SingularityEvent
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- May 30, 2024
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Decent writing and story with a quirky semi serious humor, but like 80% of avn's this one also fails when it comes to the mc. His personality/attitude is extremely boring and bland, also no builder/contruction worker ever was build like that, story wise is seems like he is supposed to be a grown man but he looks like some scrawny teenager. He talks about being to old for 18 year olds and the women call him hunk while not only is he smaller than alot of them, he is also thin as a stick. Doesn't make sense whatsoever, if you make a story about a man who works with construction and least know that that kind of work builds muscle.