Hello.
Overall, the game is nice.
The worldbuilding is great. Even if at the start it was only MC's house, Collins' house and school, you succeeded in broadening the locations very intelligently.
The characters are various and different. Mrs Bancroft is annoying with her superiority complex, she lacks understanding for the job she does (and she doesn't seem to like it...).
The story is really interesting and it's besoming heavy. I hope there won't be anymore death. While I'm at it, there should be a warning somewhere about some violent scenes being present. It's a little shocking because you made it so realistic.
The art is well done, particularly the environment. While some faces were strange, the body's were very realistic, particularly the boobs.
The choice of the music is also accurate and it's pretty rare so it gives an originality to this game.
It's a good idea to have the possibility of chosing how we obtain the sexual content. I've always chosen the good guy content because I prefer when everybody is on the same page and when feelings are involved rather than pure sex and forceful play with no meaning. I also like that the voyeurism content is optional, even looking at the butts.
The MC is too good natured, even in the bad guy sentences I tried, he isn't that bad. I hope he'll be able to take care of what you've planed for him. His good shape won't be enough if he isn't ready. The martial art training could help with it. As of now, I feel like we lack manpower if we have to solve the problems shown.
Sometimes, Beatriz become Beatrice.
Like it's always asked to make gay content optional, I would have prefered for the lesbian scene to be optional too.
If the quality of your other game is the same, i should take a look at it when I have some time.
Good continuation.