Gracie's stroryline is nice and all but I miss Luna xD. The choice to not have Luna and MC follow gracie around is one I understand, what with that being a very cliched thing to do, but having her say she's hungry set up a perfect oportunity for a lunch date that just didn't hapenT.T
Great update though. Still has quite a good few typos, but I haven't come across any bugs though I have come across things I would change.
I would suggest varying the colour or the font or anything in the character names when you have two "???" characters speaking. It's not really that hard to follow as is right now, but it can in the future really limit the range of scenes you can make. Scenes with 3+ unknown characters would be a pain to follow, unless you always have the speaking character on screen, which could ruin the flow of scenes, as well as hinder shot composition.
It's also not a huge deal but passing the time of day could be easier. Right now there is no way to do it from every room in the game(to the best of my knowledge). In the first playthrough that won't be a problem, since free time will be directed towards the grind, but comming back after an upgrade with 10k in the bank and only a few hundred bucks that you can even spend, doing missions no longer matter and the game will really just be composed of passing time until the event you're waiting for. The ability to do that easily from the room where the event you're waiting on take place would be really nice.
Other than that, I *guess* Gracie's relationship with the MC progressesd faster than I would like/expect, but that's probably just me.
Also, I had previously heard of some sort of training for the girl, which I had assumed Luna teaching Gracie about the missions and shit, so, did I miss something or was that too a joke like the dragon stuff?
