VN Ren'Py The Cabin - Summer Vacation [Ep. 9] [CellStudios]

[CellStudios]

Oh also, something I can say here but not on patreon for obvious reasons again

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[satirious]

Oh also, something I can say here but not on patreon for obvious reasons again

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[CellStudios]

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The way I worked it out was:

Mcs mom was 16 when she got knocked up
Mc was 18 when he knocked someone up
The daughter is 18

So 16+18+18 = 52 ( mcs moms age )

Or am I having a total math fart right now? I'm sure there needs to be another number in there...

I feel like there needs to be another number in there to account for someone getting to an age.

 

[satirious]

The way I worked it out was:

Mcs mom was 16 when she got knocked up
Mc was 18 when he knocked someone up
The daughter is 18

So 16+18+18 = 52 ( mcs moms age )

Or am I having a total math fart right now? I'm sure there needs to be another number in there...

I feel like there needs to be another number in there to account for someone getting to an age.

You said MC was 30-32 and has an 18-19 year old daughter. 32-19=13 at the oldest before you take into consideration those pesky 40 weeks of pregnancy. Not judging if that's the story you want. It's almost become a sport for 20 something teachers to be banging 10-13 year old students these days. If you want the MC to be 18 when he has a daughter then he has to be at least 36. Mom can still be 52 if she was 16 when she has him.

 

[HansDampf788]

Mcs mom was 16 when she got knocked up
Mc was 18 when he knocked someone up
The daughter is 18

Then the MC needs to be 36 but you said he will be

mc 30-32 ish,

 

[CellStudios]

Yeah my math isn't all there is it but I'm not 100% set on theages yet, mc could be 36.

 

[satirious]

Yeah my math isn't all there is it but I'm not 100% set on theages yet, mc could be 36.

Or 32 if you want to go with the banged his teacher story and then Mom can be a few years younger. That makes your job of making her not granny-ish easier.

 

[CellStudios]

Or 32 if you want to go with the banged his teacher story and then Mom can be a few years younger. That makes your job of making her not granny-ish easier.

It's not gonna be a teacher he get's pregnant though.

 

[HansDampf788]

It's not gonna be a teacher he get's pregnant though.

If you're not showing it in the game you can make the MC 14 when he got a girl pregnant, then he would be 32 in the game.

 

[MrFriendly]

If you're not showing it in the game you can make the MC 14 when he got a girl pregnant, then he would be 32 in the game.

Is that true? Can you refer to a past relationship which was underage without the thought police coming after you? So often in these games it seems that the characters can't even talk about sex until they are 18 and then SUDDENLY they can fuck like "porn-thletes".

It would make for an interesting, though perhaps depressing, story if the MC knocked up a girl when they were both 14.

 

[clowns234]

Yes Models come with a default size but that's not a limitation on the final size the creator chooses to use. Pretty sure most every image is scale-able and the final size can be increased or decreased without a problem. RenPy does not care what size PNG model image you use.

Does that mean that it needs to be? If this MC looked like he was 12, I could almost see your point. He doesn't.

BTW, an inexperienced guy falling for an experienced older woman is sort of what the MILF tag is all about. You don't have to like, but many do.

 

[HansDampf788]

Is that true? Can you refer to a past relationship which was underage without the thought police coming after you? So often in these games it seems that the characters can't even talk about sex until they are 18 and then SUDDENLY they can fuck like "porn-thletes".

It would make for an interesting, though perhaps depressing, story if the MC knocked up a girl when they were both 14.

I think F95 doesn't have a problem with it if you just talk about it and don't show it, when it comes to Patreon I don't know but why not just leave his age unclear and just say he was a bit younger than most other people who have fathered a child.

Having a child at 14 is not unheard of not that I know anything about it.

 

[MrFriendly]

I think F95 doesn't have a problem with it if you just talk about it and don't show it, when it comes to Patreon I don't know but why not just leave his age unclear and just say he was a bit younger than most other people who have fathered a child.

Having a child at 14 is not unheard of not that I know anything about it.

I have no problem with being vague, though there could be the approach of letting the player control ages. Could get messy to do that. Also sometimes players hate ambiguity because it's not a common fetish.

And I don't personally have experience with someone having/fathering a child at that age, I am sure it is not as rare as people would like to believe.

 

[FeropsisFenarue]

Is that true? Can you refer to a past relationship which was underage without the thought police coming after you? So often in these games it seems that the characters can't even talk about sex until they are 18 and then SUDDENLY they can fuck like "porn-thletes".

It would make for an interesting, though perhaps depressing, story if the MC knocked up a girl when they were both 14.

The thought police will come after you no matter what you say, or who your characters are.

I think as a writer, you could clearly state there was some guilt, and regretfully bad decisions made on the part of the MC and their partner if someone ended up getting knocked up when one or both the partners were underage. Someone's gonna get pissed at that, but they can pound sand. I mean, they are on a pirate site for porn games. They don't have a lot of moral ground to stand on. In fact, there's a mainstream Adam Sandler movie (That's my Boy) where the MC's dad had him with an adult teacher when he was underage - though the teacher did end up in jail for it.

Its certainly a better premise than the characters waited for the magical age of 18 to ever have sex, and then suddenly made a bad decision to not use protection.

I personally don't have any problem with the MC having been 14, banging a teacher, neighbor, older brother's ex girlfriend, or even a close relative like a mother or aunt. You can talk about it a few times in game, and most people will probably skip over it.

