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When its like that, you need to explain better the roles between them, or at least ages. Is any of them a mother and two daughters? are all of them around the same age?
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Incest + Romance... I can't ask for anything better.
Nice start!
For now, very likeable characters.
Lisa is very sweet. I thought that she would be the typical sister who hates us for the simple fact of existing, but clearly she is not. I like that we have good and loving relationships with the sisters in the games. With the family, in general.
Grace is interesting. Although in addition to her alcoholism, we do not have much information about her. But as a fan of Mother and Son romances, I like it.
The same thing happened with Hazel as with Lisa. I thought she would be the typical flirty aunt who starts seducing the MC. And so far, this has not happened. It may happen later, yes. But I hope not. Hazel gives me the impression that she will help Grace with her problem and her entire family. It seems that she really cares about this and she wants the best for them. If this is so, I like it very much.
Overall, good first contact. Now, things that, as a totally personal taste, I would like to see:
1) I hope the MC is not a jerk or a pervert. This is very important for me. :B
2) That I am not forced to do anything. That we can choose who and how to romance. If I want to romance a character, or if I want to maintain a purely friendly relationship.
3) Like I said, I'm a fan of romance + incest. And I don't mind a dark theme. I don't know if the description is literal, but that "the game is about murder, betrayal and twists even a cork screw wouldn't see coming!" interests me a lot and has me intrigued. So, as long as I can have "vanilla" romances. Basically no corrupting the girls, no perverting them or things like that. Although I like wholesomes romances, I don't ask for this either. I would just like to be the "good guy".
We have seen some character history that can be related to the main story, but we have seen practically nothing of the central story (I think). Again, the game looks very good. I think it's worth keeping track of.
Much success in development!
Nice start!
For now, very likeable characters.
Lisa is very sweet. I thought that she would be the typical sister who hates us for the simple fact of existing, but clearly she is not. I like that we have good and loving relationships with the sisters in the games. With the family, in general.
Grace is interesting. Although in addition to her alcoholism, we do not have much information about her. But as a fan of Mother and Son romances, I like it.
The same thing happened with Hazel as with Lisa. I thought she would be the typical flirty aunt who starts seducing the MC. And so far, this has not happened. It may happen later, yes. But I hope not. Hazel gives me the impression that she will help Grace with her problem and her entire family. It seems that she really cares about this and she wants the best for them. If this is so, I like it very much.
Overall, good first contact. Now, things that, as a totally personal taste, I would like to see:
1) I hope the MC is not a jerk or a pervert. This is very important for me. :B
2) That I am not forced to do anything. That we can choose who and how to romance. If I want to romance a character, or if I want to maintain a purely friendly relationship.
3) Like I said, I'm a fan of romance + incest. And I don't mind a dark theme. I don't know if the description is literal, but that "the game is about murder, betrayal and twists even a cork screw wouldn't see coming!" interests me a lot and has me intrigued. So, as long as I can have "vanilla" romances. Basically no corrupting the girls, no perverting them or things like that. Although I like wholesomes romances, I don't ask for this either. I would just like to be the "good guy".
We have seen some character history that can be related to the main story, but we have seen practically nothing of the central story (I think). Again, the game looks very good. I think it's worth keeping track of.
Much success in development!
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Yeah, proofreading isn't my strong point
I went over it 3 times and still missed parts, gonna be taking a couple on for part 2.
Yeah, my #1 request for games is to be able to NOT peep or grope someone while they sleep. I don't need it to be a variable that counts for or against the MC, just have it optional. I am not interested in perving on people who are vulnerable. Not my thing at all.
I also am the weirdo who likes to do "no sex" runs of games to see if the story holds up without the fucking. Just curiosity as to whether there is enough content to keep people interested without the sex.
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My original draft for episode 1 was a long longer than this and it was going to go into so much more detail about each character. Due to working full time on WTHI I had to cut the release back drastically so I ended up splitting the episodes into 5 parts.
My original plan was that the MC wasn't going to be the perv we see in every game, I originally wanted him to over time develop feelings for each character and we'd go from there, my fear with splitting episode 1 into 5 parts was the game wouldn't seem lewd enough so in an attempt to make it more "porny" I added in the parts about looking up Lisa's skirt and fondling Grace on the sofa which I fear may have taken away from the nice guy Mc I was going for.
As for your tastes:
1) MC will not be a jerk, or at least not a perverted jerk who only wants to force everyone to fuck him, I will need to make him a tad more perverted just to make the game more lewd, but probably nothing your average perv doesn't go through on a daily basis
2) In part 1 there are no choices, but rest assured, I do plan on making so people have multi-choice options to shape the game and characters the way they want to.
