I was wondering why there wasn't any updates for sluted lately. I find this chyoa book style game. I like sluted, so I gave this a shot. The premise is good, and a bit of humor goes a long way.
I like the whole set up for the character status and everything. Everything story wise is gold, but the absence of any picture or logo at least on the blank pages next to the text is, well, blank. It leaves the impression that something should go there. I know this is roughly new, but at the very least put a logo in the page so that we don't see a blank page. If you are not done with the art and left it blank, put the logo in and we the readers wouldn't know the difference.
I like the whole set up for the character status and everything. Everything story wise is gold, but the absence of any picture or logo at least on the blank pages next to the text is, well, blank. It leaves the impression that something should go there. I know this is roughly new, but at the very least put a logo in the page so that we don't see a blank page. If you are not done with the art and left it blank, put the logo in and we the readers wouldn't know the difference.