 

[HansDampf788]

I have no problem with being vague, though there could be the approach of letting the player control ages. Could get messy to do that. Also sometimes players hate ambiguity because it's not a common fetish.

And I don't personally have experience with someone having/fathering a child at that age, I am sure it is not as rare as people would like to believe.

I'm a fan of player-controlled ages, depending on if it makes sense with how the characters look.

I know that thanks to a girl that was a bit older than me, I had a very fun two-week holiday trip to the beach when I was 14 so everything is possible.

 

[clowns234]

The thought police will come after you no matter what you say, or who your characters are.

I think as a writer, you could clearly state there was some guilt, and regretfully bad decisions made on the part of the MC and their partner if someone ended up getting knocked up when one or both the partners were underage. Someone's gonna get pissed at that, but they can pound sand. I mean, they are on a pirate site for porn games. They don't have a lot of moral ground to stand on. In fact, there's a mainstream Adam Sandler movie (That's my Boy) where the MC's dad had him with an adult teacher when he was underage - though the teacher did end up in jail for it.

Its certainly a better premise than the characters waited for the magical age of 18 to ever have sex, and then suddenly made a bad decision to not use protection.

I personally don't have any problem with the MC having been 14, banging a teacher, neighbor, older brother's ex girlfriend, or even a close relative like a mother or aunt. You can talk about it a few times in game, and most people will probably skip over it.

I see a lot of 'my kink good - your kink bad' on this site. It's hard not to laugh.
As for the age thing, I knew a girl who got pregnant at 14, had the kid at 15, and the 'dad' was the 13 year old who lived next door.

 

[DA22]

I see a lot of 'my kink good - your kink bad' on this site. It's hard not to laugh.
As for the age thing, I knew a girl who got pregnant at 14, had the kid at 15, and the 'dad' was the 13 year old who lived next door.

Yeah things like that happen all over the world, more or less arbitrary ages for the age of consent or when someone is officially adult never work in practice. People have needs way earlier and their emotional and physical growth is also different. I have known enough people that were not ready for adult responsibilities at age 25 and others that took care of themselves more or less at age 15 quite well.

Still according to most law and the opinion of many I am allowed to take advantage or abuse of a girl when she turned 18 yo but that girl that was the same at 17 yo 364 days old I would be an asshole if did that two days before ........ Well in my eyes I would be an asshole in both cases, unless it was something she wanted and I agreed she knew what she wanted. For boys it is the same in the end, even as a society we overall do not value their virginity or sexuality as much unless the other one is also male. Then we do get our sensibilities affronted more.

 

[Wolfbeckett]

Just finished playing it and though there isn't much content yet I enjoyed what there is. Slasher movie genre is at least a fairly novel concept for an incest VN and the characters seem likable enough, except Grace of course but hopefully her character arc will justify her starting the game as an alcoholic thundercunt. My only real complaint so far is the dream sequence. I have a bad case of the yellow fever... it's like... a yellow plague... and it looks like the hot Asian is to be nothing but an excuse to throw extra lewds into the game that have nothing to do with the actual story. That's somewhat irritating. But, not enough to make me dislike the game, I'm looking forward to seeing where this one goes!

 

[CellStudios]

Just finished playing it and though there isn't much content yet I enjoyed what there is. Slasher movie genre is at least a fairly novel concept for an incest VN and the characters seem likable enough, except Grace of course but hopefully her character arc will justify her starting the game as an alcoholic thundercunt. My only real complaint so far is the dream sequence. I have a bad case of the yellow fever... it's like... a yellow plague... and it looks like the hot Asian is to be nothing but an excuse to throw extra lewds into the game that have nothing to do with the actual story. That's somewhat irritating. But, not enough to make me dislike the game, I'm looking forward to seeing where this one goes!

Yeah making Grace an alcoholic at the start is one of my biggest regrets, I feel like everyone is focusing on that, despite the fact it was going to be a tiny part of the story, and now, I have to come up with some big grand thing that'll explain it all.

It's truly stressing me out to the point where I'm thinking about just going back and removing all aspects of alcohol from her story because nothing I come up with will be enough, lol.

I can't use my original idea because almost everyone has guessed it and I'm the type of guy that prefers a little mystery to it, so now I'm sat here with a notepad writing down different ideas and browsing quora for idea of what the worst thing to happen to people are ( some messed up shit out there 0.0 ).

 

[clowns234]

Yeah making Grace an alcoholic at the start is one of my biggest regrets, I feel like everyone is focusing on that, despite the fact it was going to be a tiny part of the story, and now, I have to come up with some big grand thing that'll explain it all.

It's truly stressing me out to the point where I'm thinking about just going back and removing all aspects of alcohol from her story because nothing I come up with will be enough, lol.

I can't use my original idea because almost everyone has guessed it and I'm the type of guy that prefers a little mystery to it, so now I'm sat here with a notepad writing down different ideas and browsing quora for idea of what the worst thing to happen to people are ( some messed up shit out there 0.0 ).

Not sure how private messaging works here but you could have people send you ideas. That might be fun.
And just my opinion but I think it was more about her being a bitch than her being an alcoholic.
"Mom, I don't think you should be driving."
"You're right. Would you drive for me?"

Or maybe the excuse is a lame one. You could make that work. Helps her realize her kids were mature enough to handle it.