Haven't played it yet, but going to keep my eye on this one. If it truly ends up as a "yes, every girl gets pregnant" game, and we don't have to wait till Episode 57 in 12 years to get significant pregnancy content, then that's right up my alley. Dev, remember that you're never going to make everyone else happy, don't get discouraged, just try to make something you're happy with and hopefully others will be too!
First, she's a love interest - the MC says several times that he still loves her and can't get over her, which is weird and disgusting, because to me, the very fact that you are not the girl's only possible option for a relationship is NTR. And saying that she's an irrelevant character who won't appear in the game anymore when she's one of the main characters on the game's poster is pretty weird.
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You know, this is how relationships, dating and courtship in Real Life work (unless you live in a society where women aren't allowed to choose anything): you aren't the only possible option for anyone.
Anyway, this is my final word on this.
1: She's not a love interest
2: Actually she is a love interest
1: Well that's how things work in REAL LIFE you know
2: Actually she is a love interest
1: Well that's how things work in REAL LIFE you know
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So, some honest advice as a developer myself: make the game you want to play, ensure it's tagged correctly anywhere you can do so. If it goes off-track from the original descriptions and spec, update the marketing materials to match the new project and inform fans of the change as soon as it's relevant.
But again, the key part is making the game you want to play. Trying to interact too much with the thread here (or similar posts elsewhere) will likely just prove an emotional drain that will kill any drive you had, and essentially kill the project too. A big chunk of the current negative feedback is marketing/product mismatch exacerbating the forum's already pessimistic attitude. And once the arguments kick off, they'll keep going endlessly. Just about anything you say or do is just going to make the arguments worse, so it's better to skip them.
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Why can I not adjust the settings? I object most strongly to that. Just a load or start? We are not kids. Do I have to change your code? There are more than you that are devs. Changing it is child's play so why do you do it? It really makes me laugh.
Well good bye as I dont like being treated as a stupid child.
Well good bye as I dont like being treated as a stupid child.
... ok... if this was half of year of developement, than i can tell u that u are doomed if u r doing it for money (one update after 6 month???)...and if i readed coments right..than I (NTR hater) will even not download this to infect my SSD, if it is avoidable i will try, but definitely not pay for it..
Certainly an interesting start.
However:
1: Don't disable sound controls. Period. That is moronic.
2: Don't disable the standard quick menu. Seriously foolish.
3: Don't offer a choice that isn't a choice.
4: I don't know who actually put in the tags, but when I see vaginal sex I expect it to be with the MC, not his rival.
I see a lot of potential in this game. The renders are fine. Writing is good. It's technically sound.
Plot is very weak. No builder ever signs up for a job without seeing the plans for what he/she is supposed to build, let alone a contract with penalty clauses. I'm not sure why you think you need that veil between the story and your readers/players but it's immensely unbelievable.
Despite all that, your VN has captured my interest and attention. I'm looking forward to your next update.
However:
1: Don't disable sound controls. Period. That is moronic.
2: Don't disable the standard quick menu. Seriously foolish.
3: Don't offer a choice that isn't a choice.
4: I don't know who actually put in the tags, but when I see vaginal sex I expect it to be with the MC, not his rival.
I see a lot of potential in this game. The renders are fine. Writing is good. It's technically sound.
Plot is very weak. No builder ever signs up for a job without seeing the plans for what he/she is supposed to build, let alone a contract with penalty clauses. I'm not sure why you think you need that veil between the story and your readers/players but it's immensely unbelievable.
Despite all that, your VN has captured my interest and attention. I'm looking forward to your next update.
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...be honest about the content of your game and don't try to piss off a whole bunch of people within the first few hours
by writing things in the description that prove to be the opposite in the game.
Problem solved.
I like the premise.
And a set up for a possible NTR two way is interesting. Lemme guess, the project will need back up, and the typical horndog MC character gets picked. And he'll bring the lovely C word with him.
The MC being not a horndog has possibilities. Though with the way I play, that vow ain't got a snowball's chance in hell xD
And a set up for a possible NTR two way is interesting. Lemme guess, the project will need back up, and the typical horndog MC character gets picked. And he'll bring the lovely C word with him.
