VN Ren'Py The Adventurous Couple [TACOS S2 P3a] [Mircom3D]

[The Wicked One]

Finally got around to playing the second release, and it's awesome! Can't wait to see what they get into at the resort they're at.
They only aspect I think needs some improvement, is the grammar. If only there was someone who offered you their services for free.

 

[BannedAccount6543]

I think dev’s English is pretty good, makes a few mistakes here and there but nothing dramatic. The dialogue is well written, exciting, arousing, adventurous ... whoever reviews his copy will have to keep that in mind and keep his flow moving in the same direction. Not an easy task. As an example GGGB has the best writing with 5/10 CGs and yet is better than B.B. ( more fappability) which has superb renders but the script is crap. One can read the comments on the GGGB pages and see how patrons love the game. A balanced script/ CG combination as in TAC works very well as the player immerses himself in the game whether as an MC or as an onlooker cum voyeur. I’ll see if I can improve the script and send my suggestions on his Patreon, not sure he needs it though.

 

[thequp]

Chapter 3 when to arrive it. Great Work.

 

[RWaites]

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[RWaites]

Spoiler: Wallpaper 3

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[lots`o`fap]

All my attempts to download this are failing miserably from all links except I can't try Mega as I'm using FF w/o the extension. Why do the other services crap out half way through, and I can't resume after noticing the drop? Damn!

 

[The Wicked One]

Understandable, the story telling aspects are great. I'm talking about the technical grammar edits; punctuation, spelling and sentence structure.
Fixing those those errors will not have an affect on the narrative, unless completely rewritten.

 

[tomislazy]

Side note, @Wicket what game is your picture from?

 

[The Wicked One]

Side note, @Wicket what game is your picture from?

It's a model I made in TK17.

 

[tomislazy]

It's a model I made in TK17.

A+ work friend. Super hot.

 

[RWaites]

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[RWaites]

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[Otyi]

Thanks!

 

[Jozef Minge]

Is there any info about new update?

 

[Mircom3D]

Is there any info about new update?

In the next few days.

 

[Deleted member 40068]

Great news! Hope to play with Anne soon!

 

[begemot11]

Amazing game! Hope features update will be as awesome as the first 2 chapters.

 

[begemot11]

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thanks for this game. And since 1 March you will have one more patreon.

 

[RWaites]

Spoiler: Update

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[Mircom3D]

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thanks for this game. And since 1 March you will have one more patreon.

Thank you, much appreciated!