Ren'Py Abandoned The DeLuca Family [Season 1] [HopesGaming]

[hyper321]

One of the main themes of the game is character development. Mc is going from average/clueless/scared to basically the opposite. He will change a lot throughout the story.
But I do not believe in instant gratification. So, for now, we will have to follow an MC that is simply thinking about survival in an environment that is unbeknownst to him.

*Edit*
Of course, there are so many times in the script I just want to write it so MC act in a specific behavior that makes him not appear so weak and fragile (which is why many people can find him annoying) but once you have planned a characters story, character development, backstory, and personality- you are not in control of that character anymore. You cannot write what you want to do in a given situation, you have to write what he/she will do in a given situation.

Is the MC going to visually change too? At the moment he looks kind of average/clueless/scared like you said, it'd be cool if he eventually looks more like a confident, handsome, mafia-esque guy like Antonio or the new capo. In terms of clothing, hair style, posture, etc.

And a small grammar issue - the correct word is "anyway", not "anyways". I'm not sure if you're are just using it as a character quirk or you just write like that, but it annoyed the hell out of me, haha. But overall this game has some of the best writing/dialogue/characters of all the games I've played on this site, great job!

 

[HopesGaming]

I think tha ass of luna its for MC no proble. We have all back door open . damn we not only fuck soldier we fuck all member of delucca.
The new capos are good . the MC he hope the girl skater no skirt up .

I hope soon mc grope in the morning and in the late nigth the girls . and we have need expert in sigil for grope isabel in the nigth with the Antonio its sleep . Very danger .

HopesGaming the 3 personality of mc have much efect in the story or not . we have crazy fury and relax mc .

Yes, the personality of MC will play big roles in the story. But if it will mostly be how scenes play out rather than branching.

Is the MC going to visually change too? At the moment he looks kind of average/clueless/scared like you said, it'd be cool if he eventually looks more like a confident, handsome, mafia-esque guy like Antonio or the new capo. In terms of clothing, hair style, posture, etc.

And a small grammar issue - the correct word is "anyway", not "anyways". I'm not sure if you're are just using it as a character quirk or you just write like that, but it annoyed the hell out of me, haha. But overall this game has some of the best writing/dialogue/characters of all the games I've played on this site, great job!

MC will visually change a lot too. Not only clothing wise but how his hair, posture and even skin will change.
I know about the anyway and anyways (grammar control go crazy about it, heh) but it is a way to showcase informal talk without it going too much in the cringe direction.

 

[HopesGaming]

can anyone recommend a similar interesting story like this?

This will sound extremely arrogant- but there is no story like this.
Mainly because I wanted a game to be as different from the rest as possible. Tone wise, setting and story.

But interesting stories is another thing. Games like those are many.
PhillyGames new and old games are both great (Depraved Awakening and City of Broken Dreamers). And so is DrPinkCakes new and old games (Acting Lesson and Being a DIK).

Many others too. But you can get a better result when asking in the suggestion section in the forum.

 

[Joey the mangaka]

High rise its good. And other depend of you interest.

Thanks for the reply

 

[N7]

More Wilfred please thanks.

 

[Raiko1]

the game is abandoned?

The game dev has posts 3 and 4 above yours detailing what will happen in the future.

No. It's not abandoned.

 

[Blazblue]

there is no story like this.

OMG! You're so arrogant!

 

[King Monkey Mon]

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Hello DeLucas,

Time to share where we are with the upcoming update.
Script- pretty much done. Some few things need to be done here and there but should not be a major worry.

Renders is going good. And I am really looking forward to your guys reaction on the upcoming update. The battle scene is something I've been spending a bit time on. I really want it to not be a simple generic battle scene which is usually shown in VN's and especially lacking in adult VN's, but have it filled with adrenaline and high tempo.

Tomorrow or the day after tomorrow is the plan for finishing all the renders for that battle section.
Thereafter I will start working on the rescue sister mission. That one is more a stealth experience so it would not feel the same as going through the before mentioned battle scene, which is a bit more hectic in nature (Luna is in it hectic is unavoidable, heh)
The plan was to have Luna's backstory (The Mysterious Six) in this update to, but that all depends on how fast I can go through the rest. Normally I always focus on quality instead of quantity and time, but I feel you guys have been waiting a bit with this update so the Luna update will simply be moved to a) a sub update or b) in 0.06.
Plan is to have the update ready at the end of this month (this is not an eta but a wish).
I will work my hardest to be able to get it ready there.

Ironically enough, even though the update this time around is story focused, the game will have its first *very* sexual event this update. What I am trying to say is- bullets ain't the only thing that will be doing the penetrating in this update.

