the one unique feature this VN had.Yet again someone angry at a character for their own choices.
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I'd say this is the biggest problem with the VN for me right now, even after the MC fucked a girl right in front of his wife's eyes he still have to hide his cheating even if after wife already did "bold" moves on her own and later told the husband about it.
the other big problem is that sex scenes are just too short. They just start and then *click to cum* - and you think "really? that's it? already?!". It was especially weird in the massage scene, where the time between the guy putting his fingers on her pussy and her cumming felt like just a few seconds. Seriously, this is an AVN, sex scenes should be longer and much better described.
There are two other problems, less serious than the ones above, but still important:
1) there's nothing interesting happening in their life besides swinging/cheating, no wonder the guy decided to go this way. Add some thrill to their lives - job problems, not enough money for rent, anything! Or, instead of problems, you can give them some ambitions - they want to buy a property to finally have children, maybe she wants a raise, he wants a new car etc. Right now even someone that gets scolded at work for being lazy has a more interesting life that this couple (again, apart from swinging). This makes the non-swinging/non-cheating path really boring.
2) the characters not always talk like real people. I often caught myself not being able to imagine the scene (ordinary scene, not an h-scene) which I was reading because I simply couldn't imagine people talking like that in that situation. I understand that this is prolly written by a ESL (I'm a ESL myself) but still there should be more life to the conversation
I like renders a lot, and some animations are really good. Some animations are lacking tho. But it's common for 3d rendered novels so I'm not complaining here.
I really loved the looks of the wife, and husband looks good too, not repulsing like in many other VNs. The girl in the swinging couple was also hot as hell!
All in all, I see potential in this VN, but also some serious problems that dragging it down.
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All that u mentioned good points,but i dunno how much free time the dev have to doing scenes/script.
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I also noticed in the end if you have only 2 sharing points (basically that happens if you won the push-ups contest and the wife didn't do things without you) - then you can't activate the sharing scene with the delivery guy, but the story proceeds as if the scene did happen, they discuss it during the sex and after it.
P.S. re-read the novel from the beginning. Yeah there are more ways to gain sharing points, e.g. to ask the stached guy to plant a kiss on the wife's cheek (I didn't know it would be just a cheek kiss so I chose against it). Still, that's not the point.
The point is that if you choose "don't share" before the delivery scene (either voluntary or because you don't have enough sharing points, like I did) you won't see any scene, they will just jump to eating sushi, but then they start having sex and talk as if she did tease the delivery guy.
P.S. re-read the novel from the beginning. Yeah there are more ways to gain sharing points, e.g. to ask the stached guy to plant a kiss on the wife's cheek (I didn't know it would be just a cheek kiss so I chose against it). Still, that's not the point.
The point is that if you choose "don't share" before the delivery scene (either voluntary or because you don't have enough sharing points, like I did) you won't see any scene, they will just jump to eating sushi, but then they start having sex and talk as if she did tease the delivery guy.
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This is the Italian translation of:
The Adored Marriage ch-2 v0.5
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The Adored Marriage ch-2 v0.5
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This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan"
extract the .rar file and move "game" to the game where the .exe file resides overwrite if required .
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