This is such an excellent game - really well written, Alice is incredibly attractive, there are meaningful choices and the psychology is realistic enough for her decisions to work. The subtle variations in the party scene are so well done and the way it understands what women dressing sexily means (maybe unconsciously) is smart. I personally don't like it when attractive heroines put up with smarmy males, Leon's just incredibly dislikable and I don't believe in her being attracted to Carlos (the writing sort of knows neither is actually attractive enough for her because it has each of them save her from attack to make her grateful), it'd be better if she was tempted with someone where she wouldn't be degrading herself just being with them. Personally I think it's sexier if a good, intelligent Alice can't help herself instead of drunk, secretly-slutty-underneath Alice has sex with other (sleazy) men. But the scene with Monika in the car is *spectacular*, and having her around is good because then it's not just thirsty men and her. Other bits seem to be maybe setting up later connection with the police boss, which would be good.
Also, overall it feels like it's going somewhere, in that the title and the supernatural elements and the 'true Alice' bits imply some sort of connection/meaning between sex and the occult and I'm curious how thought-through that is and where it goes. Deserves loads of success, anyway, it's excellent