Lastly, couple of major guys will be introduced. Some high ups soldiers (will be reoccuring a lot), a character that have only been mentioned by name, and two new capos (one male, one female).

Three preview this time around and another spoiler preview later today for the Elite Tiers.
Luna Jump:
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New Capo (Female) :
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im pretty sure i mentioned before that Luna is best girl followed by Cordia and these screen shots of Luna just proves that mostly everyone on here agrees with that

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Eerie Entity Kukothemadhatter Fantabaldu HopesGaming

what is your ranking in favorite girls

1. Luna Best girl
2. Cordia Gender bender Don Corleone is the best milf in the game
3. Red head assassin soon to be probably in our family
4. Lunas Little Sister
5. the other milf in the game whos married to the son of the Don

 

[Eerie Entity]

im pretty sure i mentioned before that Luna is best girl followed by Cordia and these screen shots of Luna just proves that mostly everyone on here agrees with that

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Eerie Entity Kukothemadhatter Fantabaldu HopesGaming

what is your ranking in favorite girls

1. Luna Best girl
2. Cordia Gender bender Don Corleone is the best milf in the game
3. Red head assassin soon to be probably in our family
4. Lunas Little Sister
5. the other milf in the game whos married to the son of the Don

If Cordia was a LI in the story, I'd probably rate her at top spot, but since she isn't, then I have to rank Gracie at #1 spot and Luna and Isabella share the #2 spot, and that's simply based on the content and development with the characters so far, so rankings are subject to change

 

[Mytez]

Gracie at #1

That kiss with Gracie was hotter that all of those garbage BBC orgies that some devs write. She's by far the most intriguing character, next to whatshername (MC's soldier).

 

[Eerie Entity]

That kiss with Gracie was hotter that all of those garbage BBC orgies that some devs write. She's by far the most intriguing character, next to whatshername (MC's soldier).

I'd just say that the rooftop kissing scene with her was by far more sexier and erotic scene that most full on sex scenes that I've seen, and that's saying something, haha

 

[King Monkey Mon]

If Cordia was a LI in the story, I'd probably rate her at top spot, but since she isn't, then I have to rank Gracie at #1 spot and Luna and Isabella share the #2 spot, and that's simply based on the content and development with the characters so far, so rankings are subject to change

Mytez Fantabaldu HopesGaming

Gracie is cute no doubt about that but Luna is Unique compare to all the other porn game girls big - middle sister types yes i know were not related but man do i wish Cordia was our Mom plus shes a Don in terms of story this is one of those rare games where i care more about story then sexual scenes

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[Mytez]

Mytez Fantabaldu HopesGaming

Gracie is cute no doubt about that Luna is Unique compare to all the other porn game girls big - middle sister types yes i know were not related but man do i wish Cordia was our Mom plus shes a Don in terms of story this is one of those rare games where i care more about story then sexual scenes

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The thing with Gracie is that I don't know what her deal is. Is she a genius? Is she retarded? That uncertainty is what attracts me of her, the wanting to explore and know more of her. And she's a cutie as you said, of course.
Luna, I really like too, obviously, since she's the star of the show, but we can assume how she is, cold blodded, stoic and overall what you would expect from a "warrior". That's why I'm drawn more towards Gracie.

 

[Eerie Entity]

The thing with Gracie is that I don't know what her deal is. Is she a genius? Is she retarded? That uncertainty is what attracts me of her, the wanting to explore and know more of her. And she's a cutie as you said, of course.
Luna, I really like too, obviously, since she's the star of the show, but we can assume how she is, cold blodded, stoic and overall what you would expect from a "warrior". That's why I'm drawn more towards Gracie.

Yeah, that's more or less how I see it, and Gracie is just eager to learn new things and I just love her positive outlook on things, she's always so cheery and everything, plus I just love teaching her the pleasures of sexual things and teaching her about love too

 

[Uriel ☁]

I generally dislike harems in this sort of games but this is one of the few exceptions.
Gracie and Luna together simply "work" and I've a hard time ranking one above the other. When they're together they're more than their simple sum.

 

[Piyush3362]

HopesGaming
If you still have got some time then please post the ester bunny Lady Cordia which you said you will show

 

[Ichigo Kurosaki Shiba]

would have been cool if there would be some kind of gallery mod so you can watch any scene you saw again from start to finish!

 

[Ichigo Kurosaki Shiba]

becouse some moments in some scenes you just want to watch again and again and again

 

[My precious]

becouse some moments in some scenes you just want to watch again and again and again

It is Ren'ry game with shit-ton save slots and quick save\load option, make your own gallery via saves.

 

[Joey the mangaka]

In future update have gallery and scene