There are a few grammar mistakes but the one that made me doubt and laugh the most was probably this one
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That aside, I'm surprised by the quality. It looks really good so far, though I feel like some things are a bit rushed.
For instance when the MC goes about how he doesn't wanna sacrifice "people he cares for", I mean, okay? I get that he doesn't want to have his people killed, but caring for people you barely met seems a bit too much
Anyway, love (most of) the crew, I hope to see more of Sarmi personally. Might be my netori preferences speaking though.