The MC being not a horndog has possibilities. Though with the way I play, that vow ain't got a snowball's chance in hell xD
I'm not vegan but as a harem fan, I feel like being in a vegan restaurant and about to pay the bill the waiter saying to me:
"Did you like your veggie burger? Don't worry, only the first two bites are beef and pork, but the rest of the burger was 100% vegan!"
"See you soon!"
(yeah... Count on that...)
"Did you like your veggie burger? Don't worry, only the first two bites are beef and pork, but the rest of the burger was 100% vegan!"
"See you soon!"
(yeah... Count on that...
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Honestly, my only problem with this game is the MC. Seriously, if instead of some typical beta-cuck simp in a vacuum who looks like he came out of the Paris Chamber of Weights and Measures, the MC would have behaved like a real alpha virgin, a btard from 4ch, the game would have looked a lot more positive. Like when he first saw the whore who dumped him, fucked some scumbag and got knocked up by him, instead of thinking, "Oh, I'm so nervous, my legs are shaking, I'm scared, I'm gonna piss my pants, I wish they wouldn't notice me." He'd think, "What a slut, but I'd fuck her and then piss on her." Well, she's living with an asshole who cheats on her and hopes she can change him, she well deserves to be pissed. Hopefully there will be some decent virgin girls in the village, with an IQ higher than the mentally challenged. Because so far we have only one that thinks she can fix a serial cheater, I think in addition she thinks that if he hits her, he loves her. The other, because of a lost bet, got fucked and creampied in the toilet. What a biological waste.
The author wrote that during the story MC will evole from a sipm and a beta cuck to a normal and reasonable human. You could also make the hero a cynical troll, a liar and a virgin who thinks that all women are whores (well, so far they confirm this hypothesis), during the game his heart will soften and he will meet those girls who are not yet whores, he will realize that there are also normal women.
The author wrote that during the story MC will evole from a sipm and a beta cuck to a normal and reasonable human. You could also make the hero a cynical troll, a liar and a virgin who thinks that all women are whores (well, so far they confirm this hypothesis), during the game his heart will soften and he will meet those girls who are not yet whores, he will realize that there are also normal women.
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Really liked the premise and the set-up so far. MC is soon going to be surrounded by horny singles in his area, all looking for a dose of his baby batter.
The shit sandwich with the woman who he was pining for is just the impetus to get him to make the move when the contract raises all kinds of questions.
Changes to the story I would suggest:
- the option to continue viewing the sex scene in the bathroom or not; once MC confirms that Paul is cheating, continuing to watch until the creampie is something I didn't care to see
I chose to have MC leave his past behind and walk out of the bathroom after that.
Will Paul's gf and toilet girl feature in the game going forward? I'm a little leery that toilet girl is the spokesgirl at the beginning of the game...
Unlike some players here, I don't really care if I see future LIs having sex before they hook up with MC. I will, however, turn down a girl who helped a dude cheat on his pregnant gf, lost bet or no. It shows a lack of common decency that I just don't find attractive in a partner.
I am looking forward to the next update, because I find the women in this game to be quite nice to look at. I'm especially keen on the architect. A very striking woman.
The shit sandwich with the woman who he was pining for is just the impetus to get him to make the move when the contract raises all kinds of questions.
Changes to the story I would suggest:
- the option to continue viewing the sex scene in the bathroom or not; once MC confirms that Paul is cheating, continuing to watch until the creampie is something I didn't care to see
I chose to have MC leave his past behind and walk out of the bathroom after that.
Will Paul's gf and toilet girl feature in the game going forward? I'm a little leery that toilet girl is the spokesgirl at the beginning of the game...
Unlike some players here, I don't really care if I see future LIs having sex before they hook up with MC. I will, however, turn down a girl who helped a dude cheat on his pregnant gf, lost bet or no. It shows a lack of common decency that I just don't find attractive in a partner.
I am looking forward to the next update, because I find the women in this game to be quite nice to look at. I'm especially keen on the architect. A very striking woman.