JillOC
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I was surprised by the Nate/Franklin image because Nate promised Todd he would be included next time. I'm starting to suspect Nate isn't a very good bro
BigSexy57
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It had a great start. That game. Such a disappointment to watch how it is becoming yet another optionless fuckfest, with less and less exciting storytelling, flat characters without personalities and motivation. And if i remember it right - the author mentioned once before that it's going to be a shorter game than it was planed, so the cutting out of routes, options and scenes will be increasing with every new of the rest few updates.
Sad.
It could be a good game. But it's clear as a day - it will be not.
Sad.
It could be a good game. But it's clear as a day - it will be not.
exazubi
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Pointless fuckfest? The sex has only just begun, and so far it's been pretty sparse. The fun is yet to really begin.
Less storytelling, flat characters without personalities and motivation? It seems to me you've been playing a different game.
Dessolos
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BigSexy57
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The tradition of all
The good example of how it may happen - was in scene right before the Kate's bj photoshot. When Luke and Kate was traveling by car with Santini to his building - the Santini offered them both "a bottle of water, to stay well hydrated in that hot weather". I bet it was drugged with a bit more concentrated doze of EP1. No doubts. And it may explain why Kate was acting so exciting, once of a sudden, to dress and pose in slutty clothes, and even agreed to suck a cock on camera, for Luke's joy ofc. Because she was drugged, and we know it.
So. How many explanations like that have we seen elsewhere in the game? Like - for Courney. She was definitely not "slightly drugged" all the time when we see he in scenes. She's like high and addicted to Luke's dick since day1 of her appearing in the game. Why so? No explanations. Ant that's example of flat character. Because we don't know why she acting that strange. Seducing Luke in Kate's bathroom. Seducing Luke on the beach. Like she is a dumb bimbo. But - she used to be a model, a famous one, even rich, and what signs of that personality do we see in the game? Except just few words in dialogs. Not even a single factual example to prove or demonstrate that side of Courtney. Almost nobody recognized that "famous ex-model", while she's still looking as a well shaped milf.
The other same example - is Rebecca. It's the matter of tastes, but i say she is ugly. No tits. No body. No ass. And her face - like a beaver faced a truck on a highway. But ok, somebody likes her. And she's an interesting character. At least - she should be. What do we know about her? That she changed significantly after she started to go in for sports. Not so long ago, but enough that good changes should show the significant presence. And - does she looks sporty? She's just skinny teen, without any benefits of better shapes because of sports. If only she's going for ping-pong or chess, or idk what sport makes her so invisibly better, that i can't see any attractive signs of fitness benefits on her body. Ok, if it's just fuck up with the model - does she have any benefits from her sport activity during the story? Not even close. So - why to tell us that fact of he biography, and show no signs of consequences of it during gameplay.
And that's just a few examples... while if one was attentive - he'd easily find a ton of such fuck ups in the game. And they are not going to be improved in next updates, because the author making a story in every new update, like he forget every single detail of his own characters that were mentioned in past scenes. I was waiting when it will start to play its role, but it seems like it was just a fillers to increse the number of letters for changelogs, about how MANY letters of new content were added, while they still means nothing and leads to nowhere. That's a bad storytelling.
BigSexy57
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Ok. In your "different game" tell me - what's the motivation of main female character - Kate? She arived in a new city, to build the new life. She's having a job, to make interviews, for now - by web-cam, to hire workers that fits to the needs of her clients. And - is she doing good? Nope, she's close to fiasco. Because before the scene with webcam she was told that if she'll fail to hire that folks - she'll be fired, or something. Like she's on the edge already, to be in trouble or loose a job... So - she made one interview... and - what? She's hanging around, doing nothing, fucking and sucking whoever around, but - what do she eat? How she earn her money? Ok, Luke is working. But what about her career. Do she have any personal aims, plans, ambitions? Or she is just a fucktoy in every scene, who is hot, just because she's having a boyfriend who is watching her cheating him and excites from that. In every single scene. All the same. 110% ntr, and - nothing else happens in her world. What a character... I hope nobody's brain get hurt, while inventing such "
The Water Bearer
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As said, the VN started off well. Even though there was no real story or goals for the characters. It was setup ok to build on. What we got was nothing !
What do we know about the characters ?
Their likes and dislikes, they have no personality, other than their sexual desires. Thats because the dev doesn't know how to write.
If your main characters have no purpose, goals or motivation to accomplish something, then you have no story. What we've got is not even a pointless fuckfest, as we barely have any fucking. Dev said that it would be twelve chapters in total. We are on chapter eight, so we have fuck all left to experience a fuckfest either way. We literally got the worst of both outcomes for story and sex.
What do we know about the characters ?
Their likes and dislikes, they have no personality, other than their sexual desires. Thats because the dev doesn't know how to write.
If your main characters have no purpose, goals or motivation to accomplish something, then you have no story. What we've got is not even a pointless fuckfest, as we barely have any fucking. Dev said that it would be twelve chapters in total. We are on chapter eight, so we have fuck all left to experience a fuckfest either way. We literally got the worst of both outcomes for story and sex.
nonotme101
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But this is
still the hottest innocent looking dirty girl everholy shit, look at that huge block of text, its like the ice age happened in 3 minutes & instantly froze everything.
i'm not even going to try read that !!
formatting Brah, Formatting.
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Dessolos
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Which is why I refer to him as the East Block Troll and ignored him not just im not gonna read it annoying to scroll past
BigSexy57
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Well, yes. She is pretty. Until she starting to "smile"...
I'm getting scared from that sight. ^_^
MIkedante
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BigSexy57
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Anything on earth better than Jill Royce stone face, that's 1st.
And 2nd, am not immortal, so i am not following those porn games - like "being a dick" that updating once in a century, by adding 1 boring default sex scene to each of few chars per update. Not my cup of tea.
Disco Hammered and Chill?
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You missed it sorry, try again next time.
BigSexy57
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Don't say such an unholy word in the temple of Waiters For Delays Announces. ^_^
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find your own updates, links are posted in the OP (click once, scroll. ong i need a nap because that was so hard)
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PGU
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Female protagonist tag but she basically can't do anything unless you tell her as the dude. Meanwhile Luke can bang whoever he wants while he's not with Kathryn. This is a male protagonist game, when you play as Luke you have full freedom, you don't bother asking Kathryn permission AND you tell Kathryn what she can and cannot do. Harem relationship dynamic, but not a harem game. Reminds me of the "male fantasy" meme, except more like "controlling manipulative heartless male fantasy". I played it pretty far in, can Kathryn return the NTR favor later and bang someone without Luke's involvement what-so-ever?
bro spare me the male power fantasy talk when your goal is femprotag-ntr. It's a valid critique in a vacuum, but not when your goal is an equally silly power asymmetry.
And yes, very obviously with Pat's date coming up the writing's on the wall. Not to mention the whole flashback was chock full of the kind of stuff you like.