Back to the very good game:
i just played the second part.
Great work, Mircom3D.
Here are some little mistakes, which i found and which you maybe want to change:
1. Week1, Thursday: If you touch The ass of the massage-girl there are no pictures with the cumshot.
2. There are no pictures of the second part of the first gym with Nicole.
3. Maybe the beer-bottles of Tony & Ryan should be open, when they drink them... ;-)
4. During the massage with Ryan Anne says: 'if TONY doesn't mind. There should be the NAME, which the player choose.
5. During the second massage with Fernanda after the cumshot you write, that ANNE is saying: "I know..." FERNANDA is saying this.
And some of my thoughts, which i would maybe change:
a) I would make the cum a little bit more transparent. Now it's looks more like painting-color... ;-)
b) Wifesharer/Cuckolds are often very high on Creampies. If there is a Cumshot inside of a girl For example with Fernanda), there should be a picture of a very messy, cumdripping pussy after that. I guess, people will love that... ;-)
c) Most Wifesharer/Cuckolds are Voyeurs. Tony is definitly a voyeur. In my opinion in these game almost no woman should wear a normal Jeans anytime. Let them wear better a dress or a skirt. With a dress, there is a chance to peep/show more. You have anyway the choice in every scene, if the girls are wearing panties or being slipless under the dress.
Lets take for example the scene in the airplane.
All we could 'see', were that the young guy touched her covered breast and that you were telling us, that he grabed her covered ass.
If she would wear a dress, you could have zoom in and showed us his hand under her dress... will his fingers go down her panties, too? and if yes, will he even go further and put a finger inside her pussy?... will he put out his cock and rub it at her clit? and so on... if a girl wears a dress you have much more options for thrilling suspense. But if a girl is wearing a jeans your options are extreme limited.
Next example at Anne's work. If she is wearing a jeans, there is only two options: she shows almost nothing or she shows everthing by undressing. There is only black & white, but no grey options. If she wears a dress, she can bent over and shows a little bit. And there is the suspense for the watcher: does she want to show it to tease you or was is only luck, that you see something?
I hope, you understand, what i try to say in my broken English... ;-)
d) I aggred to raggedydan13 in his posting above. The story/Tony is walking on a very dangerous way. Normaly there is no cheating in Swinging/Wifesharing/Cuckolding. I loved your way, how you resolve the scene after the first massage. Tony is telling about the blowjob, but Anne was thinking of a joke.
But after the fuck with Fernanda Tony is telling nothing and that is bad cheating.
And meeting/flirting/kissing with the best friend of Anne is extreme cheating from Tony...
...but on the other side: these cheating bring some extra suspense in the story.
Dear Mircom3D,
please don't get me wrong, writing all these little mistakes and advices. That doesn't mean that i don't like your game.
I like your game very much and i'm a fan of you and your work!
And because i like your game so much, that is the reason, why I write you my thoughts.
Thank you very much for your very nice & interesting & sexy game!!!
I can't wait for week3.
And i'm very excited, what will happen in the DomRep, where are living so many black peolpe... ;-)
All the best for you & your game!
SuperDuper