The story alone is for anyone how loves getting fucked over and wants to see women get railed by big black cock. I would be amazed if anyone can get passed the fact that the MC is competing against a gigantic cocked piece of shit who apparently is running trains on some popular blonde every weekend and raping the school principle (? can't remember sorry) who evidently enjoys it. All while flirting with the MCs mom who quite literally wants to take every dick she can find. The MC gets into some scenarios where he can get laid, but one is questionably date rape and the other is a pity fuck. Overall, the MC is a future cuck specialist waiting in the wings. I'm not a fan of these stories unless the MC does just as much fucking as the characters who try to fuck with him. This would have more promise if the piece of shit were killed in the first 30 minutes rather than having a bullshit premise around a copycat that clearly has nothing to do with the MC or the other characters. If this was a murder mystery where the MC starts to suspect his own mother, that would make for a more compelling story. Like let's say the night she went to threaten the big gorilla (not a reference to his race - he's just big and dumb) he ended up dead. That would cast doubt on the her. Having her be in places where suspiciously other killings keep taking place. Have victim be a girl the MC was recently with. Have the dumb blonde go missing after she had that three-way with big idiot and his friend. Casting some suspicion on him before he gets ganked. The current story feels like a bunch of random shit thrown together and calling it a plot. It's just:
Here's a scene where the MC gets bullied
Here's a scene where two guys practically rape a girl and she evidently loved it?
Here's a scene where the mom gets involved and hit on by the same guy who beat her son, rapes women, and she's somehow attracted to this gruff gangster attitude
Now a scene where for no reason the MC's mom is holding a knife in a panic
Oh the mom talked to the principle about her son's bully and instead of actually doing something about it, the principle willingly gets raped.
And the "plot" just gets more and more convoluted with no actual premise. In the end this story does nothing for me. The sex is just there and if that's the only reason to go through this nonsense I'll go to the dozens of other VNs that do it better. This just isn't my cup of tea. Hope everyone else who enjoys this gets something out of it and I wish the Dev all the luck in the world getting support.
