Ren'Py The Awakening [v0.4.5] [SLim Games]

[metalbeard]

Dude wanks on his baby sister the day he came back from the hospital after being in a coma...?
A head's up please, I wasn't prepared for mach speed :closedeyesmile:

 

[Velsomnia]

I would rather see mach speed rather than another 5 updates with "features" added

 

[skullker]

Played through the new version just now and I must say the game is great. However, I have a few gripes with the game:

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All in all, this is a very good start and you got yourself a new patron with me. I very much look forward to the next few updates.

 

[Velsomnia]

Ok tons of things all at once, for one awesome animations before the game even starts, 2 ITS ANIMATED *claps excitedly* and 3 springhill hospital HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, I live down the street from a hospital named springhill hospital.

I have to go look at the doctor list now and see if there is a doctor of the same name.


No doctor by that name but its still funny

 

[snarrff]

the mini games are very annoying as i ware glasses and need to remove them to see keyboard and then put them back on to see the screen and by then its to late i failed

 

[groove888]

Are they too hard? or are they just no fun? Making an option to disable them is easy. Takes 5minutes max. I thought they would bring something fresh to the game.

IMO they're fine except for the part where they sometimes fail seemingly randomly (for the up down left right game). Might be me tho.

 

[Velsomnia]

Bravo Bravo for the unique disclaimer on the hospital clipboard, thats the best incorporation into a game that I have ever seen.

 

[SLim_Games]

Played through the new version just now and I must say the game is great. However, I have a few gripes with the game:

Spoiler: The game

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All in all, this is a very good start and you got yourself a new patron with me. I very much look forward to the next few updates.

Thank you you make very good points about the negatives (and positives of course ), and I think I have to rewrite some stuff about the mother relationship.. it's true that it kind of comes out of the blue.
About the minigames. I already see that some people are not very happy with the minigames so building an option to skip them is no big deal so I'll put it in. I have to rethink about the mother some more.. thanks for this post I really appreciate it and this helps me a lot

 

[ssff]

whats the password

 

[metalbeard]

I would rather see mach speed rather than another 5 updates with "features" added

Oh I agree completely! I know a lot of people like the 'slow burn' of DMD and what not, personally to me its not a slow burn but a laceration.
This however was 'too fast' for me.

Sigh, waiting for something in the middle...

 

[Velsomnia]

EEEEKKK Needles, I hate needles.

 

[snarrff]

whats the password

greedisgood

 

[Velsomnia]

Ok first gripe, the default for the woman on the second day makes no sense. A landlord would not care who you are at any point and especially not after 2 years.

 

[Jiraz]

Really loving the game and the animations ! Also would not mind if the mini games were abit shorter like 3 buttons only or something. Also, bj on first meeting ? really powerful Mc Would understand if there was feelings from before that were increased but..
Though don't know if that last one is a pro or con Looking forward to more ! Happy to be a pledger !

 

[metalbeard]

Ok first gripe, the default for the woman on the second day makes no sense. A landlord would not care who you are at any point and especially not after 2 years.

*cough* She's MC's mother *cough*

 

[Deleted member 220423]

Are they too hard? or are they just no fun? Making an option to disable them is easy. Takes 5minutes max. I thought they would bring something fresh to the game.

A bit of both. I failed repeatedly with the second minigame, but even the first one I thought was no fun because it kinda breaks the spell that is a virtual novel. You stop concentrating on the story and instead try to get to the right key in time.

An option to disable them would please both those who like the minigames and those who don't, so I'm hoping to see that in the next update.

The game itself is beautifully rendered, eventhough I agree with the criticism that the story goes ahead very fast.

 

[SLim_Games]

A bit of both. I failed repeatedly with the second minigame, but even the first one I thought was no fun because it kinda breaks the spell that is a virtual novel. You stop concentrating on the story and instead try to get to the right key in time.

An option to disable them would please both those who like the minigames and those who don't, so I'm hoping to see that in the next update.

The game itself is beautifully rendered, eventhough I agree with the criticism that the story goes ahead very fast.

yeah I need to slow down a bit. since it's my first vn I still try to find the right balance so it's still not boring.. but I guess I move to fast on the sexy part of the game.. I reworked the minigames. they are now easy and skipable after you fail them once.. I'm uploading now

 

[snarrff]

yeah I need to slow down a bit. since it's my first vn I still try to find the right balance so it's still not boring.. but I guess I move to fast on the sexy part of the game.. I reworked the minigames. they are now easy and skipable after you fail them once.. I'm uploading now

thank you

 

[larsalexanderson]

*cough* She's MC's mother *cough*

So, is there a patch or some way to "fix" this? Maybe I'm blind but I didn't see anything in OP.

 

[apocalipze]

good renders, beautiful female characters, good story so far. as for the mini games, i think you need to tweak it a little bit. the first arrow button is too fast (i move my right hand from mouse to keyboard and the minigame already over) and i recommend to change L,N,G to Z,X,C or something that's easier. frankly i like the minigame, it gives me something to do other than reading and making decisions, it's just too annoying as for now.