vall6269

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There are a few grammar mistakes but the one that made me doubt and laugh the most was probably this one
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That aside, I'm surprised by the quality. It looks really good so far, though I feel like some things are a bit rushed.
For instance when the MC goes about how he doesn't wanna sacrifice "people he cares for", I mean, okay? I get that he doesn't want to have his people killed, but caring for people you barely met seems a bit too much

Anyway, love (most of) the crew, I hope to see more of Sarmi personally. Might be my netori preferences speaking though.
 
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acewinz

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There are a few grammar mistakes but the one that made me doubt and laugh the most was probably this one
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That aside, I'm surprised by the quality. It looks really good so far, though I feel like some things are a bit rushed.
For instance when the MC goes about how he doesn't wanna sacrifice "people he cares for", I mean, okay? I get that he doesn't want to have his people killed, but caring for people you barely met seems a bit too much

Anyway, love (most of) the crew, I hope to see more of Sarmi personally. Might be my netori preferences speaking though.
ROFL, dang it, and I made sure to check I spelled Hippocratic right... think auto correct caught me there. It really sux in atom, which unfortunately is what I'm used to.
 

kibaris

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A really good update, the only part that i didnt like was with Kaylee, that kind of scene with her would have been fine once they were safe but certainly not in a ship infested with monsters when they had to escape as fast than possible, especially when that monster they had to kill prooved that the place wasnt safe, it really felt out of place .

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acewinz

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It's not misspelled - just the wrong word.
I know lol, the problem was atom didn't have hippocratic in it's spell check, but it did have hypocritic and figured it was helping me out. :D
 

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Also, from a character perspective there is the very first encounter on the Demeter the MC has alone with Jane and James... where ironically nobody has really complained of urgency in that scene.
That's probably because in the beginning he is well within the 30-minutes he had before his ship was supposed to leave. At the end he is already overdue and every second they spend there, they risk being left behind. Add to that the fact that Callisto expressly told him that the moment he gets Alina, the space spider is going to go ham and he has to get off the ship ASAP, and the whole scene becomes borderline suicidal.
 

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Justice for Pella!
I think it's going to be a running gag.

He dream fucked her and dream Pella moved on, he got told by her dad she was probs dead and now he's been told she's dead again.

Next time will be Val shouting over "hey Cap, remember your pregnant dead ex that probably died horrifically? ....... that shit was funny amirite?"
 

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I think it's going to be a running gag.

He dream fucked her and dream Pella moved on, he got told by her dad she was probs dead and now he's been told she's dead again.

Next time will be Val shouting over "hey Cap, remember your pregnant dead ex that probably died horrifically? ....... that shit was funny amirite?"
Bad Ava!
 
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