3) The will be 0 corruption, this is purely a love story which I know some people won't like, but I ( as in me the dev
) have no interest in corruption in any way."We have seen some character history that can be related to the main story, but we have seen practically nothing of the central story (I think). Again, the game looks very good and I will follow suit."
So far I've shown nothing for the main story, again this is due to having to cut the game down so much for the 1st release.
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You'll need to message the developer of it for the Daz3D version of it.
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Sure, people expect the maximum amount of lewd scenes in an adult / porn / erotic game. I understand it, but I don't share it. I have absolutely no problem with slow burn games, but not so slow burn either.My original draft for episode 1 was a long longer than this and it was going to go into so much more detail about each character. Due to working full time on WTHI I had to cut the release back drastically so I ended up splitting the episodes into 5 parts.
My original plan was that the MC wasn't going to be the perv we see in every game, I originally wanted him to over time develop feelings for each character and we'd go from there, my fear with splitting episode 1 into 5 parts was the game wouldn't seem lewd enough so in an attempt to make it more "porny" I added in the parts about looking up Lisa's skirt and fondling Grace on the sofa which I fear may have taken away from the nice guy Mc I was going for.
As for your tastes:
1) MC will not be a jerk, or at least not a perverted jerk who only wants to force everyone to fuck him, I will need to make him a tad more perverted just to make the game more lewd, but probably nothing your average perv doesn't go through on a daily basis
2) In part 1 there are no choices, but rest assured, I do plan on making so people have multi-choice options to shape the game and characters the way they want to.
3) The will be 0 corruption, this is purely a love story which I know some people won't like, but I ( as in me the dev
"We have seen some character history that can be related to the main story, but we have seen practically nothing of the central story (I think). Again, the game looks very good and I will follow suit."
So far I've shown nothing for the main story, again this is due to having to cut the game down so much for the 1st release.
As for "groping" Grace while she sleeps, I definitely don't like this. As Mr. Friendly said, taking advantage of someone "helpless" in any way gives me the creeps. While it doesn't automatically make MC a pervert and a jerk, I think it could have been better. It would look pretty sexy even if just her shirt slides off and we see his nipple, his breast... And I'm sorry to be so insistent. but the fact of touching her while she sleeps and on top of her sleeping drunk ... Uff, I don't know. If we see a breast or the pussy and that's it. Nothing else, without touching her. But hey, I emphasize that this are personal tastes. Let no one be angry.
Well that, I think this would be the only "complaint" I have. And it definitely doesn't overshadow the good things in this first version.
And about what it will be a pure love story... With that you have definitely won me. Thank you very much for answering!
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Honestly the sleeping grope scene was a last minute addition, originally I had her asleep at the kitchen counter and MC puts a couple bottles in the bin and then carried her to bed, but like I said, tried to make it more lewd. I'll probably remove the grope part in part 2 and keep the pussy/boob flash.Sure, people expect the maximum amount of lewd scenes in an adult / porn / erotic game. I understand it, but I don't share it. I have absolutely no problem with slow burn games, but not so slow burn either.
As for "groping" Grace while she sleeps, I definitely don't like this. As Mr. Friendly said, taking advantage of someone "helpless" in any way gives me the creeps. While it doesn't automatically make MC a pervert and a jerk, I think it could have been better. It would look pretty sexy even if just her shirt slides off and we see his nipple, his breast... And I'm sorry to be so insistent. but the fact of touching her while she sleeps and on top of her sleeping drunk ... Uff, I don't know. If we see a breast or the pussy and that's it. Nothing else, without touching her. But hey, I emphasize that this are personal tastes. Let no one be angry.
Well that, I think this would be the only "complaint" I have. And it definitely doesn't overshadow the good things in this first version, nor does it make me want to keep playing.
And about what it will be a pure love story... With that you have definitely won me. Thank you very much for answering!
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These are the current planned tags:Can you add planned tags in dev notes? that would eliminate many doubts of possible players or patreons, I finished playing and the game, the story, model and renders seem good to me, some parts generate doubts hahaha like the scene on the couch with the "childhood friend" the mc acts like a creep
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- Pregnancy ( Possibly, not to sure yet, I know what of the non-main characters will be pregnant ).
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Please tell me you at least have an outline of each character's arc and the whole thing plotted out?
Because right now it's looking like you're either going to write yourself into a corner that you can't recover from or create something that's so busy being twisty and creative that you don't get actual character development that makes any lewd scenes have actual impact on the player.
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Well, I would love that. xD
But I also don't want it to look like I'm demanding things or pressuring you to do it or something.
