VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Chemist [Ep.4] [Fringe Creations]

[Ozygator]

osnt about the futa ppl are mad is bcs the intaged ntr if u chosse the futa content,...it seems dev recomend it and show us he will fuck with us no matter what,..the game was ok ,the mc was a horny dog,still is,...but the unwanted ntr the non avoidable shit going on,...means more than any futa content,....

Yep, dev just lost most of the crowd of who may have followed the game after the inability to define relationships, since its hard coded 'step' already.

Ah well, assume the dev really didn't want support since its not built like a typical NTR game to pull that crowd, and just pissed off most of the harem or incest groups too.

A lesson on how to step on your own dick we can assume.

 

[Hello21]

The futa scene with the woman was very nice, need swinging tag

 

[i dond dog]

this dev deserves more love.

 

[comann]

I think the game it hot

 

[crimsonxplt]

I guess it could be considered NTR(the relationship was not consummated) but the game has been ALL SEX ALL THE TIME so swinging/sharing makes more contextual sense. Not a fan of ntr but looking forward to continuing the story.
P.S. I loved the journal it made me chuckle.

 

[ThemApples]

Been a while since I last played this game so I'm checking out the new build, but it's sorta hilarious how much some people seethe when sex things they don't like happen in the sex game they're playing. It's a fictional story. People talk like the developer literally fucked their mother and made them watch.

I do agree with some of the negative reviews that the game really needs another writing pass, though. A common problem with erotic games in general is that they forget why novels have editors. You don't typically write a novel chapter by chapter and then just publish it. You go back and tighten everything up. It's more than just spelling and grammar and characters having unique voices. It's about pacing and tone and so on.

 

[RedBone]

missing shitty NTR tag. futa is fine tho.

 

[xXwankerXx]

What in the unholy name of Yeet happened here, bois ?? Just downloaded the game, checked the renders and did I just see that sweet, caring, perfect 10 milf get dicked by a damn futa or tranny or whatever in a filthy nightclub bathroom stall, of all places, after she made it abundantly clear she had the hots for the MC and needed his dick ?? Da fuck ?? Who bribed the dev to pull this shit off ??

Was this supposed to be a "gotcha, bitch" moment or just a prelude for a debatably funny joke or more 'spicy' content later down the line ?? Cuz if it isn't, it's a shitty decision to make... I agree with almost everything everyone else said on this topic.

You just don't do your audience dirty like that, if you wanna make money off this shit, smfh.

A lesson on how to step on your own dick we can assume.

Sounds like the perfect figure of speech to describe this whole nonsense.

osnt about the futa ppl are mad is bcs the intaged ntr if u chosse the futa content

he unwanted ntr the non avoidable shit going on,...means more than any futa content

Yeah, a lil heads-up is always the better option when it comes to content like this, preferably from the get-go, but holy pixelated fuck... going straight for the hottest woman in the whole game and throwing her under the tank like that was brutal, kinda funny too, ngl.

Dev should take into the account the fact that if they lose most, if not all, of their current romance/non NTR supporters cuz of this dumb stunt, they don't have anyone else but themselves to blame for it.

Most ppl know how to take a hint if they're warned about certain stuff in advance or there's hints dropped about it in the story, this kinda development with the milf was unnecessary and absolutely ridiculous. Gonna give it one or two more updates to see if I'll stick around for more or not, but fact is, the dev needs to address this lil issue asap and do damage control until it's too late and they're forced to abandon the game.

 

[xXwankerXx]

This is a choice without a choice .

Apparently, the only choice IS you DON'T really have a choice. The futa shit is unavoidable, or there's a coding error the dev needs to fix and tell us if this really is the case or it's just a simple misunderstanding. I thought mind control stuff was banned on Patreon, but yeah... some answers to a few questions would be greatly appreciated, if the dev reads this.

Damn, this kinda shit's bound to deliver a nasty blow to those finances, but hey, at least the futa's D is smaller than MC's... the fight's not lost yet, bois. Oooh... forgot to mention this.... there's another guy, who I assume is MC's employer, already getting head trying some mind-control shit on two random attractive women too, they liked it and we absolutely needed to see it, cuz, as usual, it was necessary for 'the plot'. Sloppy seconds for the win, I tell y'all. Gotta let others test the product first and tell you how reliable it is before buying it for yourself.

