Thank you very much on deciding to try out my game. I will be thinking over the name change of the game and as it will include recreating banners, signature and scripts. It might take some time. So, I have included a note on front page of the game.
Hey so I went and gave the game a shot. Seems pretty good so far, a bit choppy in that you just go from scene to scene, but I actually like it and appreciated the no nonsense approach you're taking so far. The sex scene at the end of this version was pretty generous too, decent length and a variety of positions, a little unbelievable for a virgin to put up that kind of perfomance but shit, it's a game. Why limit yourself to real world limitations
Having seen the dynamic of the game I'm sort of convinced you've gone in the wrong direction of the games name (just my opinion), I get that the direction the MC originally wanted to go based on the initial idea being a trashy BF for hire, but the sister is pushing that to the next level. She seems to be trying to turn him into the total package. That being said I don't like pointing out problems with out solutions so I've actually thought of some potential names.
"Zero to Hero" (Seems to capture the entire premise of the game...so far. Not sure if it'll work for the overall theme)
"The Stand In" (Because you're faking it, filling in the role of the BF. A bit bland bt it gets the job done)
"At Your Service" (Pushing the focus on his business, plus he's pretty gentlemanly. It has implications of femdom though)
"The BF Experience" (He's initially hired to play the part, but inevitably shows the girl what it's like to be treated properly in a world of douches)
"Total Package" (Just thought of that as I typed it above)
"5 Star Boy Friend" (Pretty straight forward - In reference to how his business works)
I've put more thought into some than others. I can try to come up with more if you like, though I like 5-Star Boy Friend, even if you don't use it for game name. You should use that for the name of his business if you don't have one for that yet.
Of course the name change is just my opinion, this is your game and it should be made the way you want to make it. I just hope my input has been at least given you something to think on. Either way good luck and I'm looking forward to playing more in the future.
