the text need a lot of work. every page that opens something new needs a back button, like stats or corruption.
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I appreciate your feedback .You can revert back to the previous page by using the arrows on top of the UI bar.
Hello.
The new visual is really well chosen. The stats and corruption menu are welcomed.
The continuation is interesting. Scott seems like a nice guy and the girls are too high and mighty. The variety at the strip club was nice, though there should have been more than one dancer. I'm still concerned about the consequences about trying too much or too early (it could be suspicious, particularly at work).
Good continuation.
The new visual is really well chosen. The stats and corruption menu are welcomed.
The continuation is interesting. Scott seems like a nice guy and the girls are too high and mighty. The variety at the strip club was nice, though there should have been more than one dancer. I'm still concerned about the consequences about trying too much or too early (it could be suspicious, particularly at work).
Good continuation.
I really appreciate your feedbacks man. Would you mind joining the Discord? Everyone who would like to give ideas on characters and on the story continuation are welcome. It would also help me to develop the game better.
Secondly , Would you please elaborate the "high" and "mighty" girls part? Was it in a good sense or..?
Thanks!
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I'm going to refrain from commenting, because I'll have nothing nice to say.
Hello.
Well, I was talking about the 2 girls in the Artefacts department. By high and mighty, I was refering to to them looking down on us, their coldness, their distance. As for knowing if it's good or not, it depends on the reason behind : if it's their personality, their shyness, their professionlism, that they don't know us, it can fade away with time; but if it's because of their status, their power, their money, it makes me want to avoid them.
As for the dev notes :
Having anybody take over someone else project is not always a good idea, though there are a few sucesses.
Good continuation.
I know it doesn't matter anymore but I forgot to answer your question.
Well, I was talking about the 2 girls in the Artefacts department. By high and mighty, I was refering to to them looking down on us, their coldness, their distance. As for knowing if it's good or not, it depends on the reason behind : if it's their personality, their shyness, their professionlism, that they don't know us, it can fade away with time; but if it's because of their status, their power, their money, it makes me want to avoid them.
As for the dev notes :
I'm sad since you seemed to have fun doing it and was friendly interacting with us.
Having anybody take over someone else project is not always a good idea, though there are a few sucesses.
Good continuation.