And another thing... liked the game until I saw the other guy get a BJ, the futa fuck Olivia like she was a braindead, cum-for-brains hoe, futa's a jealous lil pee-pee bitch and commands her new "pet" Olivia not to let the MC fuck her too (epic fails galore here), but these ones in the spoiler bellow took the cake, had a good laugh reading that dumb shit tho.

It's plain obvious what the real intentions here are, the rest is just something of a bonus that's supposed to keep harem and romance fans interested, so unless the dev doesn't come clean about their true intentions and answer a few questions regarding all the questionable shit we saw in the story in this Ep and how actually avoidable and optional everything is, we might as well drop the game and move on.

Spoiler

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

 

[gabriel12345621]

without sound, without music, shit

 

[i dond dog]

Apparently, the only choice IS you DON'T really have a choice. The futa shit is unavoidable, or there's a coding error the dev needs to fix and tell us if this really is the case or it's just a simple misunderstanding. I thought mind control stuff was banned on Patreon, but yeah... some answers to a few questions would be greatly appreciated, if the dev reads this.

Damn, this kinda shit's bound to deliver a nasty blow to those finances, but hey, at least the futa's D is smaller than MC's... the fight's not lost yet, bois. Oooh... forgot to mention this.... there's another guy, who I assume is MC's employer, already getting head trying some mind-control shit on two random attractive women too, they liked it and we absolutely needed to see it, cuz, as usual, it was necessary for 'the plot'. Sloppy seconds for the win, I tell y'all. Gotta let others test the product first and tell you how reliable it is before buying it for yourself.

And another thing... liked the game until I saw the other guy get a BJ, the futa fuck Olivia like she was a braindead, cum-for-brains hoe, futa's a jealous lil pee-pee bitch and commands her new "pet" Olivia not to let the MC fuck her too (epic fails galore here), but these ones in the spoiler bellow took the cake, had a good laugh reading that dumb shit tho.

It's plain obvious what the real intentions here are, the rest is just something of a bonus that's supposed to keep harem and romance fans interested, so unless the dev doesn't come clean about their true intentions and answer a few questions regarding all the questionable shit we saw in the story in this Ep and how actually avoidable and optional everything is, we might as well drop the game and move on.

Spoiler

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Hahahaha this guy, the fucking literary guru Screw off with your pompous trite Just enjoy the fucking game or bail dude.

 

[Rabonixxx]

I don´t why how I did not play this game, amazing twistplot. More futa is always welcomed, and if it´s futa NTR is just simply lovely, pretty good job .

 

[Charlie78]

OK! It's a good game. I love the Scenes with Heels, BUT I want self chanche who MC's f''king!

 

[BigTTiger]

Might as well remove the harem tag and add the NTR tag so ppl will know to avoid this shit storm of a game and it's a shame because I really was enjoying this oh well shit games happen, I guess

 

[BigTTiger]

Oh, here's a fun little thingy since the "step-mom" has been "ordered" to not give up her box to anyone other than the fake Dianna then MC can just go have fun with all the other women and dear ole step-mommy's box can just dry the fuck up eh there's plenty of other girls to entertain but if the dumbass MC doesn't pull his head out of his ass and stop thinking with his dick 24/7 then he'll continue to lose women.

 

[krapsp3044]

outro jogo merda com ntr de frouxo

This is an English Forum make sure you have it translated

 

[Booba740]

This needs to have NTR tag

 

[Grey Wolf 73]

I don't like that Olivia dun got got by a futa... However.
I see PLENTY of ways this can be resolved where our beloved MC gets do dick down his lovely step...
His own ste...
His s...

WTFever, we all want Olivia to be his mother. So that's what she is in my mind.
It might not read that way on screen, but that's what immagination is for.
Anyway... I can see many ways that Olivia can be brought back into the fold where she and the MC bang happily ever after.
I'm not ready to write this VN off just yet.

As far as the NTR tag?
I hate 95% of NTR in AVNs. But I can handle this case ONLY because (as I said) I think it might be easily rectified.
Hopefully soon™. We shall see.

 

[Kestre1]

the game sucks so far, typical harem, you don't have a choice of which chick you want to start a relationship with, you just click, click and click, shit

 

[AlexStandal]

Abandoned?