VN Ren'Py The Blackmail [v0.01] [Sprinkler_ON]

Porthas

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You know, I kinda hate to be "that guy," but--no, you know what, I love being that guy. THIS is my fetish.
The first word! You couldn't make it past the first word that appears onscreen without a spelling error, and then there's already another three words later?!
Are you fricking kidding me? Am I being punked? Did that just really happen?

EDIT: I swear, I posted that as soon as I saw it, and I had NO IDEA this was coming.
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Hey mod. If the guy I'm replying to up above can comment on the typos in the game - I can too.
 

HUNUTAN

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Well, the (female) characters are quite attractive. But in principle there is no choice that we were promised. That is, there is not a single choice at all, just a straight-as-a-stick plot. Where the protagonist behaves in a stupid way, which doesn’t seem to fit in with the name of the game at all, I absolutely can’t imagine that such a mс could dominate anyone.
Perhaps, of course, I am drawing premature conclusions and what follows will be what was promised to us in the annotation. But what we were shown is radically different from the description of the game and does not inspire any optimism...
 

Oberlix

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Let's wait and see what the next patch brings, if it's only that short then it's better to wait a year or more
 

L7Bear

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"So, I was playing this game, dude. You're not gonna believe it.
"It's all about this male protagonist who is obviously in love with his male best friend - and vice versa - but they're both too homophobic to admit their feelings for each other.
"It starts with the guy futilely trying to jerk off to a pic of a naked woman and getting caught by his sister
"She says she's going to tell their parents about the porn on his computer, and he doesn't even bother deleting it
"Probably because deleting it wouldn't solve anything - she knows what turns him on, and let's just say his parents would not approve.
"Anyway, so this guy is blackmailed by his sister into jerking off in front of her while his boyfriend is waiting for him downstairs.
"He's not into it until she suggests bringing his *best friend* into the room to watch. Then he jerks off like a fiend.
"The boyfriend didn't see this - he was still downstairs. It was just the idea of him watching that got the guy going.
"Then in like the ultimate subversion of incest porn - or maybe just more closeted homophobia - dude runs to the toilet to blow chunks.
"For some reason the game decided we should see him busting his airlock from the toilet bowl's perspective. Not sure what to make of that.
"Oh, and that dude also likes to get wet and fantasizes about turtles telling him how to act like a straight guy.
"It's crazy man, you gotta see this."


ETA. I don't mean to kink-shame, and hope it isn't taken that way. Whatever flicks your bic - or in this case, whatever floats your boat.
Just be honest with yourself about who you are. People will accept you - and those that don't, they do not deserve your time or attention.
 
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Sprinkler_ON

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Oct 17, 2022
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"So, I was playing this game, dude. You're not gonna believe it.
"It's all about this male protagonist who is obviously in love with his male best friend - and vice versa - but they're both too homophobic to admit their feelings for each other.
"It starts with the guy futilely trying to jerk off to a pic of a naked woman and getting caught by his sister
"She says she's going to tell their parents about the porn on his computer, and he doesn't even bother deleting it
"Probably because deleting it wouldn't solve anything - she knows what turns him on, and let's just say his parents would not approve.
"Anyway, so this guy is blackmailed by his sister into jerking off in front of her while his boyfriend is waiting for him downstairs.
"He's not into it until she suggests bringing his *best friend* into the room to watch. Then he jerks off like a fiend.
"The boyfriend didn't see this - he was still downstairs. It was just the idea of him watching that got the guy going.
"Then in like the ultimate subversion of incest porn - or maybe just more closeted homophobia - dude runs to the toilet to blow chunks.
"For some reason the game decided we should see him busting his airlock from the toilet bowl's perspective. Not sure what to make of that.
"Oh, and that dude also likes to get wet and fantasizes about turtles telling him how to act like a straight guy.
"It's crazy man, you gotta see this."


ETA. I don't mean to kink-shame, and hope it isn't taken that way. Whatever flicks your bic - or in this case, whatever floats your boat.
Just be honest with yourself about who you are. People will accept you - and those that don't, they do not deserve your time or attention.
Thank you for your time and remark; the game is merely the beginning of what I intend to do with it and the direction it will take; I introduced an imagined character who will play a larger role later.
To begin, I wanted to test how the idea would proceed and if it would be received funny...
 

goulet1995

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what future tags will this have will any lesbian/ntr/sharing/swinging be avoidable if its included
 

Penniless Degenerate

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"And this makes you my?"
"God what's wrong with you?"
"Please just tell me."
"Are you retarded?"
I haven't even enter the game yet and the dev has to show off his master class of writing, great start.
Aside from the frequent use of unnecessary slurs, the dialogue kind of goes on a tangent over a lot of things and has the humor of a Family Guy episode.

And then there's John, who cannot go one sentence without using the f-word, while the protag jokes about him being his "slave".
On one hand, we all have a couple of friends who jokes about some non-PC shit playfully. On the other, I'm not sure if that flies with the Patreon rules. I'm feeling like with John's personality and all, he's one thunder stock background away from having a rant about daring suicide. 1715836003711.png

But apparent what is necessary for the game are apparently a minute long footage of Battlefield 1 trailer and some random MK1 match that takes up about 50mb, even though one could've just used a still frame to represent what they're doing.
I don't mind it too much at the moment, but imagine if the number of video footage like this increase by every update, that sounds like a couple dozen C&D and junk files waiting to happen.
 
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Sprinkler_ON

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Oct 17, 2022
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I haven't even enter the game yet and the dev has to show off his master class of writing, great start.
Aside from the frequent use of unnecessary slurs, the dialogue kind of goes on a tangent over a lot of things and has the humor of a Family Guy episode.

And then there's John, who cannot go one sentence without using the f-word, while the protag jokes about him being his "slave".
On one hand, we all have a couple of friends who jokes about some non-PC shit playfully. On the other, I'm not sure if that flies with the Patreon rules. I'm feeling like with John's personality and all, he's one thunder stock background away from having a rant about daring suicide. View attachment 3639423

But apparent what is necessary for the game are apparently a minute long footage of Battlefield 1 trailer and some random MK1 match that takes up about 50mb, even though one could've just used a still frame to represent what they're doing.
I don't mind it too much at the moment, but imagine if the number of video footage like this increase by every update, that sounds like a couple dozen C&D and junk files waiting to happen.
Thank you for taking the time to remark; this is my first game and I am a new developer; I will try to improve myself in the future, and I am working on it.
 
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Rockero_69

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important questions, will there be content and final harem? And is the content forced or can it be avoided? This I am referring to some fetishes or tags that are sometimes presented in the game that are not to everyone's liking.